holden caulfield's ever-quixotic academic ghost hunt for phonies

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amazed,
as ever,
by the persistence of certain writers voices
under their (various) chosen avatars...

yates is not who his writer is
nor is
smooth.
parrot-y is a role that is played (in part)
as i am sure
jbj, bb, krc, ken and countless...
(and could have said cuntless) others...

ponies with very discernible tricks;
more trick than just troll...
or perhaps
just troll with more frosting layers

there are many voices here
that, though idiosyncratic
and odd and distinct,
read as more directly reflective of their writer...


no criticism, really,
of the phonies...

more an amazement at the persistence
and --- dedication?

...and some small wonderment in their genesis (now - continuing purpose)
in their writer's worlds
 
amazed,
as ever,
by the persistence of certain writers voices
under their (various) chosen avatars...

yates is not who his writer is
nor is
smooth.
parrot-y is a role that is played (in part)
as i am sure
jbj, bb, krc, ken and countless...
(and could have said cuntless) others...

ponies with very discernible tricks;
more trick than just troll...
or perhaps
just troll with more frosting layers

there are many voices here
that, though idiosyncratic
and odd and distinct,
read as more directly reflective of their writer...


no criticism, really,
of the phonies...

more an amazement at the persistence
and --- dedication?

...and some small wonderment in their genesis (now - continuing purpose)
in their writer's worlds

^
like anybody could disguise that schtick...
 
No specialized tongue to lick those particular tootsies pops into submission
Only one, can issue the final bite

Troll flavor, unbearably bitter and sour, carries its own warning

Never know, which one carries the cyanide
Until, they bite themselves

Exterior candy shell, and mysterious center
A confection
 
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like anybody could disguise that schtick...

i've tried, bert...
i've tried

schtick is one thing.

i think what i am so aptly failing to elucidate
is regarding the "action" confection...
the written characters with concocted backstory
and - more often than not -
some tangible object that they are trying to obtain...

trolls, yes, want to stir reaction and rancor...
predators want to secure pix or confidences or even pick-ups...
shape shifters are blurring parts of themselves
(they may perceive as deficient)
in order to present a "more desirable " on-line "me"
(but still a "me")

the phonies
(and i'm beginning to dislike that word as description the more it swirls in my head)
are of eely writers who desire some or all of the things above
but seemingly... for their characters only
and an aching arching attempt to attain an aura of credibility
approaching animated existence...

(poetic pottage meaning that they seem to want these golems to have real life here... )

these phonies are true avatars.
 
Crazy, beautiful, diamonds, in a fractured fairy tale

Why limit yourself, when anything was a possibility, when you are born out of the womb ?

(My Yankee self, cautions. Anything within reason, and the law. My amusement seeking self loves to observe Hannibal the Cannibal, portayed by Mads. Repulsion response toward the human being who became inhuman, in the real meat world. Human heads in someone's real life fridge is horrifying.)
 
No specialized tongue to lick those particular tootsies pops into submission
Only one, can issue the final bite

Troll flavor, unberably bitter and sour, carries its own warning

Never know, which one carries the cyanide
Until, they bite themselves

Exterior candy shell, and mysterious center
A confection

true, so true...

though the pure troll outs itself early and often...

the notes are not as well crafted
or the direct object of derision is illuminated by a well beaten path...

these
performance alts have more varied colours,
contours and folds...

and i'd suspect serve the writer more
intellectually and emotionally
than in any real object gain...
 
i've tried, bert...
i've tried

schtick is one thing.

i think what i am so aptly failing to elucidate
is regarding the "action" confection...
the written characters with concocted backstory
and - more often than not -
some tangible object that they are trying to obtain...

trolls, yes, want to stir reaction and rancor...
predators want to secure pix or confidences or even pick-ups...
shape shifters are blurring parts of themselves
(they may perceive as deficient)
in order to present a "more desirable " on-line "me"
(but still a "me")

the phonies
(and i'm beginning to dislike that word as description the more it swirls in my head)
are of eely writers who desire some or all of the things above
but seemingly... for their characters only
and an aching arching attempt to attain an aura of credibility
approaching animated existence...

(poetic pottage meaning that they seem to want these golems to have real life here... )

these phonies are true avatars.

sometimes the most unbelievable character is the one based on truth.
 
Crazy, beautiful, diamonds, in a fractured fairy tale

Why limit yourself, when anything was a possibility, when you are born out of the womb ?

(My Yankee self, cautions. Anything within reason, and the law. My amusement seeking self loves to observe Hannibal the Cannibal, portayed by Mads. Repulsion response toward the human being who became inhuman, in the real meat world. Human heads in someone's real life fridge is horrifying.)

this.
so this!

again, i'm not criticizing these writers...
just curious of the process
while consuming the oft-off product...
 
ogg...

you are a craftsman and a conundrum and as genuine as they come...
your voices are exercise
but your open appreciation of them
is still the fuller, fuller story...

you share this journey with us...

just as my curiosity seeks the innards and gristle beneath the phonies
 
ogg...

you are a craftsman and a conundrum and as genuine as they come...
your voices are exercise
but your open appreciation of them
is still the fuller, fuller story...

you share this journey with us...

just as my curiosity seeks the innards and gristle beneath the phonies

In the words of William Langland (14th Century) from Piers Plowman, I'm:

A glotoun of wordes
 
The slippery, ghostly one, trails in and out of ectoplasm
Evaporation, but there are traces

Projecting, displaying, in masks, in aspects

...this particular response... (desired)
 
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