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[MindYaBitness]

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[_Lynn_]

This is the first half of the only erotic story I've written. The point is to build frustration in the reader. I am looking for technical and critical. It's features a girl who's just come of age, is realizing that she's a bit of an exhibitionist, and is teasing & manipulating a man into doing what she wants.

I have my private message on, I think. However, I am unsure of exactly where to post the story for review as I see only instructions on how to submit it. Any help from the forum would be greatly appreicated.

Thanks-Bitties

Posting a story for review isn't allowed on the forums. That's why you only found instructions for submitting stories to the site.

Most people who edit prefer to receive a completed story from the author. Therefore, once you complete yours, and have made as many corrections as possible, then you would look for someone to help.

If you're unsure about the story itself, or what to write for the second half, take some time to read work from the Top Lists in your chosen categories.

 

[MindYaBitness]

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[_Lynn_]

I'm, new here so please be patient with what may seem be basic questions. I got to this forum from another thread that linked here from user who posted a similar question. Which is why I assumed that this is where you went for general review. I'm not looking for a copy editor. I'm looking for users who want to critique what I have so far. Is there a place to do that? Also, once I am completely finished and in need of full editing where do I go to find it? Or, do I simply submit my story to literotica and they assign it to an editor? The process on this site is a bit confusing to me.

You ask on this forum if you want someone to edit your story.

If you want someone to critique what you have, you might find that on this forum, even though it is designed more for editing issues/requests.

You could also post in the Authors Hangout and ask for someone to critique. That's a forum for writers, so you might find help there.

Lit does not assign anyone to edit.

We were all new at one time. No worries.