Two more unbuttoned.

[Lazy_lay]

Tasha was home from college, and her dad was having his like-clockwork Thursday night poker game with his friends. There were five of them, laughing out there and cutting coarse jokes. She opened the fridge door and got the beers, putting them on the little tray and lifting it up with one hand.

Then she put it down, smirking, and looked at her reflection in the microwave glass front. Hair okay, lipstick mmm.... She unbuttoned the top button on her blue blouse, grabbed the tray and sidled out with a wide, dopey grin.

Her dad frowned, staring at her. The table was suddenly quiet as she approached. She handed the beers out one by one and stood back. Jake and Lenny thanked her, the others were too busy oogling her tight black yoga pants and that blue blouse. Or maybe it was the blond hair and the bright red lipstick, the long lashes, the blue eyes. Maybe, she thought, it was the smell lingering on her from her little bit of fun a few hours back. Thinking of that made her laugh.

"Tasha, you can leave now so we can play. Run along!"

She nodded, blinked twice, and went back to the kitchen. But she heard them, and slowed down to listen....

"Damn, Milfred! That's your daughter? Shit, if I didn't know that-"
"I don't care if she's his daughter, I'd do her in a heartbeat."
And then her dad. "You really would, Joe?"
"Hey...I'm sorry man, I just mean....I don't think I could help myself, if I had a chance, yeah..."
Lenny added "I would too, she's hot. She's really, really hot."
Eugene said "Milfred, I'm in love. Can I marry her? Tonight?"
Lenny "I got her, man. At least, let me have her mouth. We can share."
Lenny "Deal. I'll pump her right, you'll be going down that throat."
Joe "Man, you bred a good girl there."

She softly shut the kitchen door and leaned against the wall. Tasha felt a warm glow inside. They liked her! She unbuttoned two more buttons, enough to allow her big breasts to look like they wanted to explode from that blouse.

Maybe she could take them some chips. And salsa.

 

[DirtyAllie]

I know this is all fantasy, but I tried to imagine this happening with my step daughter. Her walking into the basement where my husbands is shooting pool with his friends and then them saying "I want her mouth" "I'd pump her right"

Even one of those disaster clean up services wouldn't be able to get all that blood out of the floor.

 

[Lazy_lay]

I know this is all fantasy, but I tried to imagine this happening with my step daughter. Her walking into the basement where my husbands is shooting pool with his friends and then them saying "I want her mouth" "I'd pump her right"

Even one of those disaster clean up services wouldn't be able to get all that blood out of the floor.

I had a bit of a different take on it. Dad ACTS offended...but in reality...

Tasha paused at the door with the chips and salsa, and thought back over the instructions Dad had given her. Blink if it was a pair, shake her tits for three of a kind, frown if the mark had a straight or four of a kind. There were so many of those rules! But she had practiced them. He'd helped. And she was in for a third of the take tonight, which was good.

Tasha walked back out.

 

[LWulf]

I don't prefer incest stories myself, though I described an incestuous relationship of sorts in one story I wrote. I took the creative route by using actors portraying family members as a means to soften that concept.

Point of fact, and remember all incest relationships in stories must involve adults, Woody Allen had an incestuous relationship with his adoptive (thus it could be reasoned...) "stepdaughter." This act signified the end of his relationship with his wife, who was not her daughter's blood relation, but that's besides the point.

My point is, it DOES happen, so this story could fly with the right spin...

 

[Lazy_lay]

I don't prefer incest stories myself, though I described an incestuous relationship of sorts in one story I wrote. I took the creative route by using actors portraying family members as a means to soften that concept.

Point of fact, and remember all incest relationships in stories must involve adults, Woody Allen had an incestuous relationship with his adoptive (thus it could be reasoned...) "stepdaughter." This act signified the end of his relationship with his wife, who was not her daughter's blood relation, but that's besides the point.

My point is, it DOES happen, so this story could fly with the right spin...

No mention...so far...of the wife. No explicit relationship is stated between dad and daughter, except they are working a con. Note DirtyAllie's comment...the guys playing poker are not exactly nice guys, either. They are crude and rough. Maybe they are worse than that - actual crooks of one sort or another.

All the characters are twisted, perverted, interesting, complicated maniacs.

And the night is young.

 

[DirtyAllie]

I had a bit of a different take on it. Dad ACTS offended...but in reality...

Tasha paused at the door with the chips and salsa, and thought back over the instructions Dad had given her. Blink if it was a pair, shake her tits for three of a kind, frown if the mark had a straight or four of a kind. There were so many of those rules! But she had practiced them. He'd helped. And she was in for a third of the take tonight, which was good.

Tasha walked back out.

That is clever. But on its own I don't think it would carry for a story.

One direction(no, not the band!) would be the incest idea that after the friends leave dad is all hot and bothered from his friends drooling over his little girl like she's a trophy wife and he rewards her for her help.

Another would be dad being annoyed at his flirty daughter and gets pissed and yells at her in front of his friends. She's mad and as revenge as each of his friends goes to the bathroom she slips in drops down and blows them or maybe lifts her skirt up and lets them fuck her quick over the sink.

 

[LWulf]

Well, both stories yours and allie's twist, sounds good. Unnecessary complicated, no.
One story I read had this complicated relationship between this one girl, her aunt (by marriage) and the enmity between the aunt and the girl's mother. The writer explained this really complicated association and how a revenge fuck wasn't a revenge fuck... all for, no reason. It made good drama I guess.

My point is, keep everything complicated by all means to make it interesting, but make it relevant to the story that is happening, or in a future chapter 2, fine, ok. Just don't simply make it a celtic knot simply because... it's cool.

Most readers aren't going to appreciate that.

 

[DirtyAllie]

Well, both stories yours and allie's twist, sounds good. Unnecessary complicated, no.
One story I read had this complicated relationship between this one girl, her aunt (by marriage) and the enmity between the aunt and the girl's mother. The writer explained this really complicated association and how a revenge fuck wasn't a revenge fuck... all for, no reason. It made good drama I guess.

My point is, keep everything complicated by all means to make it interesting, but make it relevant to the story that is happening, or in a future chapter 2, fine, ok. Just don't simply make it a celtic knot simply because... it's cool.

Most readers aren't going to appreciate that.

Seems like there are two types of complicated here. One is just more along the lines of involved, lot of back story maybe converging plot lines and it all works as long as the author can move it along without it seeming like your reading that part of the bible "and so and so begat who begat who begat..."

Some authors achieve that because although the story is complex their style is not. But when it fails its like reading stereo instructions and its more work than it needs to be

Guess its all about flow.

 

[Lazy_lay]

That is clever. But on its own I don't think it would carry for a story.

One direction(no, not the band!) would be the incest idea that after the friends leave dad is all hot and bothered from his friends drooling over his little girl like she's a trophy wife and he rewards her for her help.

Another would be dad being annoyed at his flirty daughter and gets pissed and yells at her in front of his friends. She's mad and as revenge as each of his friends goes to the bathroom she slips in drops down and blows them or maybe lifts her skirt up and lets them fuck her quick over the sink.

I actually wasn't thinking about incest but since you brought it up....

Lots of times, girls rebel and hate their parents. Lots of time there are good reasons for that. This girl (leave the con artist plot aside for a moment) could be simply doing her best to try to piss off Dad. Yes, she acts totally wantom slut. Yes, she does one or two of the creepy, moronic poker players in the bathroom. Not because she wanted to fuck, because she wanted to piss off Dad. Of course maybe that makes her cum much more intensely....

And Dad puts up with it, seething inside.

But later....comes the spanking....

 

[lovecraft68]

I actually wasn't thinking about incest but since you brought it up....

Lots of times, girls rebel and hate their parents. Lots of time there are good reasons for that. This girl (leave the con artist plot aside for a moment) could be simply doing her best to try to piss off Dad. Yes, she acts totally wantom slut. Yes, she does one or two of the creepy, moronic poker players in the bathroom. Not because she wanted to fuck, because she wanted to piss off Dad. Of course maybe that makes her cum much more intensely....

And Dad puts up with it, seething inside.

But later....comes the spanking....

Interesting, almost like a sort of dad cuckold thing. Dad knows she's slutting with his friends and is appalled, but keeps having them come back because in a sick way it turns him on and yes, he punishes her for it every time.

I'm not too big into dad/daughter, but could see how it could work.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

Interesting, almost like a sort of dad cuckold thing. Dad knows she's slutting with his friends and is appalled, but keeps having them come back because in a sick way it turns him on and yes, he punishes her for it every time.

I'm not too big into dad/daughter, but could see how it could work.

Twisting the idea a bit further - the dad as cuckold twist has lots of potential for this twisted brain. Dad is frustrated that she would whore herself out to his friends. Worse, he's afraid of being revealed as the cuck he is. Would allow for some fun puffery on the dad's part as his daughter keeps amping things up until dad is left on the sidelines, watching his precious daughter being taken every which way between here and Sunday.

Otherwise, what the OP originally wrote was damn good and Lazy should finish their idea!

 

[sirhugs]

Daughter notices dad's anger- fears he will ban her from the games...so she arranges for one of her friends...

 

[Lazy_lay]

Daughter notices dad's anger- fears he will ban her from the games...so she arranges for one of her friends...

After the poker game, dad has won $8000 from the marks, who included the town sheriff, the head of the local bank, and the Baptist minister. It was only at Dad's Thursday poker game they could let it all hang out.

After they all left, there was a long, angry shouting match between daughter and Dad, in which she slapped him hard, and he then grabbed her, put her over his knee, and started to give her the spanking that she really deserved. How she'd embarrassed him! He'd almost lost his concentration and his card counts! She needed to behave. Well, a little bit of show and some skin for the marks was okay, but tonight was just too much!

SMACK! He got even madder thinking about when she'd gone to the sheriff to hand him a beer, and standing there between his legs, had moved her knee up right against his package. SMACK! He'd jerked her yoga pants down to spank her on her bare bottom, just like he'd done when she was thirteen and being bad. She had a little thong on, so her ass was basically bare over his knees. And it was good and red and getting redder. He'd show her! The anger doubled. Shaming him like that1

SMACK! He remembered when she'd handed the beer to the Doc, leaning over the table and one of her tits had come right out of that blouse! SMACK! That tit had just hung there in the open, with that hard, erect nipple pointed toward Doc's three of a kind, as she looked across to him and blinked, signaling the hand. SMACK! Tasha was sobbing now, with the pain. And she should, she'd been so very, very bad. Dad raised his hand again when...

DING DONG! DING DONG!

Now who would be ringing the damn doorbell at this hour, he wondered.

<<No, dad's not a nice guy. Daughter's working the con with him, and she's got good reason to hate him. The bunch that come to play are complete assholes. And now, someone's at the door...>>