dad and son mutual masturbation

[atariblue]

father and son blackmailed

Dad and son have to gotten to a point where they don't mind watching porn and masturbating in front of one another. Daughter finds out and threatens to tell mom. What happens next?

 

[centauri4]

Shared attitude?

Hi, I have not made any suggestions recently, but I want to tell you the stories I like most give details of each person's thought process from their perspective. Kind of like reflecting on something they just learned about Dad and Brother, or self-reflection such as, 'I cannot believe they do that together, but, honestly I would join them if invited.' or 'They're guys. They have needs, feelings and urges, I get that. Because I have them too, quite often.'

In my reading of stories on Lit over the years, the stories I most enjoy explore attitudes and feelings, rather than simply setting a scene and going through the "mechanics" of what is happening or what each character does. She grabbed him, then he grabbed her XX, and this made them both hornier; is not as good as "Melissa doubted her own confidence, but she wondered if confiding in her brother first would bring all three of them together for hot masturbation and sexy movie night?" To me, this sort of scene construction is INFINITELY better than any description of someone getting oral or someone else being fingered ever so gently, even if the scene ends in a mind-shattering, soul-quaking climax!

 

[atariblue]

Hi, I have not made any suggestions recently, but I want to tell you the stories I like most give details of each person's thought process from their perspective. Kind of like reflecting on something they just learned about Dad and Brother, or self-reflection such as, 'I cannot believe they do that together, but, honestly I would join them if invited.' or 'They're guys. They have needs, feelings and urges, I get that. Because I have them too, quite often.'

In my reading of stories on Lit over the years, the stories I most enjoy explore attitudes and feelings, rather than simply setting a scene and going through the "mechanics" of what is happening or what each character does. She grabbed him, then he grabbed her XX, and this made them both hornier; is not as good as "Melissa doubted her own confidence, but she wondered if confiding in her brother first would bring all three of them together for hot masturbation and sexy movie night?" To me, this sort of scene construction is INFINITELY better than any description of someone getting oral or someone else being fingered ever so gently, even if the scene ends in a mind-shattering, soul-quaking climax!

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. I agree that the build up can be as sexy and tantalizing as the act itself. The feelings, thoughts, and internal struggles are important to an erotic story, especially an incest one. You have to understand why character A is attracted to character B or why character C would want to sleep with character D.

It makes your characters more believable and you can flesh them out even further. You can also get people to sympathize with the characters. A mom who sleeps with her son can be seen as woman who desires sex and attention instead of just another milf in just another story who craves her son's cock.

I think I'll take my idea and flesh it out with the daughter being timid about what she knows but wanting to get involved.

 

[Nightierub]

Personally I like a good build up or backstory as well as good descriptive action. I wrote several with a fantasy incest theme too but with Mom/son stuff with a lingerie fetish bent.

 

[atariblue]

Mom/son stuff with a lingerie fetish bent.

I do enjoy a story with a lingerie fetish. I've been meaning to write a story where the son does the laundry and finds his mom's panties. He smells them while getting himself off, but he needs more panties so he needs to get her to cum again.

 

[robertreams]

QUOTE: Dad and son have to gotten to a point where they don't mind watching porn and masturbating in front of one another. Daughter finds out and threatens to tell mom. What happens next?

Problem is, in Lit., such a story would have to be entered under GM

 

[atariblue]

QUOTE: Dad and son have to gotten to a point where they don't mind watching porn and masturbating in front of one another. Daughter finds out and threatens to tell mom. What happens next?

Problem is, in Lit., such a story would have to be entered under GM

Not necessarily. There are plenty of father and son stories in Incest/Taboo. This story would have the two stroking off together but never actually touching each other. Daughter would make an appearance and change the scene.