Writers block for my next chapter of my incest story

[Libby1993]

Hello everyone!

Hope you are having a wonderful day! Having a bit of a writer's block for my 3rd chapter of my "Libby succumbs to temptation" story!

If you have read it Libby and her father has just been caught by a waitress fucking in a public restroom. The waitress, Sarah, took an incriminating photo and ran off. Kind of thought of a bit of a blackmail scenario before Sarah can't help but get sucked in. Not sure if that is cliched or even that plausible, I like to be as plausible and realistic as possible.

Anyone have any suggestions? Please feel free to read through my stories, am no professional writer. Just write for fun.

Thank you

Libby xxx

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think you threw plausible out the window a few stops ago, not that it's a bad thing by definition. Sometimes ignoring reality is quite fun.

 

[lovecraft68]

I think you threw plausible out the window a few stops ago, not that it's a bad thing by definition. Sometimes ignoring reality is quite fun.

I need to learn that art.

I mean with the exception of the initial concept of 18 plus fun fantasy incest bending reality I end up falling into, "Okay, that's too much"

My style is to attempt to take the implausible breaking of society's taboo and trying to make it plausible.

Mostly. I did one stroke story "Sharing mom... with dad." Title speaks for itself.

I admit it was fun to toss reason to the wind. I felt wanton and reckless! Like I had just ripped the tag from a mattress!

yet the story was still 4 lit pages.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Ignoring reality doesn't mean short and to the point. It means accepting that certain rules don't apply because you don't feel like it. To use the above example we've got a waitress, (I admit I haven't read the story) but apparently without any "good" reason taking pictures of a couple having sex. From there she's going to attempt to blackmail them. Realistic scenarios? Not particularly. But this is fiction and I use this man because he's possibly the most absurd concept that everybody accepts without question but we right stories about a rich kid who's parents were killed and he dresses up like a flying rat fighting a clown, a clay monster and a man who leaves brain teasers for the police.

 

[MyGuiltySecret]

Maybe focus on the waitress for a bit?

OK, I have to admit that I haven't read your stories yet. (But I enjoy incest stories, so I will read them in the near future).

Anyway, just going by what you've said about them, here's my idea of one way to carry it on.

Focus on the waitress for a bit. Sure, she considered blackmail, but then she decided against it. Her sex life sucks. Maybe she's not got a boyfriend, maybe he's just lousy in bed. Whatever the reason, she starts obsessing about the photos. They're just so hot and sexy! She masturbates to them a lot, fantasizing about joining in...

The dad and daughter avoid the restaurant for a while, but eventually figure they've got away with it. They go back for a meal, and the waitress is the one serving them. Everyone's a bit nervous and embarrassed, but the waitress starts making suggestive comments. Everyone loosens up a bit... They end up teasing each other, being very sexual in the conversation.

After this, it could go one of two ways.

Either, the dad leaves a message with the tip at the end of the meal. Something like 'if you want to do more than talk, meet us in the carpark." Wild and kinky sex ensues.

Or, perhaps the father and daughter are so turned on, they decide to have sex in the carpark. Waitress follows, and is so turned on by watching them that she hides and masturbates. This time, she's the one who is caught. Wild and kinky sex ensues

What do you think? Hope you like the ideas, and that either you decide to use one or that at least they clear some of your writer's block enough to have some better ideas of your own.

 

[MyGuiltySecret]

Plausibility

I like stories that are at least reasonably plausible. For me, that tends to mean that people have a motive for what they are doing.

Nobody just rips their clothes off and demands to be fucked. Or if they do, it's because they are drunk, stoned or just been driven crazy by being teased and aroused for hours/days/weeks and just can't stand it any more!

Any outlandish situation can be made plausible if you just take the time to figure out why (and how) the characters got there, and why it was almost inevitable that they did what they're doing.

 

[loquere]

How about they kill the waitress. Death is always interesting.

-Waitress tries to blackmail daughter for money
-Daughter seduces waitress
-Hot lesbian sex
-Daughter ties waitress to bed
-Daughter stabs waitress in the gut & leaves her to bleed out

--> If you don't want to be so dark. Waitress survives by being brought to the hospital but is so scared she promises not to say anything.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I like stories that are at least reasonably plausible. For me, that tends to mean that people have a motive for what they are doing.

Nobody just rips their clothes off and demands to be fucked. Or if they do, it's because they are drunk, stoned or just been driven crazy by being teased and aroused for hours/days/weeks and just can't stand it any more!

Any outlandish situation can be made plausible if you just take the time to figure out why (and how) the characters got there, and why it was almost inevitable that they did what they're doing.

Naaah. You might be amazed at how much pussy you can get with a polite request at an appropriate place. It never ceased to amaze me when I visited clients and mom had no idea who she was sleeping with in her own bed. I often introduced them to each other. This is Mary Jane Rottencrotch, now who are you? I be Leroy.

 

[Hypoxia]

You might be amazed at how much pussy you can get with a polite request at an appropriate place.

The most successful pickup line is HEY, WANNA FUCK? Ask often enough, and one is rewarded.

 

[sirhugs]

my suggestion, having quickly scrolled through the stories...


Waitress goes to sell the pic to wife/mother, but wife is NOT as conservative as dad thinks... she laughs, buys the pic, then confronts Dad & Libby ... and demands to join in...

they then seduce the waitress (unless wife had her tied up in the laundry room the whole time).

 

[LWulf]

The question of plausibility isn't really a question. The question is your ability to make what seems implausible, as plausible is. You have to sell the idea that the blackmail concept sells.

People/writers/readers here are going to scoff at the concept because it's not about content but your ability.

People think that blackmail isn't a real concept nowadays, yet coercion is very much an active law and lawsuits pop up about people who use it to make other people do what they normally wouldn't.
That the people who are coerced "go with it" for a time is what most people can't accept. This is where you have to have ability describing what motivates the coerced into complying with their blackmailer.

The question of cliche is another matter altogether. It is possible that the direction you take it is very cliche, but allow me to be apple polisher who says "go for it!" You might find a wrinkle that isn't so cliche. EVERYTHING is cliche to a degree if you believe ancient Greek philosophers.

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Not sure what help you are looking for regarding a writer's block since you didn't really give a plot and said "the problem is I can't figure out what to do next...???" So I'm not going to be much help there, until you do.
It just seems you need a shot in the arm of confidence to follow your own concept through...

 

[FFFan]

I think a situation where the dad goes in full of piss and vinegar to get the photo from Sarah and she gets turned on and they hook up, during which time she starts calling him daddy.

Daddy then knows she is his.

 

[SDLRob]

I admit I've not read the story, but if I may...

Maybe have the waitress contront the mother/wife with the evidence. In the subsequent arguement, you would have the waitress admit she's masturbated to the photo, to which the mother badgers her to admit which one. When the Waitress admits it was the daughter that aroused her more, the bi-curious mother ends up seducing her.

If you want another twist, the mother is also secretly aroused by the daughter, but hasn't made a move as she doesn't know if the daughter is into women, so she gets the waitress to attempt a seduction of both, resulting in an eventual foursome.

 

[loquere]

Public sex.