I agonized over the conclusion to Fake It to Make It and am concerned that it shows.
http://www.literotica.com/s/fake-it-to-make-it-ch-06
This conclusion is a (somewhat) mature, three way scenario clocking in at about 15K words. I don't remember the count.
For those of you that have the time or inclination, I am requesting an assessment of flow, character interaction and general story.
Readers have enjoyed it and I was pleased to bring it to a satisfactory conclusion for them.
To recap previous chapters, Dave is a junior science professor who has tired of his lack of romantic success. He turns to PUA/game for help and it transforms him. His first major success, Vanessa, is eye opening in that she directs him towards more strength as she breaks it off with him. She further turns his attention to a student. This is the pivotal engagement and Dave and Sonia begin a light Dom/sub relationship.
The story breaks for 6 months; Dave and Sonia enjoy life together. Vanessa has begun pining for something different in her love life and is drawn back to Dave, though she encounters Sonia first. The two embark on a friendship which sparks into attraction, because Sonia herself has grown in strength. Sonia determines to bring Vanessa into the fold.
That's where this chapter begins.
http://www.literotica.com/s/fake-it-to-make-it-ch-06
This conclusion is a (somewhat) mature, three way scenario clocking in at about 15K words. I don't remember the count.
For those of you that have the time or inclination, I am requesting an assessment of flow, character interaction and general story.
Readers have enjoyed it and I was pleased to bring it to a satisfactory conclusion for them.
To recap previous chapters, Dave is a junior science professor who has tired of his lack of romantic success. He turns to PUA/game for help and it transforms him. His first major success, Vanessa, is eye opening in that she directs him towards more strength as she breaks it off with him. She further turns his attention to a student. This is the pivotal engagement and Dave and Sonia begin a light Dom/sub relationship.
The story breaks for 6 months; Dave and Sonia enjoy life together. Vanessa has begun pining for something different in her love life and is drawn back to Dave, though she encounters Sonia first. The two embark on a friendship which sparks into attraction, because Sonia herself has grown in strength. Sonia determines to bring Vanessa into the fold.
That's where this chapter begins.
