New Inter-racial lesbian BDSM M/s novel

[SlaveMelissa]

I am looking for an editor to proof-read the above and give constructive criticism. The list of editors is very long tho.
My Master is a black woman and my sub a white woman. I don't think that this has been done before, not that I am aware anyway.
Any volunteers?

 

[Combat323]

You'll have better luck if you switch on Private Messaging: Go to User CP at the top left of this page. Then click Edit Options and check the Enable Private Messaging box. The next box down is labeled "Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators." I think it's unchecked by default, but make sure it's not checked. To make it stick, you have to scroll to the bottom of the page and click the "Save Changes" button.

 

[SlaveMelissa]

Enable private messaging

Okay, thanks, I did that.

 

[NaokoSmith]

Did you find someone for this?

I have seen a play along these lines in the UK, although as it was a publicly performed dramatic piece, it wasn't quite as smutty as a short story could be.

 

[SlaveMelissa]

BDSM novel needs a editor

I am looking for an editor to proof-read the above and give constructive criticism. The list of editors is very long tho.
My Master is a black woman and my sub a white woman. I don't think that this has been done before, not that I am aware anyway.
Any volunteers?

Also my sub is bisexual.