The In-Law

[SuperWill19]

I was thinking of a story that has this married couple in it. They are visiting his dad's farm or house. One day the guy catches his wife having sex with his dad. Then he discovers that all the kids he thought were his were actually his dad's kids. So he goes from being the youngest of two kids to having a few younger siblings.

 

[NebraskaFetish]

Then what happens?

 

[Hypoxia]

I was thinking of a story that has this married couple in it. They are visiting his dad's farm or house. One day the guy catches his wife having sex with his dad. Then he discovers that all the kids he thought were his were actually his dad's kids. So he goes from being the youngest of two kids to having a few younger siblings.

Sounds like my ex's family in Arkansas.

Then what happens?

He has sex with his mom, of course. Now he can have his own child siblings on hand. Family reunions will be fun, as long as they don't go all Sawney Bean on the neighborhood.

Don't forget to throw in grandparents, aunts/uncles, et al.

 

[Carnevil9]

Father's Day must be a major cluster fuck.

 

[Hypoxia]

Father's Day must be a major cluster fuck.

So many fathers; so many fucks. It's either 1) confusion over exactly whom is who's father, or 2) nobody really cares, they just keep fucking.

 

[SuperWill19]

Wouldn't want it to go super crazy. As in not the whole family gets involved. At the very least one family member stays out of it. The rest can play. They can know about it and a couple other family members can get involved but not everybody. Maybe after he finds out about his wife he gets it on with his or her sister.

 

[Hypoxia]

Wouldn't want it to go super crazy. As in not the whole family gets involved. They can know about it and a couple other family members can get involved but not everybody. Maybe after he finds out about his wife he gets it on with his or her sister.

What's the fun in that? Can't they at least have tentacles involved?



Okay, yes, your approach would be a tighter, sweeter story, while mine is more like Scooby-Doo chases and over-top fuckfests. I guess I'm just impatient.

 

[SuperWill19]

Just didn't want to have it fill like it was overloaded. But if anyone decides to write this they could do with it what they want. They could even throw in aliens if they wanted to.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Then what happens?

he shoots his father and sells his wife to white slavers.

Loving Wives tale, tight there!

 

[SuperWill19]

he shoots his father and sells his wife to white slavers.

Loving Wives tale, tight there!

Not exactly. Maybe with tranquilizers. And he makes her think he sold her to slaves but it turns out to be a joke for revenge.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Not exactly. Maybe with tranquilizers. And he makes her think he sold her to slaves but it turns out to be a joke for revenge.

who do you see cast in the movie?

 

[SuperWill19]

who do you see cast in the movie?

Movie?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Movie?

yeah, the movie version of the piece.

i see don johnson as the father(-in-law)

 

[SuperWill19]

Any chance anyone would be interested in doing this or at least being Co author or help to edit it if I do end up working on it myself?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Any chance anyone would be interested in doing this or at least being Co author or help to edit it if I do end up working on it myself?

i'll help with it. beta-reader kinda gig.

 

[SuperWill19]

i'll help with it. beta-reader kinda gig.

Beta-reader?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Beta-reader?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beta_reader

 

[SuperWill19]

What's the fun in that? Can't they at least have tentacles involved?



Okay, yes, your approach would be a tighter, sweeter story, while mine is more like Scooby-Doo chases and over-top fuckfests. I guess I'm just impatient.

Of course now I want a Scooby-Doo story.