Female spy
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Well, she says she's CIA, but how can you know for sure? Or, she thinks you're a mainstream Gringo civilian, but how can she know for sure? Are many possibilities for double-cross here. Lots of sex, too. EDIT: And NonCon (with torture), InterRacial (he's black, she's white, or vice-versa), Group Sex (some orgies are required), Loving Wives (somebody's cheating), Mature (they're a generation apart in age), Incest (they're actually siblings), and more.
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I would'nt have her say that to him that would be stupid. She'd say it's a matter of life and death that you pretend where BF & GF or HB and WF. She'd be hot enough that he'd agree. The readers would know she's CIA.
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Ah, but she could be lying to the readers too.
I subscribe to a model of clandestine organizations (like any intel service) that sees them as onions. An onion has layers and layers of skin. A secret org has layers and layers of disinfo. Peel back one layer, and there's another under it, and another under that, all the way down to... what? Ideally, to nothing -- all that disinfo is wrapped around a void, because truth, if any, is elsewhere.
So, in this story, each player is wrapped in layers of disinfo. He looks like a gringo salaryman who caught a no-visa tour from Mexico to Cuba - but is he? She acts like a CIA agent trolling for assistance - but is she? Their friends and contacts in Cuba - who do they really work for? Et fucking cetera.
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I'm currently writing one about a female spy...Alana Shankov, except she's Russian and has struck out on her own. 
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I'm currently writing one about a female spy...Alana Shankov, except she's Russian and has struck out on her own.
How many layers of disinfo are wrapped around her, and by whom?
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I Martine Sheen narrate all my stories, so I Martine Sheen would be lying.
-But Martine Sheen is not lying.
-She is in the CIA.
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I don't know, haven't got that far into her or the story yet. This idea popped into my mind when Blind_Justice and I wrote The Big Chase. I thought I'd run with it. It'll probably be 6 months before I get anywhere with it.
The plot so far is that her very first client, let's her stay at that house, provides here with intel and the things she will need, if she accomplishes several tasks, yet to be determined, for him. He's rich, but not thought of as a power-broker of any type. Sort of Bruce Wayne without the fame and the bat costume.
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Hey Loquere, sorry for hi-jacking your thread.
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No worries, so she's a private eye?
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No, she's a "spy for hire".
She was trained by the KGB to spy and do some wet work (assassination).
She will be involved in corporate espionage, high level theft and elimination.
She won't be hang a shingle out or advertising in the newspaper.
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No, she's a "spy for hire".
She was trained by the KGB to spy and do some wet work (assassination).
She will be involved in corporate espionage, high level theft and elimination.
She won't be hang a shingle out or advertising in the newspaper.
My longest story ever (9 pages) was a 4th chapter to a series built around a twenty two yearold super billionaire, which started off with him fucking his twenty something stepmom.
--->(to the point)I have an unstopable assasin in there that I never developed. She scales the side of a 40 floor condo reaching the penthouse & takes out a team of bodyguards with a japanese sword if I remember it corectly.
The companies CEO the assassin is sent to assassinate is rushed off to a safe room where the CEO awaits the companies own internal special ops team to rescue her.
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That was a great scene.
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Mmmm...I might have to give that one a read for some ideas...with your permission of course. I will give it a read though.
When I first thought Alana up, I saw a series of about five novel or novella length books. Great Expectations I know, but over four or five years it can be done. I'm just about finished up with another series I started two years ago. No as exciting as a spy, but there are aspects of intrigue involved. To bad it's not posted here at lit.
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-It's a fourth chapter where I decided to have raw fun, it’s a behemoth filled with a lot of other stuff before the assassin stuff in the middle.
-Pretty much the 22 year old is from an ancient new England 'Bryce'(I mispelled it a few times at reader anger) family, that helped found America. His great great great great great grandfather founded one of the first railroads, then oil companies.
-The company is so big that today it has its own internal CIA.
-On paper he's worth near 50 billion off paper 15- 20 times that.
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-wrong-thing-to-do-ch-04-1
