Wedding Day Humiliation

[lululuvsblack]

a guy cheats on his fiance right before the wedding. its too late to cancel all the ceremony they've paid for and the guests are already arriving, so instead the fiance turns it into a public punishment/humiliation ceremony.

she makes her could have been hubby wear her wedding lingerie and bridal gown, walk up the aisle in front of all their friends and family and then kneel there and take whatever they want to do to him. soon everyone is cumming and pissing in his face and all over his not-wife's $5000 wedding dress!

 

[lululuvsblack]

a guy cheats on his fiance right before the wedding. its too late to cancel all the ceremony they've paid for and the guests are already arriving, so instead the fiance turns it into a public punishment/humiliation ceremony.

she makes her could have been hubby wear her wedding lingerie and bridal gown, walk up the aisle in front of all their friends and family and then kneel there and take whatever they want to do to him. soon everyone is cumming and pissing in his face and all over his not-wife's $5000 wedding dress!

then as a follow up episode/chapter 2, the guy thinks he's done with the relationship and can move on after his humiliation, but his ex fiance demands they still go on the expensive caribbean honeymoon it's too late to cancel, so she can make the cost back by pimping his sissy ass out tothe local big black men.

 

[Sean Renaud]

What's his motivation here? Sure I disagree with a lot of the people who think that in real life blackmaiing someone into sex woul dbe the hardest thing ever because they all apparently have nothing they give a shit about but it doesn't seem like anybody here has any real leverage.

She can be pissed all she wants but if the money was spent (I've always been taught that traditionally the woman's father would pay for the wedding) that she might stick around for the food. If they both paid then she still probably would, if he paid. . .well it depends on what they ordered. But I don't see any reason why he's going to let anybody do anything to him.

Worse in a scenario like this a good chunk of the people are family. Sure if you're going what I like to call "Porn Heavy" and all it means is that anything goes for this scenario. And you don't question it for the same reasons you don't question why Power Rangers are color coded or how Godzilla gets enough to eat. The author says so, there for it is. Other than that I'm not whipping out my cock in front of my siblings and parents and unless it was a shitty relationship from the get go not in front of my S/O family either. Then another large chunk are friends who either are on the grooms "side" and probably sit this out and the bride's friends are probably going ot be talking her into a jumbo carton of Rocky Road not into a piss party unless that was just there thing to begin with.

I'm not saying this story can't work because. . .because Sharknado 3 comes out in ten days. Clearly anything you want to work can work. I'm saying that Sharknado vs Crococane is going to have fewer hurdles to work your way past.

 

[lululuvsblack]

What's his motivation here? Sure I disagree with a lot of the people who think that in real life blackmaiing someone into sex woul dbe the hardest thing ever because they all apparently have nothing they give a shit about but it doesn't seem like anybody here has any real leverage.

She can be pissed all she wants but if the money was spent (I've always been taught that traditionally the woman's father would pay for the wedding) that she might stick around for the food. If they both paid then she still probably would, if he paid. . .well it depends on what they ordered. But I don't see any reason why he's going to let anybody do anything to him.

Worse in a scenario like this a good chunk of the people are family. Sure if you're going what I like to call "Porn Heavy" and all it means is that anything goes for this scenario. And you don't question it for the same reasons you don't question why Power Rangers are color coded or how Godzilla gets enough to eat. The author says so, there for it is. Other than that I'm not whipping out my cock in front of my siblings and parents and unless it was a shitty relationship from the get go not in front of my S/O family either. Then another large chunk are friends who either are on the grooms "side" and probably sit this out and the bride's friends are probably going ot be talking her into a jumbo carton of Rocky Road not into a piss party unless that was just there thing to begin with.

I'm not saying this story can't work because. . .because Sharknado 3 comes out in ten days. Clearly anything you want to work can work. I'm saying that Sharknado vs Crococane is going to have fewer hurdles to work your way past.

yeah, i never really felt like wild porn fantasies had to be at all based in reality, but i suppose some people need that to get off.

i was kind of imagining that things started smaller and then spiralled a bit out of control, like he agreed to parade in front of the guests wearing the wedding gown because he felt guilty and thought that if he did this for her then it might still lead to a real wedding, the using him as a cumbucket built from there, like maybe her family and friends are already into it.

 

[Sean Renaud]

yeah, i never really felt like wild porn fantasies had to be at all based in reality, but i suppose some people need that to get off.

i was kind of imagining that things started smaller and then spiralled a bit out of control, like he agreed to parade in front of the guests wearing the wedding gown because he felt guilty and thought that if he did this for her then it might still lead to a real wedding, the using him as a cumbucket built from there, like maybe her family and friends are already into it.

I don't need it to get off, I do need a fictional universe that holds to some kind of "logic" like nobody questions say that Superman can fly and shoot lasers. But if Batman shoots someone with a gun there will be goddam riots ya dig?

You might able to swing with him thinking that he can still fix this and whatever he did he does love her enough to try just about anything and then shit gets out of hand. I mean it's still a tad bit unbelievable but you've taken a huge leap here from shit that I can't see how you work with to being able to squint and see how the stars are aligning for you.

I think we need to separate him from his friends and family for whatever reason. Like he's on deployment to Someplace-Istan that for whatever reason is either too expensive or just not really a great place to be American or maybe he just doesn't like his family and doesn't have many personal friends in Someplace-Istan.

 

[lululuvsblack]

I don't need it to get off, I do need a fictional universe that holds to some kind of "logic" like nobody questions say that Superman can fly and shoot lasers. But if Batman shoots someone with a gun there will be goddam riots ya dig?

You might able to swing with him thinking that he can still fix this and whatever he did he does love her enough to try just about anything and then shit gets out of hand. I mean it's still a tad bit unbelievable but you've taken a huge leap here from shit that I can't see how you work with to being able to squint and see how the stars are aligning for you.

I think we need to separate him from his friends and family for whatever reason. Like he's on deployment to Someplace-Istan that for whatever reason is either too expensive or just not really a great place to be American or maybe he just doesn't like his family and doesn't have many personal friends in Someplace-Istan.

i guess it's each to their own, but for me a big part of the turn on of the humiliation of the scene would be for his friends and family to watch what was happening and then decide to join in!

 

[lululuvsblack]

it's just an idea. if somebody else wants to write something inspired by it, they can take it off in whatever direction they like! just saying what i'd like to read.

 

[Strangebuddy]

Bride's heartbroken so her maid of honor, who is her fiance's sister and her best friend and tries to get her to cheer up. It looks like she's doing a good job when the bride suddenly pulls her in tight and gives a sly smile.

An announcement is made that the wedding is going on without the groom. While the guests are confused, they come anyway and when the bride reaches the altar, she tugs the maid of honor over and orders the minister to continue, reminding him that he'll be expected to pay back the money he was paid to perform the ceremony. She then addresses the groom's side of the family and reminds them that her family is paying for everything but there wasn't any kind of arrangement made with the hotel and anyone that doesn't stay to celebrate will be expected to pay for their own room.

The wedding proceeds and then the reception, where toasts are quickly adlibbed and the new couple keeps evading questions over whether they actually got a license or not. The ex-groom and his side (with some exceptions of course) of the family have to watch as his sister is gushed over by his former fiance and is kissed every opportunity and the first dance gets a bit more suggestive than they'd accept.

Now, this concept doesn't seem very fair to the maid of honor but I figured that she would be a mostly willing accomplice in it. She's disgusted by her brother's actions and is even more sickened by her parents who wanted her to get the bride to take her brother back because the bride's family is loaded. She also is the bride's best friend so she doesn't have a problem putting on an act. She only objects when her friend starts becoming more suggestive as she feels her friend is making fun of her bisexuality.


The story could just end after the reception or continue onto the honeymoon where some sexual tension builds up between the two of them and they have to decide what to do with it and whether they should actually try to build up a real romantic relationship.

 

[lululuvsblack]

Bride's heartbroken so her maid of honor, who is her fiance's sister and her best friend and tries to get her to cheer up. It looks like she's doing a good job when the bride suddenly pulls her in tight and gives a sly smile.

An announcement is made that the wedding is going on without the groom. While the guests are confused, they come anyway and when the bride reaches the altar, she tugs the maid of honor over and orders the minister to continue, reminding him that he'll be expected to pay back the money he was paid to perform the ceremony. She then addresses the groom's side of the family and reminds them that her family is paying for everything but there wasn't any kind of arrangement made with the hotel and anyone that doesn't stay to celebrate will be expected to pay for their own room.

The wedding proceeds and then the reception, where toasts are quickly adlibbed and the new couple keeps evading questions over whether they actually got a license or not. The ex-groom and his side (with some exceptions of course) of the family have to watch as his sister is gushed over by his former fiance and is kissed every opportunity and the first dance gets a bit more suggestive than they'd accept.

Now, this concept doesn't seem very fair to the maid of honor but I figured that she would be a mostly willing accomplice in it. She's disgusted by her brother's actions and is even more sickened by her parents who wanted her to get the bride to take her brother back because the bride's family is loaded. She also is the bride's best friend so she doesn't have a problem putting on an act. She only objects when her friend starts becoming more suggestive as she feels her friend is making fun of her bisexuality.


The story could just end after the reception or continue onto the honeymoon where some sexual tension builds up between the two of them and they have to decide what to do with it and whether they should actually try to build up a real romantic relationship.

that wouldn't be a bad story, but it also wouldn't be by any stretch of the imagination a take on the story idea i suggested above. it's so different that it's clearly its own idea that only overlaps on the fact that it happens at a wedding! maybe you should write your story, but i don't think that if i have a go at writing a version of this it would include any of these elements as they appear to belong in a different story entirely.

 

[MatthewVett]

I feel like it'd make more sense if she humiliates the groom by whoring herself out all ceremony, instead. Like others have said, why would the groom go through with his own humiliation? What leverage would the bride have?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Not that I disagree with you Matt but the problem there is that it's an entirely different story. I like the angle of the groom thinking there is still time and a way to fix this. I'm still not buying his friends and family joining in. At worst maybe they don't leave because he asks them not to. His bride won't take him back if they leave. Any farther and. . .well it goes back to Superman can fly and shoot lasers, tornados can form with sharks but Batman cannot shoot people.