please advice me

[bigtitscarlett]

main points while writing story featuring busty women

 

[PegMeKatePlease]

main points while writing story featuring busty women

I don't write, but know what I like to read. So with that in mind:

Are we talking big, huge or freakishly large?
Nipples. Small, maybe inverted? Or big with matching aureole? And when erect from excitement - hard nubs that invite lips and tongue or protruding?

Firm? They sit high and proud? A mature woman, a little sag but when wrapped around a guys cock who cares?

They get tied up a lot? If so, just a couple of turns of rope giving the impression of a bra?

When in the doggy position, a lot of movement when the busty woman's ass is getting piledrived by her partner?

Surrounded by a bunch of guys in a Bukkake session, do they look great all glazed in cum?

Just some random thoughts. Hope it helped.

 

[GiggLeGasm]

main points about:
the woman?
the sex?
the initial view of her curves?

what is it that made you decide to write about a busty woman? Is there something that already makes her attractive to other characters in the story?

 

[oggbashan]

main points while writing story featuring busty women

First point: Write complete sentences including a verb.

Second point: Use punctuation.

Third point: Start a sentence with a capital letter.

Busty women come later, after you have learned to write.

 

[bailadora]

When I read, it's not about looks, it's about character. Write in such a way that I give a damn about what's happening to him or her, and want to continue reading.

 

[Stevebaker686]

The setting and lead in are important to me. If she is having sex, what started it? Who touched whom first? Is she enjoying it? What does she do to signal she enjoys it? She must smile. Too much porn is with girls that don't smile or enjoy it. Let us know when you've submitted it!

 

[Hypoxia]

As mentioned: First, learn to write. Second, think of people as people, not anatomy. Third, research women's lives. Fourth, grow up. Fifth... whatever.

 

[GforGraham]

main points while writing story featuring busty women

You could try some English lessons.

 

[EquinoxRising]

First point: Write complete sentences including a verb.

Second point: Use punctuation.

Third point: Start a sentence with a capital letter.

Busty women come later, after you have learned to write.

Brilliant!

 

[Hard_Rom]

This is a site for literary stuff. Proper grammar and spelling will get you further than erotic content. If you are male! The shortage of fems means that much is forgiven from them. But there are still quite high expectations in grammar and spelling for all.

You definitely should try to think from a women's POV at times. If you are writing for a particular person ensure you are not exceeding their limits.

Very large breasts are affected greatly by gravity. Pear shaped and sized breasts may be perky and stand out but melon sized will dragged down by the awful force of gravity. In doggy position, they will hang down dramatically.

There is a thread about how women like their breasts treated. Not all like to be suspend in the air very painfully by their tits and some may become bored if all you do is just caress them lovingly. Maybe something halfway.

I have yet to meet a busty girl, who does not like a titty fuck.

If writing for a general audience, go the middle way. Not too rough but give the breasts some degree of manhandling.

 

[RacyRaconteur]

Sure...I'll "advice" you.

"Main point" 1: Sit down in a nice comfortable chair.

"Main point" 2: Open your laptop and your Word Processor.

"Main point" 3: Vomit all the drivel your inspired little untrained fingers can muster.

"Main point" 4: Make sure you use the words "heaving titties" at least thirty times.

"Main point" 5: Upload and submit.

"Main point" 6: Rake in the dumbstruck admirers.

"Main point" 7: Pay particular attention to the readers who lavish you with praise despite your inept prose, style, or syntax. These will usually be men and will help you master your craft with zero ulterior motives.

"Main point" 8: Rinse and repeat.

Happy writing.

 

[Eilan]

"Main point" 7: Make sure you pay particular attention to the readers who lavish you with praise despite your inept prose, style, or syntax. These will usually be men and will usually help you with your craft with zero ulterior motives.

You mean like in this thread?

 

[RacyRaconteur]

You mean like in this thread?

It's certainly a good start, but I think our esteemed OP could garner at least four or five more admirers by morning.

 

[tedsbeds]

main points while writing story featuring busty women

Punctuation, grammar and spelling are all important.

"please advice me" should be "Please advise me."
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[Weird Harold]

So true. There is a reason advise and advice are spelled (and pronounced) differently. However, they aren't alone in confusing people:

http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/errors.html#errors

The OP and many other would-be authors should bookmark and study that site.