Need Women's Feedback

[bartender333]

I am trying to continue a story where it's almost inevitable that 2 women (that are not gay) get involved sexually either with each other or with a male friend, or both. I wanted to get some feedback from women on how this might (somewhat) realistically happen amongst friends. Or at the very least how the conversation would start.

I want to keep it from being to stereotypically corny.

Any feedback is welcome.

Thanks!

 

[pointless]

just get 'em drunk.

or high.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

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[bartender333]

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thanks, how do I delete?

 

[pointless]

thanks, how do I delete?

you don't.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

thanks, how do I delete?

pm Laurel or just let it slide.

 

[bartender333]

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I'm fairly new, just trying to get as much feedback as I can.

New to forums

 

[lovetoread]

There is no delete in litland.

 

[bartender333]

you don't.

Well then, let's keep the feedback coming!

 

[JohnnySavage]

I am trying to continue a story where it's almost inevitable that 2 women (that are not gay) get involved sexually either with each other or with a male friend, or both. I wanted to get some feedback from women on how this might (somewhat) realistically happen amongst friends. Or at the very least how the conversation would start.

I want to keep it from being to stereotypically corny.

Any feedback is welcome.

Thanks!

It always starts with a bottle of wine, Chardonnay usually, then progresses to a bra and panties pillow fight.

 

[Conager]

just get 'em drunk.

or high.

He is a bartender. If he has never seen this happen and overheard what they siad maybe it does not happen.

 

[bartender333]

He is a bartender. If he has never seen this happen and overheard what they siad maybe it does not happen.

Yup, been a bartender for many years. I've seen naked girls, and many hookups, but I haven't witnessed two girls go after the same guy or each other. Just looking for how to start it...

 

[Conager]

Yup, been a bartender for many years. I've seen naked girls, and many hookups, but I haven't witnessed two girls go after the same guy or each other. Just looking for how to start it...

Maybe you should work in a lesbian bar.

 

[lovecraft68]

If they are going to end up in a drunken lesbian encounter then...

It is inevitable for one to have just gotten dumped so they can talk about how bad men suck, then how they even suck at sucking and...then they wonder hmmm....

Then one gets aggressive and the other says

"Don't, stop....don't, stop! Hey, I said don't stop!"

 

[lovecraft68]

He is a bartender. If he has never seen this happen and overheard what they siad maybe it does not happen.

I was a bartender years ago and the one porn cliche that exists is the good looking upper class older woman showing up to go slumming while her husband is out of town...doing the same thing...

 

[pointless]

He is a bartender. If he has never seen this happen and overheard what they siad maybe it does not happen.

you're assuming he's observant enough to notice.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I was a bartender years ago and the one porn cliche that exists is the good looking upper class older woman showing up to go slumming while her husband is out of town...doing the same thing...

Loving Wives, eh?

 

[IrezumiKiss]

Yup, been a bartender for many years. I've seen naked girls, and many hookups, but I haven't witnessed two girls go after the same guy or each other. Just looking for how to start it...

You've already got access to the best solution in the world.

BOOZE.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a267/swtnlw911/drunk_girls-380x314.jpg

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTEtz3DYyGInzmoUdVsU7hZgvQCeIWrEbdziqSYCzZkLWh8z6Zi

http://kussadasi.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/sarho%C5%9F-k%C4%B1zlar-kussadasi.com-1.jpg

http://rhunekincaid.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/2_drunk_girls_on_bench.jpg

http://media.washtimes.com/media/community/viewpoint/entry/2013/05/04/very-hot-party-girl-3-640_1_s640x427.jpg?73b8e21685896c3f2859310aaa5adb253919b641

http://www.chillfans.com/Portals/11536/images/drunk-girls-resized-600.jpg

EVERYthing jumps off from there. Just make the characters human beings. They will write themselves.

One thing if you wanna keep it really real...have one or both of them piss themselves. I actually saw this happening last week walking down the street from my spot. Gal was drunk being supported by her friend and there was a hyuuuuuuge wet spot drenching her jeans from the back. Sometimes you just can't hold it in.

http://www.blogcdn.com/www.asylum.com/media/2007/12/drunk-girl-pee-smile-456a110907.jpg

https://meltingicetowers.files.wordpress.com/2014/09/wpid-drunk_girls_98.jpg

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

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^^^^^The closest thing we have to a female at the GEE BEE.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

^^^^^The closest thing we have to a female at the GEE BEE.

but you're the biggest cunt.

 

[rimmy]

Three words

Lingerie. Pillow. Fight.


You're welcome.