Greetings,
I am a new author on this site, and a very junior author every where else. I have had my first two submissions accepted on this site. I was very excited to receive my first feedback: Several people favorited the story, several left positive comments and 4 bluntly expressed their 'displeasure' with the content of my story.
Apparently, for some reason, Interracial stories, especially those with White Submissive themes, tend to elicit negative feedback. Was it something I wrote?? LOL.
However, the comments and suggestions in the Author Feedback forum were excellent.
The one thing that became obvious: I need a good editor, especially one that does/accepts stories that have Interracial themes, Submission and some of the 'harder' topics like Rape/Potential Rape, prostitution and drugs.
I am currently working on a long story, one much longer than I intended to write, but seems to have gotten more detailed with the telling.
I am looking for an editor what will accept, and has experience with stories involving: Interracial sex, submission, potential Rape (close to non-consentual, but not crossing that line), a drug dealer, Pimp/cash for sex, the 'selling' of a White Lady. The story is already over 20 pages long, but with lots of dialogue.
A small portion of the story for you to consider:
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I heard doors close behind me as I was thrown into a cold leather chair. Then I heard Jonathan forced to sit in another chair in the room. I was about to have a nervous breakdown at this point. Fear and anger welling up inside of me, plus the shock of it all, were combining into a massive anxiety attack.
”Don’t say a thing BITCH,” a male ordered as sharp metal object was put to my neck. When the bag was removed from my head, I could see figures moving around in the darkness of a dingy room, Jonathan was similarly seated facing me in another chair. He was shaking with fear. Probably as dazed and confused as I was.
One of them warned me not to speak, again, as he pulled the wet rag out of my mouth. In an instant, a large plastic ball was shoved into my mouth. It had strange nylon straps on its side, which were snapped shut behind my head. Now, I was practically bridaled like some horse! Jonathan suffered the same treatment.
With that task complete, the large Black Man, the one that seemed to be in charge, grabbed my shoulders and forced me to my feet. He stood against me and ran his hands behind me, gripped my buttocks and started to work his hands under my dress! I struggled, tried to scream in protest. That only brought a sharp, and painful, slap to my left butt cheek. “Be still Bitch”, he commanded, “or I beat you hard”.
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Anyone 'game' to take me under the wing?
Thanks in advance. I am glad to be a part of this community.
(and if my writing about the act of sex sucks, tell me, I can take it and improve)
I am a new author on this site, and a very junior author every where else. I have had my first two submissions accepted on this site. I was very excited to receive my first feedback: Several people favorited the story, several left positive comments and 4 bluntly expressed their 'displeasure' with the content of my story.
Apparently, for some reason, Interracial stories, especially those with White Submissive themes, tend to elicit negative feedback. Was it something I wrote?? LOL.
However, the comments and suggestions in the Author Feedback forum were excellent.
The one thing that became obvious: I need a good editor, especially one that does/accepts stories that have Interracial themes, Submission and some of the 'harder' topics like Rape/Potential Rape, prostitution and drugs.
I am currently working on a long story, one much longer than I intended to write, but seems to have gotten more detailed with the telling.
I am looking for an editor what will accept, and has experience with stories involving: Interracial sex, submission, potential Rape (close to non-consentual, but not crossing that line), a drug dealer, Pimp/cash for sex, the 'selling' of a White Lady. The story is already over 20 pages long, but with lots of dialogue.
A small portion of the story for you to consider:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I heard doors close behind me as I was thrown into a cold leather chair. Then I heard Jonathan forced to sit in another chair in the room. I was about to have a nervous breakdown at this point. Fear and anger welling up inside of me, plus the shock of it all, were combining into a massive anxiety attack.
”Don’t say a thing BITCH,” a male ordered as sharp metal object was put to my neck. When the bag was removed from my head, I could see figures moving around in the darkness of a dingy room, Jonathan was similarly seated facing me in another chair. He was shaking with fear. Probably as dazed and confused as I was.
One of them warned me not to speak, again, as he pulled the wet rag out of my mouth. In an instant, a large plastic ball was shoved into my mouth. It had strange nylon straps on its side, which were snapped shut behind my head. Now, I was practically bridaled like some horse! Jonathan suffered the same treatment.
With that task complete, the large Black Man, the one that seemed to be in charge, grabbed my shoulders and forced me to my feet. He stood against me and ran his hands behind me, gripped my buttocks and started to work his hands under my dress! I struggled, tried to scream in protest. That only brought a sharp, and painful, slap to my left butt cheek. “Be still Bitch”, he commanded, “or I beat you hard”.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Anyone 'game' to take me under the wing?
Thanks in advance. I am glad to be a part of this community.
(and if my writing about the act of sex sucks, tell me, I can take it and improve)
