How far can I go?

[49greg]

I was typing away last night and this morning, at a full on dominant wife story. Started out innocent enough, but the wife started getting really nasty, kinda reminded me of my mom. Totally enthralled her husband and wrapped him up discounting any of his desires. OK, yes, could be letting out some angst from childhood and my mom.

Anyway I came to a sudden halt a few minutes ago. I realized that this woman is ready to totally enslave and in the end she could be ready to kill him when she's used him up or when she's squeezed him dry of all his inherited land and money. Oh yeah, channeling my mom here.

So, can we murder a character. The murderess gets no sexual thrill. It's just the disposal of an inconvenient burden she has no more use for, and even better he's been so conditioned he's going to crawl over and position his throat over the basement drain.

That doesn't sound like erotica though. But I have been reading some of the total enslavement stories of couples or singles who give themselves to someone else and are used until they aren't really human, just receptacles. I thought to myself that they might as well be dead, there's no hope for them. I guess that's what got me going in this direction.

So what are the murder rules?

 

[Handley_Page]

If it borders on 'snuff' it's not on.
However, if she has a nasty car accident. . . .

 

[lovecraft68]

As long as shr does not kill him during or just after sex and as long as she does not become sexually aroused while killing him then it is not snuff and the murder will fall within the rules.

But be prepared to take a flaming from the trolls because in Lw its onlu okay if its a woman being hurt or killed

 

[49greg]

Thanks,

That's what I was hoping, no sex involved in the killing, just disposal.

Yeah, I was imagining the trolls all along.

But the more I think about it, the more I'm not inclined to go that route. I started it as a sort of rebellion against the stories that end with no hope for the hubbys in those situation, I was going to take it way past anything else, just completely far past anything remotely sexy.

But the last few hours I've been thinking that it is just too far out for me. I've written some pretty graphic violence in a couple of stories, but this it too much. It's something like a Japanese graphic horror film (edited, Not a graphic film, but a film with graphic horror, as in your mind can't comprehend it.) No, not mothra or godzilla, but the totally creepy weird horror stuff that makes you wonder why Netfilx or TCM has them, and why did you just sit and watch it through.

No, I think I'll just keep this one in the dead file.

 

[SikFuk]

...No, I think I'll just keep this one in the dead file.

What if one of the characters suddenly finds Jesus? That's always a fun way to change directions in a story.

 

[49greg]

What if one of the characters suddenly finds Jesus? That's always a fun way to change directions in a story.

Yeah, there is something to that. I can just imagine the comments. Although I could make it into a satire of a morality play.

But no, I've moved on for the time being. I'll let it lie for a while.

 

[sr71plt]

He could meet Jesus in a brothel.

 

[SikFuk]

Or see Jesus in the cum stain on the sheets.

 

[FantasyXY]

Don't Do It. Don't Write That Story

I was typing away last night and this morning, at a full on dominant wife story. Started out innocent enough, but the wife started getting really nasty, kinda reminded me of my mom. Totally enthralled her husband and wrapped him up discounting any of his desires. OK, yes, could be letting out some angst from childhood and my mom.

Anyway I came to a sudden halt a few minutes ago. I realized that this woman is ready to totally enslave and in the end she could be ready to kill him when she's used him up or when she's squeezed him dry of all his inherited land and money. Oh yeah, channeling my mom here.

So, can we murder a character. The murderess gets no sexual thrill. It's just the disposal of an inconvenient burden she has no more use for, and even better he's been so conditioned he's going to crawl over and position his throat over the basement drain.

That doesn't sound like erotica though. But I have been reading some of the total enslavement stories of couples or singles who give themselves to someone else and are used until they aren't really human, just receptacles. I thought to myself that they might as well be dead, there's no hope for them. I guess that's what got me going in this direction.

So what are the murder rules?

Your mom sounds a bit like my first wife, who was an honest to goodness fully diagnosed psychopath. She became dangerous at the typical break point (late 20s early 30s), and the fucking judicial system in the country has left her free to run loose and ruin as many lives as she can.

Her mother was no better, and actually murdered my first wife's step father. The courts also saw fit to let her run free as well, although I am not sure she was a psychopath. My take is the mother was just greedy and mean. She set the whole murder up in a way that she could claim self defense, and apparently it worked. A chance meeting with my ex's real father, who supposedly had died from a heart attack, confirmed that my ex's mother also tried to kill him using the same setup. Somehow I don't think my ex planned on me finding out her real father was still alive or that I would ever talk to him.

When I saw my ex trying to set me up with the same sort of ruse her mother used, I quickly wised up and slipped away in the middle of the night. Then I got as far away as I could from the entire fucked up family. I literally left penniless with the clothes on my back. After I was able to scrape some money together, I didn't buy better food, or move out of my rat infested crap shack. I bought a gun, got a concealed carry permit, and carried for years.

From my experience I'd say that in real life these sort of people actually do get a sort of sexual high from killing and/or causing misery. This is not normal. These people are truly mentally ill, and our society is doing nothing to help them with their illness, or protect the rest of us from their sickness. (Just look at any one of a number of recent mass shootings) Sure, mentally ill men usually get punished for crimes, but mentally ill women generally seem to get a pass. John Q Public beware.

If you are using a real life model in a story like this, you need to be very, very careful. Even if you could stay clear of the snuff story aspect, you will likely deepen the emotional scars from your own past. I started writing the story of my relationship with my first wife thinking it would make for an interesting novel, but abruptly stopped and deleted it when I realized the affect it was having on me.