Got an interesting idea for an interracial story, what do you think of it?

[YellowBarroned]

so lately I have had ideas popping into my mind and this one just makes perfect sense.

You have a middle eastern guy in his early 20s who is good looking (have thought about maybe making him indian but middle eastern makes more sense here) who missed out on all the fun of his teenage years because his strict parents did not let him go outside much. Studied hard and got into a good school where there were rarely any hot girls.

Moved to a big city where he got a job that paid a lot of money. Went out but was a bit shy and awkward at bars due to his lack of experience with women. Started seeing "escorts" and ended up seeing many of them.

One day he meets an escort that is an attractive blonde milf who hears about him seeing a lot of escorts and asks him about it. The guy refuses to answer and just goes towards fucking her.

Escort laughs after they are done and mocks him, tells him he lacks sexual experience to please a woman. The man is furious but the escort calms him down by kissing him.

The escort uses the coming weeks and months to teach him how to fuck a woman properly.

 

[loquere]

so lately I have had ideas popping into my mind and this one just makes perfect sense.

You have a middle eastern guy in his early 20s who is good looking (have thought about maybe making him indian but middle eastern makes more sense here) who missed out on all the fun of his teenage years because his strict parents did not let him go outside much. Studied hard and got into a good school where there were rarely any hot girls.

Moved to a big city where he got a job that paid a lot of money. Went out but was a bit shy and awkward at bars due to his lack of experience with women. Started seeing "escorts" and ended up seeing many of them.

One day he meets an escort that is an attractive blonde milf who hears about him seeing a lot of escorts and asks him about it. The guy refuses to answer and just goes towards fucking her.

Escort laughs after they are done and mocks him, tells him he lacks sexual experience to please a woman. The man is furious but the escort calms him down by kissing him.

The escort uses the coming weeks and months to teach him how to fuck a woman properly.

It's good.
I recommend you tackle this one.

 

[callmeismael]

Sure, go for it.

I have some practical considerations though: how will you structure it? The story, following the outline above, would have a character performing a lot of bad sex (which he is unaware of) before he meets his blonde and starts learning about good sex. Readers would probably stick with you through the learning process - that can be a lot of fun. But probably won't stick with you through random not-very-good encounters.

So maybe, start with the his first session with the blonde and then you can explore outward from there and explain how he's been going to escorts for a while. Heck, I'd even be tempted to start it with the aftermath of their first encounter, with her mocking him. You don't need to have the sex scene to tell the reader he's bad at sex: an escort mocking him gets that across far better. (Plus, writing about bad sex is far harder than writing about good sex.) Lean on your dialogue and let your characters tell their stories to one another, rather than you telling them to the reader. Flesh her out a little more, too: why is she interested in taking this guy under her wing? What does she see in him? Is she just trying to milk as many paying sessions as she can out of him, or does she have some deeper reasons?

One element you alluded to is his lack of talking. He just fucks her. Maybe drawing him out and getting him to communicate, tell her about himself, who he is both personally and sexually, is part of that process by which she shapes him into a better lover. His sexual prowess is represented by his ability to talk intimately, honestly and yet comfortably.