A dark themed intense BDSM/NonConsent story

[Indian_Princess]

A dark themed intense BDSM story

I am very fond of dark stories, which are very balanced both disturbing as well as have an equally soothing element. The concept of traumatic bonding fascinates me.

So, there is this song, it is actually a theme song of a game - Silent Hill Homecoming. I feel the lyrics is simply powerful. Irrespective of the story of the game, it inspired a thought that this could transform into a war based BDSM story with some level of non consensual sex in the beginning. But unfortunately I am not very familiar with conditions surrounding war, and I wanted to story to be realistic and intense, so I thought I might share this idea with someone who could execute it better.

Here's the lyrics

It started long before me...
I never saw it comin'...

The distance, the promise...
A state of isolation...

And in my darkest nightmare...
Things that I can't remember...

The answer, is drowning, this pain will last forever.

My father...
His duty...
His orders...
My brother...
The promise...
The breaking...
Rejection...
Deception...
Reflection...
Conception...
The missing...
The torture...
The madness...
The sadness...
Can this be?
Or is it?

The shadow cast before me...
A walk inside your circle...

Protect me...
Correct me...
You got your orders, soldier...

Inside my head is humming...
Sometimes I hear them coming...

The power...
Believing...
The hate I hate believing...

Where is this?
It can't be...
Who are you?
I know you...
You wouldn't...
Or would you?
Don't fight me!
Ignite me!
My trigger...
Your finger...
Your darkness...
I know it...
Come forward!
I've seen it!
I mean it!

Your power, is over!

I've come to change the order!
My training, is perfect!
I'm back, again!

Your promise, is broken!
I drank your sacred water.
My mission, is holy!

I'm back.

My father...
His duty...
His orders...
My brother...
The promise...
The breaking...
Rejection...
Deception...
Reflection...
Conception...
The missing...
The torture...
The madness...
The sadness...
Can this be?

Your power, is over!

I've come to change the order.
My training, is perfect!
I'm back, again!

Your promise, is broken!
I drank your sacred water.
My mission, is holy!

I'm back.

The hate I hate believing...
The hate I hate believing...

I never saw it coming...
I never saw it coming...

The hate I hate believing...
The hate I hate believing...

I never saw it coming...
I never saw it coming...

You have your orders, soldier...
______________________________

It brings to my imagination a young girl who is held as a war prisoner, eventually develops a traumatic bonding with one of the soldiers and they talk about their families and their rough past, and the ending would be very shocking and unexpected.

There is a lot of scope for the elements of fear, sex, torture, humiliation, emotional bonding, making it a very intense and heart wrenching tale.

If anyone is willing to take this up, please reply, we could discuss further.

 

[21orca]

Well, this is an intriguing idea. What I have in mind in response might not be what you are looking for, but here goes.

They say the finest hour for any civilization is when it is dying. Or being killed. You could use almost any time frame in history, the story of Spatacus comes to mind. But I'm a sfi-fi buff. So let's use a far flung time frame. Being a Star Trek geek, I'll tell this story idea in a third person narrative.

I'm a starship captain, who has been sent by the Federation to an unknown part of the galaxy. While my starship is very powerful, I'm only one ship. My orders are to investigate a region of space where there is massive radiation in the background of space. The conclusion is there could be a large scale war going on in the region of space. After say a year or two of travel time, when I enter this region of space, indeed a war is raging. But even for an experienced captain and crew, the war is found to be brutal on both sides. But one side is winning, and beginning to crush the other side. And while my job is not to interfere, it becomes clear that losing side is facing extermination. As a third party, I try to reason with the winning side, to at least not destroy all life from the losing side. But they refuse. So, as observers, we watch, as the winning side humiliates the losing side in all ways. It's more than just winning the battles. And while fear would still be on both sides of a battle, the losers become prisoners, tortured, both physically, and emotionally. And in many ways, sexually being one such way.

So, as the "final battle" looms, you cannot help but feel emotions for the side losing. They are looking at losing everything, and I mean everything! There proudest moments are coming as a civilization, knowing the are going to die. And you, as a third party observer, can do nothing. A great space battle starts, then a planet is invaded. Over communication links, audio, video, you see and here the horrors of war. There is death, rape, torture, fear, humiliation, some of these things felt by the side winning, but most by the losers. You feel pity for both sides, but deep down, know that the losers will be gone forever.

Finally, it's over. There is silence.

I'll stop here, I know this might not be a true Lit. type of story.

 

[greengamegirl]

The song

I am very fond of dark stories, which are very balanced both disturbing as well as have an equally soothing element. The concept of traumatic bonding fascinates me.

So, there is this song, it is actually a theme song of a game - Silent Hill Homecoming. I feel the lyrics is simply powerful. Irrespective of the story of the game, it inspired a thought that this could transform into a war based BDSM story with some level of non consensual sex in the beginning. But unfortunately I am not very familiar with conditions surrounding war, and I wanted to story to be realistic and intense, so I thought I might share this idea with someone who could execute it better.

Here's the lyrics

It started long before me...
I never saw it comin'...

The distance, the promise...
A state of isolation...

And in my darkest nightmare...
Things that I can't remember...

The answer, is drowning, this pain will last forever.

My father...
His duty...
His orders...
My brother...
The promise...
The breaking...
Rejection...
Deception...
Reflection...
Conception...
The missing...
The torture...
The madness...
The sadness...
Can this be?
Or is it?

The shadow cast before me...
A walk inside your circle...

Protect me...
Correct me...
You got your orders, soldier...

Inside my head is humming...
Sometimes I hear them coming...

The power...
Believing...
The hate I hate believing...

Where is this?
It can't be...
Who are you?
I know you...
You wouldn't...
Or would you?
Don't fight me!
Ignite me!
My trigger...
Your finger...
Your darkness...
I know it...
Come forward!
I've seen it!
I mean it!

Your power, is over!

I've come to change the order!
My training, is perfect!
I'm back, again!

Your promise, is broken!
I drank your sacred water.
My mission, is holy!

I'm back.

My father...
His duty...
His orders...
My brother...
The promise...
The breaking...
Rejection...
Deception...
Reflection...
Conception...
The missing...
The torture...
The madness...
The sadness...
Can this be?

Your power, is over!

I've come to change the order.
My training, is perfect!
I'm back, again!

Your promise, is broken!
I drank your sacred water.
My mission, is holy!

I'm back.

The hate I hate believing...
The hate I hate believing...

I never saw it coming...
I never saw it coming...

The hate I hate believing...
The hate I hate believing...

I never saw it coming...
I never saw it coming...

You have your orders, soldier...
______________________________

It brings to my imagination a young girl who is held as a war prisoner, eventually develops a traumatic bonding with one of the soldiers and they talk about their families and their rough past, and the ending would be very shocking and unexpected.

There is a lot of scope for the elements of fear, sex, torture, humiliation, emotional bonding, making it a very intense and heart wrenching tale.

If anyone is willing to take this up, please reply, we could discuss further.

Someone else that likes Silent Hill games . I forgot to list this game in the games I like. I've played many games though, I can't list them all. I think people that haven't experienced Silent Hill need a little more help to see where you are coming from. Here is the song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buNXeC1J8Gg

(I'm new to the forums, I hope this did not break a rule...)

Hopefully people listen to it with the lyrics.

Your story doesn't have to be during war.

Maybe your story could be about someone who is abducted and sexually tortured (or something).

 

[Indian_Princess]

Well, this is an intriguing idea. What I have in mind in response might not be what you are looking for, but here goes.

They say the finest hour for any civilization is when it is dying. Or being killed. You could use almost any time frame in history, the story of Spatacus comes to mind. But I'm a sfi-fi buff. So let's use a far flung time frame. Being a Star Trek geek, I'll tell this story idea in a third person narrative.

I'm a starship captain, who has been sent by the Federation to an unknown part of the galaxy. While my starship is very powerful, I'm only one ship. My orders are to investigate a region of space where there is massive radiation in the background of space. The conclusion is there could be a large scale war going on in the region of space. After say a year or two of travel time, when I enter this region of space, indeed a war is raging. But even for an experienced captain and crew, the war is found to be brutal on both sides. But one side is winning, and beginning to crush the other side. And while my job is not to interfere, it becomes clear that losing side is facing extermination. As a third party, I try to reason with the winning side, to at least not destroy all life from the losing side. But they refuse. So, as observers, we watch, as the winning side humiliates the losing side in all ways. It's more than just winning the battles. And while fear would still be on both sides of a battle, the losers become prisoners, tortured, both physically, and emotionally. And in many ways, sexually being one such way.

So, as the "final battle" looms, you cannot help but feel emotions for the side losing. They are looking at losing everything, and I mean everything! There proudest moments are coming as a civilization, knowing the are going to die. And you, as a third party observer, can do nothing. A great space battle starts, then a planet is invaded. Over communication links, audio, video, you see and here the horrors of war. There is death, rape, torture, fear, humiliation, some of these things felt by the side winning, but most by the losers. You feel pity for both sides, but deep down, know that the losers will be gone forever.

Finally, it's over. There is silence.

I'll stop here, I know this might not be a true Lit. type of story.

Thank you for your reply.

I like your idea, it is a brilliant concept but I would like to a few minor modifications. In fact everything seems OK except the sci-fi part. It could be just a regular war, easier for me to imagine, as I am not a Star Trek fan.

Third person point of view is fine, I think it will be the best in a situation were undue favoring of one side needs to be avoided, lest the story would lost its balance.

I like the idea about the winning side exterminating the losing side. Very thrilling! A lot of heart wrenching things will go on in the background. But I was 2 characters in the limelight. A girl of the losing side who is being held as a prisoner and a soldier of the winning side, and both of them slowly developing affection for each other.

When it comes to war, a lot of brutal things happen and there is nothing personal about it. That is where I see beauty. Maybe love strokes the human side of our protagonists, a affection developing in a war situation like a rose growing in a desert. I like sex more when it has emotions in it. At first the emotions of fear and disgust, later turning into passion. A lot of other characters will be present, like other soldiers and other prisoners, and these characters will interact with the protagonists in various way, but I want them both to stay in the limelight. Also our protagonists have a disturbed past. They have different stories, but both are equally dark. It is because of their suffering that they feel for each other and bond.

Not sure what happens in the end. That we can decide as the story progresses.

 

[Indian_Princess]

Someone else that likes Silent Hill games . I forgot to list this game in the games I like. I've played many games though, I can't list them all. I think people that haven't experienced Silent Hill need a little more help to see where you are coming from. Here is the song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buNXeC1J8Gg

(I'm new to the forums, I hope this did not break a rule...)

Hopefully people listen to it with the lyrics.

Your story doesn't have to be during war.

Maybe your story could be about someone who is abducted and sexually tortured (or something).

Thank you for your reply. Great to meet another Silent Hill fan. I feel those are really intelligent horror games.

Thanks for posting the link.

Here's another one, Elle theme, there is so much fear and darkness in these songs, I simply love them.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yAhazphEoXk

These lines "And the dark dear that I am feeling...dies once in a while" so beautiful. Fear can literally numb our senses sometimes.

I have already written one story about stalking and sexual torture. I have submitted it yesterday waiting for approval. War is a far intense subject and I have never touched it before. My knowledge is very limited regarding that subject, so I would like someone else who knows better to write about it.

 

[21orca]

Sure, you story timeline can be adjusted. In fact, take away the idea of "modern" warfare. It becomes "clean" and "sanitized". A war fought with nothing more than swords and brute strength makes the interaction between characters more personal and close.

But I'll give you and "ending", or maybe a new beginning, just food for thought. Let's say the war is nearing the end. It has been brutal and bloody. Both characters, the male and female, both hate each other, but have fell in love with each other. Then, the female prisoner discovers she is pregnant. And, she becomes the last of her people to be living. So, as she is giving birth to her child, a son, she is put to death, by her lover, the father of this child. He loves the child, and hides it from his own people. And this child, sows the seeds for it's mothers race, to in the future, who knows, maybe a thousands years, to rise up against those who killed all of it's mothers race, and in turn destroy them. Just a thought.

 

[21orca]

By the way, cannot wait to read you're story. Erotic horror is one of my favorite themes.

 

[Indian_Princess]

Sure, you story timeline can be adjusted. In fact, take away the idea of "modern" warfare. It becomes "clean" and "sanitized". A war fought with nothing more than swords and brute strength makes the interaction between characters more personal and close.

Hmmm, does it matter much? I like scenarios which I can relate to the best.

All the war based video games D) I've liked involved guns. Bullets bring instant death and greater fear.

I was thinking the story scenes would be mostly based on army camps and the torture/humiliation or war prisoners more than the actual battlefield, so I don't think it matters much anyway.

But I'll give you and "ending", or maybe a new beginning, just food for thought. Let's say the war is nearing the end. It has been brutal and bloody. Both characters, the male and female, both hate each other, but have fell in love with each other. Then, the female prisoner discovers she is pregnant. And, she becomes the last of her people to be living. So, as she is giving birth to her child, a son, she is put to death, by her lover, the father of this child. He loves the child, and hides it from his own people. And this child, sows the seeds for it's mothers race, to in the future, who knows, maybe a thousands years, to rise up against those who killed all of it's mothers race, and in turn destroy them. Just a thought.

Good idea.

By the way, cannot wait to read you're story. Erotic horror is one of my favorite themes.

It is erotic thriller more than horror. Should be approved in a day or 2. It is a long story written in many chapters. I hope you would like it.

 

[21orca]

The story timeline can be whatever you are most comfortable with.

The army camp setting can work, but make it a permanent type structure. Something very old and drepressing. And very large. Where you're female prisoner can hear the screams of torture, and pain. It also might be interesting to have her be an officer, of at least a middle rank. And perhaps have a family linage of being from the ruling class of her people(Prime ministers daughter??). And the male guard would be "captain of the guards". And they see her as important. So they don't want to toture her, at least at first.

One more thing, Google the Nicholas and Alexandra movie soundtrack by Richard Rodney Bennett. This is an old movie(1971), about the last Russian Czar and the Russian Revolution. The music is haunting, and would fit the mood of you're story idea. If you listen to it, it will stay with you all day.

 

[Indian_Princess]

A permanent dungeon type place would be excellent. I myself had fantasies about being held in a dark cold place where I could hear human screams from neighboring cells and when it was quiet, I could hear sound of water dripping. There would be only darkness and despair.

About the importance of the girl, well, I enjoy reading about female characters which resemble me, and I am just an ordinary girl. (I added "princess" in my username to make myself feel special but in reality I am just ordinary) Maybe there is something particularly charming, or just something different about this ordinary girl in the story that they want to treat her differently?

I heard the soundtrack, it was great.

 

[21orca]

Hey, I'm sure "princess" suits you well, after all, my username makes me a killer whale, and the 21 part, well that's my secret!

I share you're passion for the dungeon settings. I guess I get a little more into the horror part, the erotic horror plus sex, and it can be implied sex, that feeling of a character not in control of what happens to them, but with applied logic learns to overcome the setting and gain some control over what situation they find themselves in.

And I've said this before on the forum, but I'm not a writer, don't have the patience for it, but an "ideas man", I love to set up scenarios. Check out some of my other threads.

As for our female captive, she could appear ordinary at first, but maybe there is something different, maybe something she is not even aware of. Maybe those that are holding her know what it is, maybe they don't. Maybe it's something unique only to her. That could be a mystery throughout the story, leaving the reader to speculate. I love to see stories end, and leave at least one mystery unsolved. Leave to the reader or if a movie, those watching to speculate, to draw there own conclusion.

 

[Indian_Princess]

Good to know your thoughts.

But hey, if you say you are not a writer, who would write this story?

 

[21orca]

I'm sorry if I dissapointed you. I actually thought you were writing it. But sometimes, the results of setting up a story, or filling the scenarios is enough for me.

So, I'll give you two more ideas, food for thought. In the movie I mentioned earlier, there is a scene where Nicholas and Alexandra, who have lost everything, and knowing they and there children are possibly facing death, make love one last time, as husband and wife, a very moving scene. You might could work something like that into the story.

Also, and this changes you story idea a bit, but what if the female prisoner knows her "the one she loves" is also being held in the dungeon. And she can hear his screams of torture and agony. And the captive guards know this, they know there relationship. And they use this against her. The captain of the guards tells her he can make it stop if she has a sexual relationship with him. At first out spite, just to be sadistic. But, some type of feelings grow out of it.

Another twist, the female prisoner's lover is a high ranking officer of the losing side who is responsible for killing many thousands of the winning side. Including civilians, and some of those were family members of the captain of the guards.

 

[greengamegirl]

By the way, cannot wait to read you're story. Erotic horror is one of my favorite themes.

I'm also a fan of erotic horror.

 

[Indian_Princess]

I'm sorry if I dissapointed you. I actually thought you were writing it. But sometimes, the results of setting up a story, or filling the scenarios is enough for me.

So, I'll give you two more ideas, food for thought. In the movie I mentioned earlier, there is a scene where Nicholas and Alexandra, who have lost everything, and knowing they and there children are possibly facing death, make love one last time, as husband and wife, a very moving scene. You might could work something like that into the story.

Also, and this changes you story idea a bit, but what if the female prisoner knows her "the one she loves" is also being held in the dungeon. And she can hear his screams of torture and agony. And the captive guards know this, they know there relationship. And they use this against her. The captain of the guards tells her he can make it stop if she has a sexual relationship with him. At first out spite, just to be sadistic. But, some type of feelings grow out of it.

Another twist, the female prisoner's lover is a high ranking officer of the losing side who is responsible for killing many thousands of the winning side. Including civilians, and some of those were family members of the captain of the guards.

Never mind. Thanks for giving me so many great twists for the story. Although I still feel my knowledge regarding the reality of war is too little for me to write a story on it, but I'll see if I could write something with a little help. Or maybe wait for some other author to come across this thread and take up this idea.

 

[21orca]

Indian Princess, the war is only going to be a background for you're story idea. For those that are being held in the prison fortress, the war is basically over. They are only awaiting the final outcome of what the winners want to do with them. That's why, in my opinion this young female prisoner needs to have something "special" about her. Maybe it's her innocence, that she is very young(remember, Lit's rules say any character needs to be over 18), maybe it's her spirit, even though young, she has a warriors heart. Maybe she has already been tortured, but the guards are amazed at how her spirit cannot seemed to be broken, when many older, mature, and experienced male soldiers have already been broken.

That one of the guards takes it upon himself to break her, maybe at first in a sexually, non-con cent way, but over time, begins to not only admire her, but falls in love with her. But that she has nothing but contempt for him. And uses him as a way to fight back. Maybe to try and escape? Or how about this, the other prisoners see her spirit and bravery, even though she is a simple soldier(still thing she needs to at least be a mid-grade officer, maybe lieutenant?). So instead of escaping, she uses the guard, his emotions, and of course sex, to break out of her cell, and leads a revolt within the prison. Now, those who are prisoners, and there people are badly losing the war, have virtually no chance at succeeding in this uprising, but it there last heroic act, even in dying. Read about Sparticus. This would be similiar to his fate.

One other thing, don't worry about who the winners and losers are. They never have to be named. Again, just in the background.

 

[Indian_Princess]

Thanks for your wonderful suggestion dear. It made things easy for me. I will consider writing as soon as I find more time.

 

[Aurantica]

Hey, I'm sure "princess" suits you well, after all, my username makes me a killer whale, and the 21 part, well that's my secret!

I share you're passion for the dungeon settings. I guess I get a little more into the horror part, the erotic horror plus sex, and it can be implied sex, that feeling of a character not in control of what happens to them, but with applied logic learns to overcome the setting and gain some control over what situation they find themselves in.

And I've said this before on the forum, but I'm not a writer, don't have the patience for it, but an "ideas man", I love to set up scenarios. Check out some of my other threads.

As for our female captive, she could appear ordinary at first, but maybe there is something different, maybe something she is not even aware of. Maybe those that are holding her know what it is, maybe they don't. Maybe it's something unique only to her. That could be a mystery throughout the story, leaving the reader to speculate. I love to see stories end, and leave at least one mystery unsolved. Leave to the reader or if a movie, those watching to speculate, to draw there own conclusion.

That sounds really interesting. I have a thing for playing damsels, if you'd like to drop me a message. Looking to get back into long for roleplay.

 

[Black_and_White_Writer]

I love science-fiction/horror erotica.

It's not to everyone's tastes. I tend to set my stories in the 'near' future where people can relate to it easier - and in the great tradition of Sci-Fi one can make comments on today's world.

I love the ALIEN (1979), BLADE RUNNER (1982), MAD MAX (1978) and ESCAPE FROM NEW YORK (1981) as they are my benchmarks of the genre. I love The Thing (1982) for it's very good effects and atmosphere.

Having a young or several young ladies being kidnapped or volunteering to be mated to horrific genetic mutations (from some nuclear holocaust) or Alien invaders is always a big theme of my works. I know it's not to everyone's tastes, but I blame my love of Manga and Vore.

I like writing stories that aren't as graphic it twisted and have started upon a Frankenstein type story set in a romanticised Europe of the old Hammer and Universal films - another favourite inspiration.

I love to draw when I have the time and am from England originally, well Scotland to be exact and have lived in the United States for over 11 years now.

I think my Celtic European heritage influences a lot of my imagination and tales of lusty werewolves, rampant vampires and insatiable aliens and mutants are always being worked on.

I had posted many stories on sites over the years but sadly the sites have all long since turned to cyber dust. I'm reconstructing these stories (many were written in my late teens and I'm in my mid 20s now) and I'm always welcoming of ideas, advice, constructive comments and help and of course general inspiration.

I can offer all that and enthusiasm in return along with my friendship. I'm happily married and hope to make some friends here.

I hope everyone has a great Sunday for the ladies and for the guys

 

[sexywriterfla]

I love science-fiction/horror erotica.

It's not to everyone's tastes. I tend to set my stories in the 'near' future where people can relate to it easier - and in the great tradition of Sci-Fi one can make comments on today's world.

I love the ALIEN (1979), BLADE RUNNER (1982), MAD MAX (1978) and ESCAPE FROM NEW YORK (1981) as they are my benchmarks of the genre. I love The Thing (1982) for it's very good effects and atmosphere.

Having a young or several young ladies being kidnapped or volunteering to be mated to horrific genetic mutations (from some nuclear holocaust) or Alien invaders is always a big theme of my works. I know it's not to everyone's tastes, but I blame my love of Manga and Vore.

I like writing stories that aren't as graphic it twisted and have started upon a Frankenstein type story set in a romanticised Europe of the old Hammer and Universal films - another favourite inspiration.

I love to draw when I have the time and am from England originally, well Scotland to be exact and have lived in the United States for over 11 years now.

I think my Celtic European heritage influences a lot of my imagination and tales of lusty werewolves, rampant vampires and insatiable aliens and mutants are always being worked on.

I had posted many stories on sites over the years but sadly the sites have all long since turned to cyber dust. I'm reconstructing these stories (many were written in my late teens and I'm in my mid 20s now) and I'm always welcoming of ideas, advice, constructive comments and help and of course general inspiration.

I can offer all that and enthusiasm in return along with my friendship. I'm happily married and hope to make some friends here.

I hope everyone has a great Sunday for the ladies and for the guys

Your taste in movies is as exquisite as your taste in writing, my dear...

 

[Black_and_White_Writer]

Your taste in movies is as exquisite as your taste in writing, my dear...

Thank you my dear. Have a brilliant Sunday too.

Just sketching a mutated monster out for a friend.

 

[lovecraft68]

An under rated sci/horror film is "Night Flyer" early to mid eighties I think. Pretty good, but flies under the radar.

 

[Black_and_White_Writer]

I've not seen that, some work I'm doing for a friend is based upon a genetic mutation/freak. It's a great premise he's created and I'm just opening the story out a bit.

The story has been a great diversion and I'm
Enjoying chatting to him swapping ideas.

I am just watching Leviathan (1989) for some research and inspiration.