Siblings team up to seduce stepsister

[Strangebuddy]

This is based on an idea I once had about a brother and sister who have the same taste in women and often team up so at least one (though preferably both) gets laid.

Essentially, their dad gets married and his new wife brings her daughter with her. The siblings warm up to her right away and barely get through the reception without making an overt pass at her. The siblings don't see anything inherently wrong with what they're doing though they try to keep it on low, so their dad can enjoy his honeymoon.

I figured it could go several ways with a big division being whether the kids (18 or 19) go along on the honeymoon or stay at home without any supervision and another being whether their stepsister feels the relationship is still taboo or is just inappropriate.

1. For the first time, the brother and sister start fighting each other's efforts and don't want to share or be left out. It could end with their stepsister getting fed up and convincing them to either join her in a three way or with them getting so steamed that they end up breaking their vow to never fuck each other and hate-fuck until it's out of their system

2. Stepsister realizes what they're doing early on and instead of immediately being disgusted, tries to see how far they're willing to go, either as a lark or because she has a brother sister fetish.

3. Stepsister is seduced by them and they have a tender session with the three of them deciding to make a relationship out of it. Then one day they are sat down and their parents reveal that their stepsister is actually their half-sister. Turns out the siblings dad and mom had a three way with the stepsister's mom after she had a fight with her husband. Nobody thought to check until recently.

4. Similar to 2, the stepsister sees the two of them as possible outlet for her kinks (I figured it would be funny if all of her ideas on sex came from reading erotica) and agrees to sleep with them if they indulge her. Which leads to the three of them having increasingly more wild sexcapades while keeping it a secret from their parents.

 

[jonyoungau]

This is based on an idea I once had about a brother and sister who have the same taste in women and often team up so at least one (though preferably both) gets laid.

Essentially, their dad gets married and his new wife brings her daughter with her. The siblings warm up to her right away and barely get through the reception without making an overt pass at her. The siblings don't see anything inherently wrong with what they're doing though they try to keep it on low, so their dad can enjoy his honeymoon.

I figured it could go several ways with a big division being whether the kids (18 or 19) go along on the honeymoon or stay at home without any supervision and another being whether their stepsister feels the relationship is still taboo or is just inappropriate.

1. For the first time, the brother and sister start fighting each other's efforts and don't want to share or be left out. It could end with their stepsister getting fed up and convincing them to either join her in a three way or with them getting so steamed that they end up breaking their vow to never fuck each other and hate-fuck until it's out of their system

2. Stepsister realizes what they're doing early on and instead of immediately being disgusted, tries to see how far they're willing to go, either as a lark or because she has a brother sister fetish.

3. Stepsister is seduced by them and they have a tender session with the three of them deciding to make a relationship out of it. Then one day they are sat down and their parents reveal that their stepsister is actually their half-sister. Turns out the siblings dad and mom had a three way with the stepsister's mom after she had a fight with her husband. Nobody thought to check until recently.

4. Similar to 2, the stepsister sees the two of them as possible outlet for her kinks (I figured it would be funny if all of her ideas on sex came from reading erotica) and agrees to sleep with them if they indulge her. Which leads to the three of them having increasingly more wild sexcapades while keeping it a secret from their parents.

4 i would go with the kinkiness and secrecy trying to keep it hidden would nake it way more hotter

 

[lovecraft68]

I'd go with four as well.

Anytime I look at an idea like this that involves three people, my sticking point is always POV. I have a hard time determining whose voice should tell it. Obviously with this I think some should come from the step sister's POV, and then oen of the siblings, but which one?

This issue has stopped me from writing several group stories as it ends up aggravating me to where I give up.

 

[jaF0]

Obviously with this I think some should come from the step sister's POV, and then oen of the siblings, but which one?

Well, there is always the option to do a story in three segments, one from each of their views. Quite a few movies have done that in one way or another.

 

[lovecraft68]

Well, there is always the option to do a story in three segments, one from each of their views. Quite a few movies have done that in one way or another.

Sure, that can work. But we're all different as writers and somethings just don't work for some. I've done spilts between two characters, but three would be a lot, at least in a short story. I've done four character POV's, but that was in a 240k BDSM novel.

I'm not saying no one should do it, I'm just pointing out what seems to be a flaw in my pwn writing.

 

[Tasha7]

This is based on an idea I once had about a brother and sister who have the same taste in women and often team up so at least one (though preferably both) gets laid.

Essentially, their dad gets married and his new wife brings her daughter with her. The siblings warm up to her right away and barely get through the reception without making an overt pass at her. The siblings don't see anything inherently wrong with what they're doing though they try to keep it on low, so their dad can enjoy his honeymoon.

I figured it could go several ways with a big division being whether the kids (18 or 19) go along on the honeymoon or stay at home without any supervision and another being whether their stepsister feels the relationship is still taboo or is just inappropriate.

1. For the first time, the brother and sister start fighting each other's efforts and don't want to share or be left out. It could end with their stepsister getting fed up and convincing them to either join her in a three way or with them getting so steamed that they end up breaking their vow to never fuck each other and hate-fuck until it's out of their system

2. Stepsister realizes what they're doing early on and instead of immediately being disgusted, tries to see how far they're willing to go, either as a lark or because she has a brother sister fetish.

3. Stepsister is seduced by them and they have a tender session with the three of them deciding to make a relationship out of it. Then one day they are sat down and their parents reveal that their stepsister is actually their half-sister. Turns out the siblings dad and mom had a three way with the stepsister's mom after she had a fight with her husband. Nobody thought to check until recently.

4. Similar to 2, the stepsister sees the two of them as possible outlet for her kinks (I figured it would be funny if all of her ideas on sex came from reading erotica) and agrees to sleep with them if they indulge her. Which leads to the three of them having increasingly more wild sexcapades while keeping it a secret from their parents.

I like 2

 

[Sean Renaud]

That's what standard run of the mill 3rd person omniscience is for. And the reason why the vast majority of stories are written 3rd person because 1st can be tough on the writer and occasionally the reader and 2nd. . .is all but unheard of and generally mimics 3rd any how.

 

[lovecraft68]

That's what standard run of the mill 3rd person omniscience is for. And the reason why the vast majority of stories are written 3rd person because 1st can be tough on the writer and occasionally the reader and 2nd. . .is all but unheard of and generally mimics 3rd any how.

Second makes me feel like the author is trying to hypnotize me.

Third is good, but I always feel a little impersonal. I think first works best for your standard one on one erotica, or even a three way from one person's POV

But with three people and different perspectives the head hopping gets to me. But again I have done it, in fact my Mother/son confessions is written that way because it will feature several mom son couples and no one would no which "I" is which if I go with first.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I like the ease of motion that 3rd provides personally. If I want to have it obvious what so and so is thinking well you cn hear her thoughts now. But to each their own.

 

[jonyoungau]

I'd go with four as well.

Anytime I look at an idea like this that involves three people, my sticking point is always POV. I have a hard time determining whose voice should tell it. Obviously with this I think some should come from the step sister's POV, and then oen of the siblings, but which one?

This issue has stopped me from writing several group stories as it ends up aggravating me to where I give up.

well hope you do you'd write the greatest of ones

 

[keithb1002]

I'd make the stepsister kinda shy and innocent. Maybe where she just lost her mom in a tragic accident and dad quickly married the next woman he could find.