My Daddy Left....

[HornyLittleSlut]

My Daddy Left His Sweet Baby Girl Alone....

My daddy deleted his profile and left me here without a way to contact him so I guess he doesn't want me anymore. So I figure I would post on here for a daddy to talk to and maybe not only have regular chats but also naughty chats. I hope I hear from a prospective daddy soon.

 

[just4friends]

Poor girl

You are big enough now to pm men who show some interest

 

[wildcat196671]

hi

pm sent

 

[Primalex]

My daddy deleted his profile and left me here without a way to contact him so I guess he doesn't want me anymore.

together with the "I want to be done with you", it's a fairly educated guess.

 

[Anordinaryjoe]

Did not even know a profile could be deleted.

 

[standingmare]

Im sorry you feel a loss

I know what pain it can cause to be left alone in the world cut off from what you new as the life shared with another so quick a cut as to leave one stammered for I was one who chose the path less taken by and in so lived the life O Ri-ly the life of adventure as some would say the life of one outside the norms of social conventions sadly its a life of pain and loss on its own made more unbearable by those that in the real world did plot and plan my demise on many occasion and in my travels I was illuminated beyond the knowledge of most men to the understanding that destroys the faith full mans faith and turns the pyious to unrepentant sinners the virgin to a whore the man of piece to a killer who then lements the loss of his virtue but yet we carry on the scars only show on the inside leaving the cold dead walking corps the shell no soul dwells in was he to you father lover master who you totaly bound your life to only for it to be ripped from you leaving you in the cold dark of silence truly for this I am sorry once I had my own as they were bound to me and due to youth and lack of seeing what was to come I left them to their own devices tho they beg me stay it was not and could not be thoe they would have done anything to make me stay my own youth full folly lead me bid them a due later in life I realized the pain all indured because of my hart-less and thoughtless actions perhaps we have a comon
bond in that we know the pain of such

 

[RubenesqueAphrodite]

Had to comment on this^^^
Is that one fucking sentence?

God Damn, my brain hurts from reading it.

Really, I'm not a grammar Nazi..but....but...just a little punctuation could have made your response intelligible.

 

[Prince Albert]

Would love to chat.

 

[just4friends]

Well

Had to comment on this^^^
Is that one fucking sentence?

God Damn, my brain hurts from reading it.

Really, I'm not a grammar Nazi..but....but...just a little punctuation could have made your response intelligible.

It is meant to be read as stream of noise with no breaths. A challenge! You have to read fast!

 

[jjk007]

Looking for a good Sub to pleasure me...

My daddy deleted his profile and left me here without a way to contact him so I guess he doesn't want me anymore. So I figure I would post on here for a daddy to talk to and maybe not only have regular chats but also naughty chats. I hope I hear from a prospective daddy soon.

So far, I am not sure what to make of you. If you want to be my sub, PM me with info regarding your training thus far, and your limits in this relationship. Otherwise, I wish you the best in your search.
Best Wishes and Happy Hunting,
jjk007

 

[southerncharm77]

Had to comment on this^^^
Is that one fucking sentence?

God Damn, my brain hurts from reading it.

Really, I'm not a grammar Nazi..but....but...just a little punctuation could have made your response intelligible.

I stopped after the first sentence.

 

[pensivepoet]

I stopped after the first sentence.

Well, in all fairness, there were 2 hyphens, but i got vertigo finding them.

 

[MedicalMuse]

Had to comment on this^^^
Is that one fucking sentence?

God Damn, my brain hurts from reading it.

Really, I'm not a grammar Nazi..but....but...just a little punctuation could have made your response intelligible.

Yes. That exactly.

 

[ImagineMe2]

Had to comment on this^^^
Is that one fucking sentence?

God Damn, my brain hurts from reading it.

Really, I'm not a grammar Nazi..but....but...just a little punctuation could have made your response intelligible.

That is a mess, didn't even try to read it.

 

[seth6138]

That is a mess, didn't even try to read it.

I have my translator headphones on, let me try!

 

[RubenesqueAphrodite]

I have my translator headphones on, let me try!

Report back when you have de-coded it.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

Sorry, I find it quite an intelligible lament in stream of consciousness. A few spelling errors, but on the whole rather moving.

Then again, I enjoy Molly Bloom's Soliloquy and still reread Finnegans Wake every year or so.

 

[southerncharm77]

Report back when you have de-coded it.

Exactly.

 

[RubenesqueAphrodite]

Sorry, I find it quite an intelligible lament in stream of consciousness. A few spelling errors, but on the whole rather moving.

Then again, I enjoy Molly Bloom's Soliloquy and still reread Finnegans Wake every year or so.

My apologies to the poet, then.
However, it still gave me a headache to read. I need my stops and pauses to digest the written word.

If I tried to write a stream of consciousness it would turn out rather dull for the mere fact that my brain would begin it's implosion from the very start of attempting to form thoughts and phrases without the conventional means of separating one idea from the next and then I would be obliged to put my pen and paper away to gather up the remains of my skull and I would fail miserably at gluing the pieces back together since I don't know if I should use a paste like white glue or a polyurethane adhesive since one dries very quickly but does not bond at all very well and the other has a drying time of at least 12 hours for the gel to cure completely since polyurethanes are reaction polymers requiring a great deal of care when handling or you run the risk of bonding the skin together which can be kinda cool if you get the polyurethane that turns into a foam like the kind you have in cans of spray insulation which is used primarily to seal small cracks and holes as well as make a really big mess if sprayed into my sister's hair and while it might hold her style up with no movement whatsoever it is an absolute bitch to remove and I would probably end up having to shave her head to get it all out and that might look cool since my sister has an egg shaped head and I could decorate her skull by using a sharpie marker on it and drawing little squiggles like she had cracks in her head but drawing little squiggles on her bare skull would remind me that my own skull has shattered on the desk before me because I tried to write stream of consciousness with no punctuation whatsoever.

 

[AlbertShufflebottom]

Now you're all worrying me that I am I slow witted. I've just realised... or have I just noticed? Or understood maybe? Oh well. Anyway, I have to punctuate my own streams of consciousness. Sometimes that happens... in very... well quite often really, that is I punctuate; strange places.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

My apologies to the poet, then.
However, it still gave me a headache to read. I need my stops and pauses to digest the written word.

If I tried to write a stream of consciousness it would turn out rather dull for the mere fact that my brain would begin it's implosion from the very start of attempting to form thoughts and phrases without the conventional means of separating one idea from the next and then I would be obliged to put my pen and paper away to gather up the remains of my skull and I would fail miserably at gluing the pieces back together since I don't know if I should use a paste like white glue or a polyurethane adhesive since one dries very quickly but does not bond at all very well and the other has a drying time of at least 12 hours for the gel to cure completely since polyurethanes are reaction polymers requiring a great deal of care when handling or you run the risk of bonding the skin together which can be kinda cool if you get the polyurethane that turns into a foam like the kind you have in cans of spray insulation which is used primarily to seal small cracks and holes as well as make a really big mess if sprayed into my sister's hair and while it might hold her style up with no movement whatsoever it is an absolute bitch to remove and I would probably end up having to shave her head to get it all out and that might look cool since my sister has an egg shaped head and I could decorate her skull by using a sharpie marker on it and drawing little squiggles like she had cracks in her head but drawing little squiggles on her bare skull would remind me that my own skull has shattered on the desk before me because I tried to write stream of consciousness with no punctuation whatsoever.

Yes and no...yours is a stream of run-on thoughts. Interesting in what it says about what's on (or in) your mind, but standingmare's stream was all of one thought. Poetry? not really, but a reasonable form of prose. Try reading it (or thinking it) aloud, and you'll find where the "punctuation" is. Remember, we don't speak in punctuation (except for Victor Borge - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qf_TDuhk3No ); punctuation is merely our collected conventions for writing the meaningful pauses and inflections in our spoken discourse.

 

[southerncharm77]

My apologies to the poet, then.
However, it still gave me a headache to read. I need my stops and pauses to digest the written word.

If I tried to write a stream of consciousness it would turn out rather dull for the mere fact that my brain would begin it's implosion from the very start of attempting to form thoughts and phrases without the conventional means of separating one idea from the next and then I would be obliged to put my pen and paper away to gather up the remains of my skull and I would fail miserably at gluing the pieces back together since I don't know if I should use a paste like white glue or a polyurethane adhesive since one dries very quickly but does not bond at all very well and the other has a drying time of at least 12 hours for the gel to cure completely since polyurethanes are reaction polymers requiring a great deal of care when handling or you run the risk of bonding the skin together which can be kinda cool if you get the polyurethane that turns into a foam like the kind you have in cans of spray insulation which is used primarily to seal small cracks and holes as well as make a really big mess if sprayed into my sister's hair and while it might hold her style up with no movement whatsoever it is an absolute bitch to remove and I would probably end up having to shave her head to get it all out and that might look cool since my sister has an egg shaped head and I could decorate her skull by using a sharpie marker on it and drawing little squiggles like she had cracks in her head but drawing little squiggles on her bare skull would remind me that my own skull has shattered on the desk before me because I tried to write stream of consciousness with no punctuation whatsoever.

OUCH! I was just getting over the last one.

 

[RubenesqueAphrodite]

Yes and no...yours is a stream of run-on thoughts. Interesting in what it says about what's on (or in) your mind, but standingmare's stream was all of one thought. Poetry? not really, but a reasonable form of prose. Try reading it (or thinking it) aloud, and you'll find where the "punctuation" is. Remember, we don't speak in punctuation (except for Victor Borge - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qf_TDuhk3No ); punctuation is merely our collected conventions for writing the meaningful pauses and inflections in our spoken discourse.

Nothing special going on in my brain..

If we are to agree that StandingMare's stream of consciousness falls outside what we would categorize as poetry, rather we decide that is gets neatly filed away as something akin to prose, wouldn't it also be reasonable- as the reader- to expect some assists in comprehension?, mainly in the form of conventional stops and pauses?

With man's adaptation to such grammatical helps as the period, comma, and question mark, the only excuse for writing without them is to put the reader at a disadvantage in understanding. This may very well be the goal of "stream of consciousness", and if it is, bravo , he succeeded. By that standard, StandingMare ranks up there with Kerouac in all his posts.


To remain devil's advocate, I still think it odd.

OUCH! I was just getting over the last one.

"ouchies" were the point of that post..

 

[pensivepoet]

RA, i may never forgive you for that.
I only had 4 tylenols left, and that will never do it.

 

[Tio_Narratore]

Nothing special going on in my brain..

If we are to agree that StandingMare's stream of consciousness falls outside what we would categorize as poetry, rather we decide that is gets neatly filed away as something akin to prose, wouldn't it also be reasonable- as the reader- to expect some assists in comprehension?, mainly in the form of conventional stops and pauses?

With man's adaptation to such grammatical helps as the period, comma, and question mark, the only excuse for writing without them is to put the reader at a disadvantage in understanding. This may very well be the goal of "stream of consciousness", and if it is, bravo , he succeeded. By that standard, StandingMare ranks up there with Kerouac in all his posts.
To remain devil's advocate, I still think it odd.


"ouchies" were the point of that post..

Odd. yes, of course, given our conventions. But do note that our conventions change (compare Elizabethan punctuation to today's); again, punctuation is a way to write what we say. We don't speak in semi-colons, but if you read the piece by standingmare, or even your own, out loud, you'll find the breaks and pauses and rising and falling inflections, and. yes. even the closed stops (the difference between a blackbird and a black bird, for example). It is prose, and not meant to confuse you, but for you to listen to and feel. Is it great? I wouldn't rate it as such. Does it convey it's meaning? I think so.

By the way, Kerouac used punctuation.