Story Idea: Beware the Spirit of the Lake

[Nephlim14]

A young hermit with the power to transform into the elements, resides by the lake on his land. He spends his time punishing those who would intrude upon his land, by robbing them of their chastity. This routine (and story) begins in Prehistoric Times with a group of cavemen/women. Then in China with three young girls, and a young Imperial soldier. Then in Greece, with two boys, and a girl. The story then concludes in current time, when some coeds and their boyfriend decide to skinny dip at his lake, and meet the same fate as the others.

Possible Plot Tags: Historical, Shifter, Fisherman, Elemental, Non-Consent, Virgin, Defloration, Ravishment

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[MyRubiLips]

Just remember, those boys and girls must be eighteen or older.

 

[Strangebuddy]

Question. You say that the story concludes in modern time. Now, I figured you meant that it would just lead up to the present...but what if something happens this time? Maybe it bites off more than it can chew.

Otherwise, I think it would be interesting to do it like a horror dig. Where the characters start uncovering the spirit's past or having past events forced into their heads before they are picked off.

 

[Nephlim14]

Question. You say that the story concludes in modern time. Now, I figured you meant that it would just lead up to the present...but what if something happens this time? Maybe it bites off more than it can chew.

Otherwise, I think it would be interesting to do it like a horror dig. Where the characters start uncovering the spirit's past or having past events forced into their heads before they are picked off.

1.When I said it concludes, I meant that the group would be his latest victims, but now that you mention it, he could end up leaving his island of solitude to travel the world or something.
2. I wouldn't use horror, he's mischievous not evil. And while the group does discover his past, it doesn't stop him
3. And I forgot to add that the hermit does this to all his victims to feed on the psychic energies they generate during sex. He isn't dependent on the energies, and he lets the people go when he's done with them.