My story Takeover - moving from Romance to Fetish

[taiyakisoba]

Hi everyone... mods, sorry if this is the wrong place to post this but it seemed the most appropriate based on the other threads I read. Apologies if it needs to be moved...

A lot of readers have taken me to task for submitting my most recent story Takeover in the Romance category. Two of my previous stories, In Her Argent Embrace and Bringing the Heat, with similar themes seemed to cause no problems. I did provide ample warning in the tags, but I guess the femdom/role reversal elements of this particular story (househusband?) are a bit too pronounced for some people since I've received a couple of pungent reviews and some 1s (which I take to mean 'Get this stuff outa here!'). I accept this criticism and in the interests of not stepping on anyone's toes as a new writer, I'll be deleting it from Romance and resubmitting it to Fetish.

Anyway, too-long, didn't-read version is that I've asked Takeover to be deleted from Romance and will be resubmitting it to Fetish. Please look for it there in a few days if you're following it. Thanks for your time!

taiyakisoba

 

[sr71plt]

When it gets to where it's moving, you'll receive more look-sees if you provide a link to it.

 

[Sammael Bard]

Here's the link the OP's stories: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2234119&page=submissions

Can you specify what exactly are you looking for? Story Feedback? Advice on writing? Or are you opening a Fan-Page for your stories?

 

[coffeessss]

open the fan page in facebook and post your stories

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[taiyakisoba]

When it gets to where it's moving, you'll receive more look-sees if you provide a link to it.

Thanks sr71plt! Will do.

Here's the link the OP's stories: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2234119&page=submissions

Can you specify what exactly are you looking for? Story Feedback? Advice on writing? Or are you opening a Fan-Page for your stories?

I really like feedback and advice in all its forms, but I guess I just enjoy writing and knowing that somebody somewhere other than me likes my work.

open the fan page in facebook and post your stories

I'm a fusty old (30s) dinosaur who doesn't use Facebook. Maybe I should? I never thought of it as a place to promote my work.

 

[PennLady]

I'm a fusty old (30s) dinosaur who doesn't use Facebook. Maybe I should? I never thought of it as a place to promote my work.

Facebook may not be the best place. At one point I couldn't link directly to my stories from FB, presumably b/c they had some kind of rule against adult content or something. I would link to my blog, where I'd have a link to the story. A blog at a site like Blogspot or Wordpress might work better for you. You could post on your own schedule, include excerpts and then link to the story with no worries.

Plenty of erotica authors are on FB, don't get me wrong. I'm just saying that it may not work for everyone.

 

[taiyakisoba]

Plenty of erotica authors are on FB, don't get me wrong. I'm just saying that it may not work for everyone.

Thanks for your help, PennLady! I think I'll steer clear for the moment...

When it gets to where it's moving, you'll receive more look-sees if you provide a link to it.

Here it is: I waited until chapter 2 was approved.

www.literotica.com/s/takeover-ch-01
www.literotica.com/s/takeover-ch-02