Unknown Threesome while Blindfolded - Idea

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Hi. I am hoping to find a detailed writer who would like to write a story based on my idea. It is kind of a threesome story which involves 2 straight males and a female.


Ok the idea for this story is

3 Characters - Boyfriend (Shawn)
Girlfriend (Tanya)
Boyfriend's Friend (Brad)

(Names can be changed, and the 2 guys have similar build)

It was summer back then when Shawn met Tanya, they had gone out on several dates for awhile and eventually she became his girlfriend. She didn't really get along with Brad because she thought he was a womanizer and she was trying to change Shawn by getting him to see less of his friend Brad.

Eventually he decided he had enough of her he was sick of her talking Shawn into not seeing him and letting them hang out.

So he thought of a plan to get revenge and to hopefully get rid of her too. So he put his plan into motion and rang Shawn at his work and said he needed to see him because it was very important that he speak with him.

When he meets with him Brad tells Shawn that his girlfriend is having an affair and was actually doing it with some other guy. It takes a bit of convincing but eventually he believes Brad.

Brad eventually got Shawn thinking how so wrong it was to be with his current girlfriend. He started to believe the phrase Brad used bro's before ho's.

Shawn eventually told Brad not to worry cause we will make sure the bitch will pay dearly for what she did, but just what should he do.

Brad said I have an idea but not sure what you would think of it. So he just comes out and tells Shawn his plan.

He says to him "You know how Tanya really hates me. Well the best revenge would be if she was humiliated by fucking me in front of you." Shawn said "Well she would never do that."

Brad tells him "She will if you convince her that you really want to try having sex with her blindfolded all the time"

"If she agrees then that's when the fun begins because once she is blindfolded we both have sex with her by swapping the whole time with out her knowing"

"That way we both have fun while you get your revenge on her, and at the end we can reveal what we have done and she will be humiliated."

(I would like the story to be 1st person perspective. Mostly her perspective but it would be nice to hear the guys perspective too. They could even film it maybe to add to the humiliation)

(I hope someone likes my idea and is interested in writing it. If you are interested in writing it contact me by sending me a private message.)
 
Well it's your story, but the way you set up the situation, the male characters are both really despicable. It's hard to care too much about people who are such arseholes. Especially if you let them get away with their plan; readers are just going to be pissed off.

If it were me, I'd make the girlfriend really be a cheater. And not just any cheater, but a serial, humiliating type of cheater that makes the readers WANT to see her get her comeuppance. Then they will be cheering on the two despicable male leads as their plan unfolds.

Just a thought!
 
Thks for your opinion but I still like my idea and I am still looking for someone to write it.
 
I think it was Mark Twain who once said, "There's no one more qualified to write your story than yourself"
 
If I had the skills to write it myself. I would not have created this thread.

One gains writing skills by writing. By practice.

Here's how: Don't think of it as a 'story'. Think of it as reporting. Actually, think of it as a recording, a show playing in front of your eyes. You see and hear and feel what's happening -- and you're blogging it. You write down the events, actions, words, thoughts, as if you're keeping a blog or diary or journal.

That's your plot and basic story. Now go back and visualize each scene. What does it look-feel-smell-taste like? Where do events take place? Describe these. What else is happening in the story, that you maybe missed on your first pass?

Does your story remind you of other stories you've read? If so, then re-read those stories, see how they're structured -- how words, phrases, sentences and paragraphs are put together. Imitate those for your story. That's how artists learn - by copying other works, to see how they're made.

Nobody starts as a skilled author. Practice practice practice.
 
As one of my former bosses--honor and praise to him!--once said, "None of us were born with this knowledge."

But on the other hand, if you want a well-written story and don't feel you have the chops for that, then asking someone to "ghost write" it for you is perfectly okay.

Hypoxia has a "thing" for getting people to write their own stories. I think she's channeling a third-grade Creative Writing teacher from 50 years ago.

She's right, of course--nobody can tell the story like YOU can, because nobody KNOWS the story like you do. But not everyone has the self-confidence to strike out into the Unknown Wilderness with nothing but an ox, a rifle, and a Plotline...
 
But not everyone has the self-confidence to strike out into the Unknown Wilderness with nothing but an ox, a rifle, and a Plotline...
I prefer a sun hat, a pack of chewing gum (Dentyne, thanks), and a voice recorder. All multi-purpose tools. The ox and the plotline will join with me later.
 
You really should try writing it yourself. What's the worst thing that could happen? There isn't a sole on here that has never written a crappy story.
 
Don't be a heel about it, Hypoxia...step up and take your tongue lashing like a good girl.
 
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