Ghost/Nerd/Incest

[loquere]

->>After a nerd college freshman's first week on campus, he realizes the hot senior he's been dateing is a ghost.
-She admits she was killed by her professor father
-She had been having a sexual relationship with him
-When she got pregnant & refused to abort, they got into a heated argument & he killed her

 

[LadyVer]

Interesting.

 

[loquere]

Interesting.

Yeah it's kind of fucked.

-The ghosts mother originally dies of heart failure, thats how (ghost)daughter & father connect with each other.
-The nerd guy investigates and finds out the father poisoned the mother.
-The story ends with the father going to prison for the murder of his wife & daughter.

 

[LadyVer]

Does sound a bit noir. Any humor playing into this?

 

[loquere]

Does sound a bit noir. Any humor playing into this?

Have I ever written anything funny?

 

[LadyVer]

Have I ever written anything funny?

I recall a few humorous lines and scenes.

 

[Hypoxia]

->>After a nerd college freshman's first week on campus, he realizes the hot senior he's been dateing is a ghost.
<...>
-The story ends with the father going to prison for the murder of his wife & daughter.

Ghosts are usually rather insubstantial. How did the nerd interact with the ghost-girl during his hot week? I assume they didn't fuck. Did he discover her ghostliness by trying to touch her?

If the murdered girl's ghost is on the scene, is her murdered mother's ghost nearby too? Does mom's ghost interact with living humans, like the nerd, or the murderous prof?

Does sound a bit noir. Any humor playing into this?

Well let's see, the nerd could do a three-way with both ghosts, but he doesn't really get physical satisfaction, just visual stimulation from watching them going down on each other. Hilarity ensues, right?

 

[Carnevil9]

Ghosts are usually rather insubstantial. How did the nerd interact with the ghost-girl during his hot week? I assume they didn't fuck. Did he discover her ghostliness by trying to touch her?

Well let's see, the nerd could do a three-way with both ghosts, but he doesn't really get physical satisfaction, just visual stimulation from watching them going down on each other. Hilarity ensues, right?

There's not a ghost of a chance of that three-way happening.

As for the insubstantialness issue, well, you can always fall back on re-interpreting the ghost details. If vampires can sparkle, certainly ghosts can achieve an essential physicality, when they need it. Who says ghosts in your universe have to conform to the popular concept of ghosts?

Or, if you don't like that idea, you could have the ghost inhabit other, living bodies (with or against their will). Maybe the nerd has a hot but platonic female housemate that the ghost can take over for sex sessions. This even gives us a side plot, and a handy resolution: once the murders are solved, and the ghosts all move on to rest in peace, the housemate suddenly finds that she has feelings for the nerd, unaware that her body has been having sex with him for weeks by this time without her conscious knowledge.

 

[loquere]

Ghosts are usually rather insubstantial. How did the nerd interact with the ghost-girl during his hot week? I assume they didn't fuck. Did he discover her ghostliness by trying to touch her?

If the murdered girl's ghost is on the scene, is her murdered mother's ghost nearby too? Does mom's ghost interact with living humans, like the nerd, or the murderous prof?


Well let's see, the nerd could do a three-way with both ghosts, but he doesn't really get physical satisfaction, just visual stimulation from watching them going down on each other. Hilarity ensues, right?

Well, a writer has the authority to do whatever in there world. How logical is Superman? I'm making her seem real in every way, she cums like a real woman, she screams like a real woman her nipples are like a real woman's and her pussy quivers grips and drips like a real woman's. A WRITER IS MASTER & COMMANDER!

You got me all worked up I feel like writing it, right now. However I have another incest idea on my cum back list.