Need an editor for a non-con/bdsm story

[PrincessMoonbeam]

This is my first attempt at writing erotica. I'm not so much worried about grammatical mistakes and spelling errors (although I'm sure there are some) as I am with believability, plot, characters, etc. I'm especially interested in finding someone who has experience with domination as I would like to get input into that aspect. As a person who generally identifies as submissive, I just want to make sure I'm doing the dominant side of things justice.

Any one out there to help a girl out?

Thanks!
MB

 

[TheMalevolence]

This is my first attempt at writing erotica. I'm not so much worried about grammatical mistakes and spelling errors (although I'm sure there are some) as I am with believability, plot, characters, etc. I'm especially interested in finding someone who has experience with domination as I would like to get input into that aspect. As a person who generally identifies as submissive, I just want to make sure I'm doing the dominant side of things justice.

Any one out there to help a girl out?

Thanks!
MB

Providing you're not just using a throwaway account, WELCOME TO THE BOARDS! I'd be happy to edit your story, I have experience in the BDSM community as a (male) Dom. Your PM's are turned off by the way.

But yeah, get back to me and I'd be happy to look over it for yah.