slyc_willie
Captain Crash
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When we, as writers, craft a story, we endeavor to look at the world through the lens of our characters' eyes. Regardless of point of view, whether it be first or second person, third person limited or third person omniscient, we color the narrative based upon whoever is talking. Doing so gives the reader a feel for whichever character is dominating the action.
The story I am currently working on has as the main character a working class anti-hero. He's rude, gruff, blunt and has more than a few character flaws as well as some pretty tragic life experiences. He doesn't care about anyone, much less himself, and is more or less simply waiting to die (but only under the right circumstances). That's a far cry, of course, from myself, but I find the character compelling. He's the sort of person who always says what we want to say to the rude woman in the grocery store checkout line, and always possesses the wit to creatively express an insult in such a way as to truly hammer it home. Basically, he's the human Id in action.
But such a character isn't indicative of how I personally view the world, as much as I would like to sometimes. He has prejudices I don't -- and am glad I don't -- possess. He sees things in simple terms until they become more convoluted, and is able to adapt and still find a way to be right. In the end, though, he's really just a schlep that is only righteous because I create the scenarios that allow him to be so.
In writing from this character's point of view, though, I wonder how many readers will identify with him. How much of my assumption of this character's prejudice is actually echoed among the general populace? He's a hard-working, flawed, uncompromising son of a bitch with both a criminal and military past who, as I describe in the story, has "eschewed the simplicities of racism in favor of a doctrine of equal opportunity derision." In other words, he neither likes nor dislikes anybody until they somehow prove themselves in his eyes. But, while he would not want to admit it, he is governed by prejudices.
I think we writers sometimes get bogged down in the intricacies of our own creations and wind up consumed, for the sake of the story at hand, by the vision of the world we have given our characters. There's a certain sense of catharsis in doing so, but it also brings the possibility of alienation from our readers. I'm reminded of Quentin Tarantino and his reliance upon prejudicial viewpoints in many of his films. Relying on prejudice can certainly give a striking feel to a story, even if the views expressed aren't universal.
I suppose that what I am getting at is this fundamental question: what defines the tone of the story? A) The viewpoints of the characters involved, with whatever frailties and prejudices they may have that try to pull the reader in alongside them, or B) the overall objectionist viewpoint of the outside pair of eyes looking in, with no assumptions of prejudice and a sort of clinical appraisal of what transpires throughout the story?
And which is better? What really grabs the reader? My antihero will probably resound with the blue-collar crowd, but will he find a home in the heart of the professional mindset? Should I even care?
Well, to answer that last question, I can already tell you I don't. I'm going to write my characters however I wish, and damn the critics. But I remain curious as to the reception of a character from readers across different walks of life. I suppose that I, like many writers, simply want to know if I'm good at portraying someone who is something I am not. Being a good writer, after all, is not unlike being a good actor; you have to be able to be convincing even when the material falls outside your comfort zone.
The story I am currently working on has as the main character a working class anti-hero. He's rude, gruff, blunt and has more than a few character flaws as well as some pretty tragic life experiences. He doesn't care about anyone, much less himself, and is more or less simply waiting to die (but only under the right circumstances). That's a far cry, of course, from myself, but I find the character compelling. He's the sort of person who always says what we want to say to the rude woman in the grocery store checkout line, and always possesses the wit to creatively express an insult in such a way as to truly hammer it home. Basically, he's the human Id in action.
But such a character isn't indicative of how I personally view the world, as much as I would like to sometimes. He has prejudices I don't -- and am glad I don't -- possess. He sees things in simple terms until they become more convoluted, and is able to adapt and still find a way to be right. In the end, though, he's really just a schlep that is only righteous because I create the scenarios that allow him to be so.
In writing from this character's point of view, though, I wonder how many readers will identify with him. How much of my assumption of this character's prejudice is actually echoed among the general populace? He's a hard-working, flawed, uncompromising son of a bitch with both a criminal and military past who, as I describe in the story, has "eschewed the simplicities of racism in favor of a doctrine of equal opportunity derision." In other words, he neither likes nor dislikes anybody until they somehow prove themselves in his eyes. But, while he would not want to admit it, he is governed by prejudices.
I think we writers sometimes get bogged down in the intricacies of our own creations and wind up consumed, for the sake of the story at hand, by the vision of the world we have given our characters. There's a certain sense of catharsis in doing so, but it also brings the possibility of alienation from our readers. I'm reminded of Quentin Tarantino and his reliance upon prejudicial viewpoints in many of his films. Relying on prejudice can certainly give a striking feel to a story, even if the views expressed aren't universal.
I suppose that what I am getting at is this fundamental question: what defines the tone of the story? A) The viewpoints of the characters involved, with whatever frailties and prejudices they may have that try to pull the reader in alongside them, or B) the overall objectionist viewpoint of the outside pair of eyes looking in, with no assumptions of prejudice and a sort of clinical appraisal of what transpires throughout the story?
And which is better? What really grabs the reader? My antihero will probably resound with the blue-collar crowd, but will he find a home in the heart of the professional mindset? Should I even care?
Well, to answer that last question, I can already tell you I don't. I'm going to write my characters however I wish, and damn the critics. But I remain curious as to the reception of a character from readers across different walks of life. I suppose that I, like many writers, simply want to know if I'm good at portraying someone who is something I am not. Being a good writer, after all, is not unlike being a good actor; you have to be able to be convincing even when the material falls outside your comfort zone.