Story idea about Wife at retail sports job...

[housek]

I have a great story idea inspired by true events. My wife works for a large retail sports chain...shes in mid 40's but looks a lot younger. She loves working with all the younger people and soon starts going out after work with groups of them...lots of drinking and flirting and she ends up in the car of a few of her co-worker guy friends that are half her age giving them head. She gets more involved with one and starts blowing him whenever he asks...its usually once a week but it has been a couple times a week. I have way more details and would love to turn this into a story but would need somebody's assistance writing it...Im open for discussion here...

thanks

 

[Courier345]

1, Thats really hot.
2, if you need any help feel free to get in touch, but I wont write the story.

 

[rpc35]

love the concept

I love wife stories and this would be a great one.

couple questions:
1. is your wife reluctant at all when hooking up with the young guys at work?
2. does she seduce them or do they seduce her?
3. is open about this with you? (the husband) or hiding it?


other comments:
1. in my opinion there needs to be some sort of conflict or tension in the story otherwise its just porn
2. also needs a beginning, middle and end. Beginning is her flirting, middle is seduction / sex but whats the end? where is the story going?

 

[Hypoxia]

2. also needs a beginning, middle and end. Beginning is her flirting, middle is seduction / sex but whats the end? where is the story going?

The usual possible endpoints: 1) acceptance; 2) swinging; 3) divorce; 4) murder.

Well, #4 (murder) doesn't leave much room for sequels. The other three can run on forever. If #3, the divorcees can later hookup with others for the same behavior. If #1 or #2, the story / series can go S2P (Straight To Pr0n).

 

[subwannabe]

Why do you need a story when you've got the real thing?

 

[housek]

Dear rpc35,
To answer your questions...
1. She is not reluctant and honestly enjoys all the attention and flirting...she hooked up with 3 different guys, but just for oral.
2.Its a mutual flirtation that grows while drinking with them after work...shes aggressive with them...they brag and she tells them to prove it...and it progressed with 3 different guys.
3. and yes, I do know everything. I am a willing participant in this...just not really participating, until she comes home that is!

There is a point of tension because she has sort of settled on this one guy...lots of texting ...lots...and there seems to be a bit of progression in their relationship...possibly how it will effect our relationship too...maybe that is also where the story is going...Im not sure.

I do welcome more input and interest in helping write...

 

[LWulf]

The usual possible endpoints: 1) acceptance; 2) swinging; 3) divorce; 4) murder.

Well, #4 (murder) doesn't leave much room for sequels. ...

Oh ye of little creativity. Haven't you ever read a marvel comic book in your life... ever? Death is never permanent. Even if you haven't, haven't you ever watched a Buffy TVS episode? Death is never permanent.

...Do you see a certain motif going on here?

Silliness (or not) aside, OP, are you suggesting a story for another to write or are you asking for help on your own?

 

[StrayKat]

I really like the
- murder
- whoever was murdered comes back to haunt them
- exorcism
- another murder
and so on, option.

But then I have to admit I have been skipping all the "sexy scenes" in my readings lately

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh ye of little creativity. Haven't you ever read a marvel comic book in your life... ever? Death is never permanent. Even if you haven't, haven't you ever watched a Buffy TVS episode? Death is never permanent.

...Do you see a certain motif going on here?

Silliness (or not) aside, OP, are you suggesting a story for another to write or are you asking for help on your own?

First, in Buffy plenty of people died. If you weren't a hot blonde (female) death was going to take you and not give you back and lets not even talk Vampire Diaries. Considering its a show about immortals who can bring you back from the dead death is surprisingly effective there!

I'm still curious how we jumped straight to murder.

 

[LWulf]

First, in Buffy plenty of people died. If you weren't a hot blonde (female) death was going to take you and not give you back and lets not even talk Vampire Diaries. Considering its a show about immortals who can bring you back from the dead death is surprisingly effective there!

I'm still curious how we jumped straight to murder.

Of course plenty of people died. How do you think vamps are made? Yet, isn't the act of making a person a vam-pyre bringing them back from the dead? Then again, a lot of vampires died too which is what described how successful a slayer our little Buffy was.

meh. Murder, or as Paul Winfield used to say in City Confidential "Muuur-derrr," is sometimes an interesting subject.

 

[Hypoxia]

I'm still curious how we jumped straight to murder.

Murder is apparently more fun than acceptance, swinging, or divorce. And Buffy is more fun than OP housek's freewheeling wife. Go figure.

BTW housek, how much does she tell you of her adventures? Do you believe her? Why? If she had moved beyond blowjobs, would she inform you? Would she tell you anyway, as a tease or roleplay, even if she hadn't had penetrative sex? How is alcohol involved - mild highs, rip-roaring drunks, or what?

Without knowing more details from you, I'd take this approach, *IF* I were to write this up: Judy is as you say. She feels sexy and empowered by the attention of much younger male cow-orkers, "the guys". She DOES like to drink, and when she's had a few, she's very horny. She starts her life of middle-age fun by blowing "the guys" after work. And again. And again. Then, there's a hot-tub session, where she blows and fucks "the guys" and enjoys DP or TP. At the next session. in a bigger spa, "the guys" bring friends. She pulls a train.

Where to go from there? Does Judy tell her hubby Ken everything? Anything? I don't write willing wimp stories, so I won't cast Ken as a wittol. I can envisage a scenario where Judy sees that Ken is excited and uneasy at her accounts. She worries about losing him, so she convinces a younger female friend or cow-orker to seduce Ken. Ken loves the variety, and wants more. Judy and Ken move into a swinging lifestyle. The series can then go S2P (straight-to-pr0n) -- everybody fucks happily ever after.

*OR* Judy becomes addicted to trains and multiple penetrations, is bored with Ken, and drifts away. Now we have an LW tale that can have: 1) a nasty BTB ending, maybe with death and/or destruction; or 2) a fill-in-the-blanks ending that invites sequels by others; or 3) an amicable divorce, with Judy and Ken both heading on to greener fields of free-for-all-sex. Now we're S2P again.

But if you want to stick to reality, you should write the story yourself. Nobody knows your story better than you do. Don't think of it as a plotted literary labor. Think, blog entries. Write it as a journal account: what happened when and where and with whom; what your wife told you, what others tell you, what you've found for yourself; and what you feel and think about it.

Be sure to plagiarize.

 

[LWulf]

<----

... Now we have an LW tale that can have:

What do you mean an LW tale???

Oh... you meant Loving Wives.

****

I'd follow what Hypoxia said about writing it yourself. You are the most informed person relative to anybody else here.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Murder is fun. I can attest to that, and I meant and stayed dead you silly heads.

But I'm down for murder most foul. It's nothing I haven't written before. I had a story where some SOB was drown in a toilet!

You might want to write this yourself, but I might take a crack at it if my schedule clears up. It's an interesting concept.

 

[housek]

Hypoxia and Sean,

First, I am not into the murder subplot here...

If I am going to go in a direction with this story there will be a sexual progression...in fact that would be the truth of the matter. I am pretty sue I know all things she has done but maybe not all the details. She does have a free pass on going out and what happens does...I do know that two of the guys are good friends and am sure told each other about being with her...it is possible more guys know what she is into there at her work. She does like to drink and when she does, she is horny and easily persuaded for things...trust me...

we have discussed her doing more and she wants to especially with the one guy...hes very large apparently. I do understand this is a LW or Cuck story...maybe I should try and write it, I do like the blog entry idea...but SEAN, I would welcome your take...as long as I don't get killed in the end...I can provide more details if needed...this is ongoing.

 

[SDLRob]

It depends on where you wanna take it. Do you want to keep it with the story staying true to you and your wife's sexual preferences or do you want the story to just go wild?

 

[Hypoxia]

First, I am not into the murder subplot here...

I didn't really think you would be. I'm surprised my off-hand mention caught fire. Pervs here.

If I am going to go in a direction with this story there will be a sexual progression...in fact that would be the truth of the matter.

That's why we eagerly await the story, the details. Where does she go (metaphorically) and does she take you along? Do you have adventures paralleling hers, whether in reality or fantasy?

 

[LWulf]

I guess the OP decided to ignore my request about whether they are writing or suggesting a storyline for another to write.

I'm less inclined to help with a story line that someone else might write, especially if the idea dries up and withers on the floor. If the OP was asking for help, that's another thing. At least they are motivated to using any ideas put forth into a story.

I still see that being murdered and becoming a ghost as cuckold.