Gangbang story

[Sailorvenes]

So I had an idea for a story. A girl wants to join the football team for school. Season has already started though so there is no room for extra players. However she wants to be on the team so bad that she sucks the 5 coaches cocks in a blowbang. The coaches then come to an agreement that she can dress and be on the team, but only if she is the teams fucktoy. She agrees and the next day she goes into the locker room and tells all the guys what is going on. She then does a striptease and is fucked in all holes by all 60 guys.

I have a girl I want to base this on but having hard time describing her. If someone can message me I'll send you a couple pics (nonnude) of her and could you help me describe her face and body?

Also do you guys think this is too ambitious and should I decrease number of guys?

 

[LostBabygirl3489]

That sounds like a hot story, you should do it. I'd love to read it.

 

[jonyoungau]

yeah hot story, i'd give the photo a shot. though i'd add a bit to the story idea also

 

[MiddleAgedMan]

The story has got potential, but as mentioned above, you might want to expand a bit on it. That setting has the potential to be a lot more than just two sex secenes in a row, so to speak.
And 60 is probably a bit high if you are aiming for a shred of realism; it takes a leap of imaination to see her decide to offer herself up to 60 guys all of a sudden. You might want to flesh it out a little and have her approach fewer at first and then add to the number as she gathers her courage. If you throw in a section or two about the cheerleaders wanting in on the fun you are set for a story series before you know it... Maybe some spectators and fans happen to drop by for an autograph and get sucked in to the action? (Bad pun, I know... Sorry)
And back to the realism part: Is she a girl trying to get into a mixed team, or is she trying out for cheerleader? If you are thinking a mixed team (if that exists), why not have her precipitate an orgy in the showers between the players as well, the sexual tension must be through the roof already...

 

[Sailorvenes]

The story has got potential, but as mentioned above, you might want to expand a bit on it. That setting has the potential to be a lot more than just two sex secenes in a row, so to speak.
And 60 is probably a bit high if you are aiming for a shred of realism; it takes a leap of imaination to see her decide to offer herself up to 60 guys all of a sudden. You might want to flesh it out a little and have her approach fewer at first and then add to the number as she gathers her courage. If you throw in a section or two about the cheerleaders wanting in on the fun you are set for a story series before you know it... Maybe some spectators and fans happen to drop by for an autograph and get sucked in to the action? (Bad pun, I know... Sorry)
And back to the realism part: Is she a girl trying to get into a mixed team, or is she trying out for cheerleader? If you are thinking a mixed team (if that exists), why not have her precipitate an orgy in the showers between the players as well, the sexual tension must be through the roof already...

ITs not a mixed team per say, but girls are allowed on the team. And ya I'm going to take that
Advice to heart

 

[EquinoxRising]

I have a girl I want to base this on but having hard time describing her. If someone can message me I'll send you a couple pics (nonnude) of her and could you help me describe her face and body?

Think she'd appreciate you plastering her pics all over the Net? Are you the boyfriend breaking her trust? The male "bff" breaking the trust? Just some creep-o who obtained her pics only Goddess knows how?

 

[EquinoxRising]

P.S.
I've gone through your post history since your name was familiar to me. Would this pic be one of the ones you've posted in SI, Fetish, and the PG in the past?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Real life can be random.
Fiction has to make sense.

This story really doesn't pass muster I'm sorry. The number of girls who want to join the football team is a fairly limited number to begin with. It's not impossible mind you just not "normal". Which in and of itself is not a reason not to write a story. We write about the extraordinary for that very reason.

A girl who DID want to join the football team would need motive. Presumably she actually likes Football. Females like that again do exist even if they are rare. These however as a general rule would probably be strong willed proud women. I can't imagine Ronda Rhousy agreeing to suck dick so she could be a UFC ring girl instead of in the ring kicking ass. So why would a girl who had the desire (and one presumes the skill set) to join a football team agree to be a fuck toy?

If you can't post her pics just go find some celeb she looks sorta like and then tell us the major differences.

At this point we need to either know what it is about her personality that lands her in this scenario (which she seems fairly happy with) or what the circumstances are that forces her hand.

Okay here's what I would fix to keep the basics of this.

This girl, henceforth Sarah, wants to go to a (insert prestigious) college. She has the grades but you still need extaciricular activities. She tried out for various teams and the such and just couldn't make any of them work. However the football team is going co-ed this year. She wants in.

The team is already full and/or she fails the try outs. However the football team and it's coaches are all male and she's seen them leering at her in the past. From there your set up takes over. She agrees to be the team bike. They in turn let her own the team and even find ways to protect her. She gets to play but only in games where they can spare a player effectively or hell she blows a doctor who gives her some excuse they can drag out for the whole year without actually kicking her off the team.

 

[Hypoxia]

One little problem. If she is a STUDENT on a TEAM then she is under the authority of the coaches -- who will all get fired when the secret is revealed. Said coaches would have to be NUTZ to accept her. No, if she's the team bike, fucking / sucking horny coaches and dozens of studly young jocks, the secret is not secure. Someone will blab. Heads will roll.

Easy cure: she's not a student at that college, or at least she's not officially on the team. I'm not sure how you'd work that. Other easy cure: dispense with reality. In fact, take it One Step Beyond. Whenever anyone of higher academic authority discovers her game, she does them too, any gender or age. Yes, the fun is contagious.

 

[Sean Renaud]

One little problem. If she is a STUDENT on a TEAM then she is under the authority of the coaches -- who will all get fired when the secret is revealed. Said coaches would have to be NUTZ to accept her. No, if she's the team bike, fucking / sucking horny coaches and dozens of studly young jocks, the secret is not secure. Someone will blab. Heads will roll.

Easy cure: she's not a student at that college, or at least she's not officially on the team. I'm not sure how you'd work that. Other easy cure: dispense with reality. In fact, take it One Step Beyond. Whenever anyone of higher academic authority discovers her game, she does them too, any gender or age. Yes, the fun is contagious.

Given the stories that ARE coming out of colleges I have to say nope. These coaches don't have to be nuts. They just need to be American. Lets for a moment pretend that those various cases we keep hearing from women about frats that we can't prove are mostly made up. We have an actual coach a few years back who was raping little boys and it was covered up for years and years I just forget his name but it was a huge deal from a major school and his underlings kept getting moved around which heavily suggests that people knew, were dealt with and got away with it.

I wish you were right but the evidence suggests if this was a school with a good rep the football team might be nigh untouchable.

 

[atariblue]

We have an actual coach a few years back who was raping little boys and it was covered up for years and years I just forget his name but it was a huge deal from a major school and his underlings kept getting moved around which heavily suggests that people knew, were dealt with and got away with it.

You're talking about Jerry Sandusky and Penn State.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You're talking about Jerry Sandusky and Penn State.

Thank you. I kept hear Sandusky on my tongue but for whatever reason I couldn't quite get the rest of it together. But seriously THAT guy got away with it for YEARS and years. The school can claim people didn't know all they want and I don't buy it. I think people knew and the Penn State football team was something so important to the locals emotionally and possibly economically that people who knew turned a blind eye and or were dealt with and a lot of other people simply didn't want to know.

 

[FantasisingMale]

I think it would be more believable if she was already in an all female netball team, for example, and the coach's dropped her. She could plead with them and say how much it means to her, break down into tears, beg them and say she will do anything.

They could get her in for individual training, dressed in her tiny pleated skirt where the opportunity for them putting her in sexual positions could work.

Then that might lead into the eventual gang bang with the coaches as she becomes more and more willing to please.

 

[emap]

I can't believe I am going to say this, Sean is right. Don't worry it will never happen again.

College sports is huge for the school so they do and will do everything and anything possible, no matter what happens when it comes out, to keep the team and staff there playing. So it is quite possible for the team to have women in the locker room after the game giving out celebration fucks and blowjobs. Not likely since reporters are all over for about an hour after every game.

Once the reporters leave on the other hand. Course the players have their pick of sorority girls, along with any other woman going to college, many are there to find a husband, debatable on be his housewife or hire a nanny.

There is even a point, and you thought I was just rambling. Many of the college coaches are married, but not all and most men wouldn't mind a mistress. So you can have a woman who wants to be around the team giving herself to the coaches as above. The why of that however is variable.

Wanting on the team is actually bullshit, if a woman wants to be on the football team and can do it, she's on. There are no regulations about not allowing a woman playing football. There was a high school girl who was the kicker for her schools varsity team. I don't remember what she did after though I don't think it was play in college. Since that is off the table, there are two, she has a thing for older men and the coaches being married means no pressure to marry them or anything, just the sex. Alternately she is a reporter, for the school or professionally and is doing the coaches to get better access to the team.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm just marking this. I may die before emap says I'm right again and if so I want my grand kids to visit this page and enshrine it.

I'd be a little curious what the rules are for women on high school and college campuses for sports. I mean just because there is no written rule against something doesn't always mean that there isn't a "rule" against it.

Worse at the college level I could quite easily believe that there are sports teams who (as if being on the team didn't get you laid already) that hook you up to get you to that team. The NCAA is HUGE money. If you think teams aren't doing what they can to get better players (without offering them money as that would be illegal. . .sorry mind wandered to a plot bunny about cash or ass everybody pays) then you're kinda niave.

 

[emap]

As far as I know the rules are the same for a woman as they are for the guys. namely they all have to get dressed in uniform under supervision, as in the coach is in the locker room with them. Granted a woman on the football team would add things, like she gets dressed in the coach's office or they set up a curtain over her assigned locker. Alternately she gets dressed with the cheerleaders and then escorted to the team by the cheer coach.

You really should watch more TV and movies, this is mentioned in some of them. Things like beautiful women that drape themselves all over the next hot prospect in football, or basketball. Supposedly they are students, which is entirely possible, many would do all sorts of things to get half a credit or better grades.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Well I meant "rules" as in you can't be president if you aren't a married Christian.

I watch lots of movies! Just not sports ones.

 

[lovecraft68]

. She then does a striptease and is fucked in all holes by all 60 guys.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

Easy cure: she's not a student at that college, or at least she's not officially on the team.

Our university has a swim team, tennis team, golf team, track team, which are all coed. Let's say a starter got injured and they need a warm body. She needs the extra curriculars, so she persuades the coach to let her on. The team has other ideas...