Taking shelter from the thunderstorm

[sirhugs]

a mix and match story- but what sort of inappropriate sex?

I imagine a golf course, just because I know some have those little shelters, but could be elsewhere... anyway, two (or more) people who shouldn't be having sex huddle in the shelter to avoid rain & lightning- at least one got wet, so transparent clothing...

 

[atariblue]

Close quarters orgy. I like it.

Vying for elbow room the woman in the soaking wet tee bumps up against one of the guys. "Oh my, is that a golf club in your pants or are you excited to see me?" She purrs.

 

[sirhugs]

knew meaning to "mixed foursome"??

 

[Strangebuddy]

If it's like the golf courses where I live, maybe they would be closer to an actual house. Four female golfers run to a nearby house and start hammering on the backdoor. The owner of the house isn't too fond of the golf course since the players often don't keep out of her backyard...but she's too nice to just leave them out in the rain and invites them inside.

The girls start annoying the homeowner but she still tries to be a good host offering them clothes and a warm shower, though their entitled attitude starts to get on her nerves. When the power goes out, the girls are surprised that the homeowner is still able to run a few of her appliences. She lets it slip that while she doesn't have a generator, she does some have some equipment from when she needs to film outdoor shots.

The girls get curious but the host won't budge. The storm gets worse so the girls start panicking and demand to be allowed into her basement. The host refuses but when a large piece of hail strikes a window hard enough to crack it, she reluctantly lets them down stairs where they discover that the woman is a porn director.

The girls start shrieking with laughter and making jokes at the director's expense. However, when they start insulting her profession for "not really being work." The director coaxes them into performing a scene and showing them how hard the biz can be.

 

[QuidProQuo77]

If it's like the golf courses where I live, maybe they would be closer to an actual house. Four female golfers run to a nearby house and start hammering on the backdoor. The owner of the house isn't too fond of the golf course since the players often don't keep out of her backyard...but she's too nice to just leave them out in the rain and invites them inside.

The girls start annoying the homeowner but she still tries to be a good host offering them clothes and a warm shower, though their entitled attitude starts to get on her nerves. When the power goes out, the girls are surprised that the homeowner is still able to run a few of her appliences. She lets it slip that while she doesn't have a generator, she does some have some equipment from when she needs to film outdoor shots.

The girls get curious but the host won't budge. The storm gets worse so the girls start panicking and demand to be allowed into her basement. The host refuses but when a large piece of hail strikes a window hard enough to crack it, she reluctantly lets them down stairs where they discover that the woman is a porn director.

The girls start shrieking with laughter and making jokes at the director's expense. However, when they start insulting her profession for "not really being work." The director coaxes them into performing a scene and showing them how hard the biz can be.

I like where you're going with this, Strangebuddy. Throw in some humiliation to punish their sense of entitlement...

 

[sirhugs]

I did a story a bit different from my original idea, inspired by the fact that incest index on the story side seems dominated by Mom/son lately, and I'm still a Dad/daughter fan:

A Perfect Thunderstorm

 

[Aella_]

a mix and match story- but what sort of inappropriate sex?

I imagine a golf course, just because I know some have those little shelters, but could be elsewhere... anyway, two (or more) people who shouldn't be having sex huddle in the shelter to avoid rain & lightning- at least one got wet, so transparent clothing...

(from a reader's pov):
I really liked the idea, especially since it could also appeal to a female -as opposed to a strictly male- audience.
But can I also suggest that you browse the Lit archive first? To avoid any similarities?
Because I came across several stories with a similar theme.

EDIT.
When I posted I failed to read your latest post so I kinda misunderstood the situation.
So sorry, I retract my comments.
(not deleting my comments in case you already read them).