Editor needed for taboo story

[HotLittleVicky]

Hi all, I'd like to find an editor who would be interested in editing my story which was rejected for:

Did I check to make sure everything was spelled correctly?
Was there an underage (under 18 years old) sexual relationship in my story?
Please use periods at the end of sentences.
Please use commas and ending punctuation with the dialogue. See the essay "How to Make Characters Talk" or "How to Punctuate Like a Pro" in our Writer's Resources section if you have further questions

So there's a couple of issues which need ironing out but it is a rather long story, it's around 19,000 words but takes place over several weekends.

The basic premise is 3 friends set out to seduce their respective fathers and involves the usual elements - oral, anal, straight sex, etc.

So if any editors, (I would prefer a female one as this is written from a female perspective and I am female after all ), would be willing to take this on please get in touch.

Thanks for reading.

Vicky x

 

[boomslanger]

Hi all, I'd like to find an editor who would be interested in editing my story which was rejected for:

Did I check to make sure everything was spelled correctly?
Was there an underage (under 18 years old) sexual relationship in my story?
Please use periods at the end of sentences.
Please use commas and ending punctuation with the dialogue. See the essay "How to Make Characters Talk" or "How to Punctuate Like a Pro" in our Writer's Resources section if you have further questions

So there's a couple of issues which need ironing out but it is a rather long story, it's around 19,000 words but takes place over several weekends.

The basic premise is 3 friends set out to seduce their respective fathers and involves the usual elements - oral, anal, straight sex, etc.

So if any editors, (I would prefer a female one as this is written from a female perspective and I am female after all ), would be willing to take this on please get in touch.

Thanks for reading.

Vicky x

ME! ME! ME! I shall edit out every bit of bad thingys and all that is taboo and then we'll show em eh? Those that rejected your story will be very sorry.
Hey hope you are not too down on that issue.If you are send me mail and I promise to make you laugh You must type very very fast eh? Run it thru a MS Word spell checker? well that's all I could suggest. What do I know? I am no writer, I am just a very forgiving reader... why should a story be rejected just because of bad spelling? Folks who find those bad spelling obviously know the meaning of the word those that don't know the spelling well that word is not in their lexicon so the correctly spelled version of said word would still not make a difference.. Like Literotica is a powerhouse publisher! hey I know plenty of cool words like ipso facto,therein etc. and I would represent you pro-Bono well just a peck of the pretty lips on my cheek. Okay, my best wishes to you again..take care, be frikkin aggressive!go girl go! win!!

cheers
boom

 

[HotLittleVicky]

Your enthusiasm is blatantly obvious boomslanger

However, I'd like an editor to help out

I wrote the piece on Word 2010 and the only spelling errors I could find were when it wanted to use American spellings rather than English. Even a grammar check didn't reveal much other than the occasional fragment.

As for the punctuation at the end of *each* sentence I found that a bit silly really.

I think perhaps the real issue here was making my characters talk and I have a feeling that's where I need the most help.

So if any editors would like to help I'd be happy to hear from them.

 

[Todger65]

You need to set up PM's so you can be contacted off line to discuss further

Todger


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[HotLittleVicky]

Thanks Todger, I assumed they were switched on. Now I've turned them on so happy days

 

[HotLittleVicky]

Could I just add I didn't turn on my PM's to be pestered. They're on so potential editors can contact me. Any other PM's WILL NOT BE RESPONDED TO AND WILL BE DELETED!

 

[Todger65]

PM sent, over to you
Todger

 

[snifka]

I would be interested but I am not a Literotica editor - by the way I had the same issue no reason given for rejection.

Snifka

 

[HotLittleVicky]

ONCE AGAIN!!!

I did not turn on my PM's to be pestered by lecherous morons begging for cams / phone sex / mail/PM sex or anything they can get!

I turned them on for potential editors to be able to contact me. So when you don't get a reply DO NOT BE SURPRISED, YOUR PRIVATE MESSAGE WAS DELETED.

Anyway as it stands there's a couple of editors I've sent a sample to who seem compatible and I have a feeling it'll be a hard decision to choose between the two

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Your enthusiasm is blatantly obvious boomslanger

However, I'd like an editor to help out

I wrote the piece on Word 2010 and the only spelling errors I could find were when it wanted to use American spellings rather than English. Even a grammar check didn't reveal much other than the occasional fragment.

As for the punctuation at the end of *each* sentence I found that a bit silly really.

I think perhaps the real issue here was making my characters talk and I have a feeling that's where I need the most help.

So if any editors would like to help I'd be happy to hear from them.

do you want it in UK or US spellings? it's quite simple to alter the settings for either on word.

 

[sr71plt]

ONCE AGAIN!!!

I did not turn on my PM's to be pestered by lecherous morons begging for cams / phone sex / mail/PM sex or anything they can get!

I had to laugh at this. The account name you chose indicates otherwise.

 

[Tigersman]

Spellcheck

Your enthusiasm is blatantly obvious boomslanger

However, I'd like an editor to help out

I wrote the piece on Word 2010 and the only spelling errors I could find were when it wanted to use American spellings rather than English. Even a grammar check didn't reveal much other than the occasional fragment.

As for the punctuation at the end of *each* sentence I found that a bit silly really.

I think perhaps the real issue here was making my characters talk and I have a feeling that's where I need the most help.

So if any editors would like to help I'd be happy to hear from them.

All spellcheck does is tell you if the word you used is spelled correctly. It does not tell you if you used the correct word.

As for dialogue, Literotica does not like two different persons having dialogue in the same sentence or same paragraph, much like normal fiction.