Story request: Younger girl dom her older sister.

[Vman21]

Some time ago, I dated a girl that would delight in teasing, picking on and basically bulling her sister that was a year older. It was real exciting and I am still surprised how far she took things with her sister. I would love to have this captured in story format. Please let me know if you have a interest in penning this masterpiece. I can provide details.

 

[Blind_Justice]

Some time ago, I dated a girl that would delight in teasing, picking on and basically bulling her sister that was a year older. It was real exciting and I am still surprised how far she took things with her sister. I would love to have this captured in story format. Please let me know if you have a interest in penning this masterpiece. I can provide details.

... only if they are 18 and 19 respectively. Anything else is a no-go here.

 

[Hypoxia]

... only if they are 18 and 19 respectively. Anything else is a no-go here.

Well, the teasing could start when one or both were under 18, but sexual situations with minors is prohibited here. Unless they're aliens or werewolves or reincarnated or something. Let's see, a 3 year old werewolf would be 18 in dog years, right? And a millennia-old Dax could occupy a nubile young body, right? But if you're writing about ordinary humans, the rules are firm.

 

[observer7]

Bleh. Has the younger one jumped off a water tower yet?

 

[Vman21]

Blind Justice, here is the deal. The girl I dated (really pretty petite, sexy blond) was one year younger than her older sister. According to her, ever since she can remember, her older sister was a natural follower. As they reached their mid teens, my girlfriend started to take advantage of the situation and actually enjoyed the controlling aspects of light domination. A lot of mind games. The older sister moved out of state for roughly a year but things did not work out for her. She returned home when she was 21 years old and my girlfriend was 20. When she returned, the mind games did advance into a little more physical. It was at this point, that she started to share a lot of this activity with me & I found it pretty exciting. Looking back, I realize how crazy this was. So to answer your question, yes, they are both of age. Can you write this into a intense story? I am not a writer but sense this could be the next
big hit if the right writer can put this experience into words. Is this something you can do?

 

[Hypoxia]

A couple other recent forum posts have asked for stories to be written to order. My advice to you is the same as I gave there: Write it yourself! It doesn't matter if you're a 'writer' or not. YOU know the story better than anyone else.

You don't need to agonize, trying to create a literary masterpiece. Have you ever kept a diary, journal, blog? Write your story that way. Lay out a diary-type account of events, day by significant day. That's your framework. Then throw in as many details as you can stand. Some might even be true!

Write all that. Do it now. Then wait a couple days and read it, and rewrite it. Maybe send it to a volunteer editor for advice. But it's YOUR damn story! You own it. Have fun!