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TheMalevolence

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Hey guys! New story idea, GO!

A woman's husband is (secretly) a CIA agent, and, when she follows him to his workplace, a "bank" to bring him something he'd forgotten that morning, she overhears him and one of his superiors talking about a scandalous/morally wrong mission, the knowledge endangers her and she tries to run but, because the locket her husband had given her on their 10th anniversary had been tagged with a GPS in case anybody ever tried to get to the agent through kidnapping his wife, she is eventually tracked down and captured.

The CIA are faced with a problem, what to do with a completely innocent civilian who just happened to hear some incriminating information and knows to much to ever be released? Even the most luxorious of prisons would be a waste of money and would still punish the woman, but , thankfully, the CIA have came across this issue before.

They keep people like the woman in the story in inescapable metal cubicles, but give them the most happy life possible, by keeping them constantly euphoric from sex. I thought of a few different ideas for this:

1) There could be electrodes in the prisoner's brain to constantly stimulate their sex receptors.

2) (My personal favourite) The cubicle could be filled with a special gas designed to make the inhaler constantly horny. With special secret mind-reading technology, the machine could read whatever the victim wants to happen to them and do it to them, fucking them with metal tentacles, vibrators, whatever the prisoner finds hot.

Since the victims are to caught up in pleasure to try and escape, the secrets are safe. 'MERICA!
 
"Mind-reading machines" sound pretty expensive. I don't think the "we need to save money on prisons" reasoning would fly.

It's a matter of personal taste but I don't find the idea of just hooking someone up to machines and leaving them to rot particularly erotic. Like, I can't think of a way to make it sound sexy at all. It might be a good basis for horror.
 
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I agree with CJ: it sounds more like the basis of a horror story than an erotic story. Of course, there is such a thing as erotic horror......
 
The CIA are faced with a problem, what to do with a completely innocent civilian who just happened to hear some incriminating information and knows to much to ever be released?
IRL she's doomed. Dead lips tell no tales.

On LIT, a twist is needed. Not CIA, but some minor nation/state's third-rate intel outfit -- not vicious, just fuzzy-headed, a 2nd-world Get Smart. Poor wife Wylla is hauled to the regime's 'isolation' prison which is poorly-secured, porous enough that anyone can walk in or out. Thus there's a steady flow of hookers and pushers. Wylla finds that she rather likes this situation.

Meanwhile, her poor hubby Hans is frantically searching for her. Since he can't find his ass without a road map (and even then he'd get lost) his efforts are futile. Cue the mistaken identities, mislabeled cells, Scooby-Doo chases, etc. By the time Hans accidentally finds Wylla, she's running the prison. Does she lock him in a special cell with special roommates?
 
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