Intellectual college student explores sex for her studies.

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The lead character is extremely smart, and she goes to a top tier university.

Maybe she's working on a Master's Degree on human psychology. Her thesis has an emphasis on female sexuality in the modern age. It's very complex.

Perhaps her research is groundbreaking, and she puts a lot of work into it so that her studies would get recognition. She interviews a number of female college students, but she realizes that the only way to truly understand modern sexuality is by exploring it herself.

The turning point in the story is when looks in the mirror and removes her glasses. She puts her hair down, and wears make up. She bought a new outfit, and tries it on. She's always been pretty, but she tries to make herself look sexy, and succeeds.

What happens next?

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?
 
Love the idea! You could juxtapose her previously clinical mind with her new found feelings and interactions?
 
Hi,

Great Idea, I really think you should consider working on this yourself. The story could be about female sexuality in a post-feminist age, and could explore these themes, with the characters own developing sexuality. I think there should be a conflict between her feminist critique ideals, and her own increasingly dark sexual desires. Feminists argue the 'personal' is political and she is worried what these hidden desires mean for her.



She aims to study female sexuality, but unintentionally, she becomes the subject of her own study.
 
The lead character is extremely smart, and she goes to a top tier university.

Maybe she's working on a Master's Degree on human psychology. Her thesis has an emphasis on female sexuality in the modern age. It's very complex.

Perhaps her research is groundbreaking, and she puts a lot of work into it so that her studies would get recognition. She interviews a number of female college students, but she realizes that the only way to truly understand modern sexuality is by exploring it herself.

The turning point in the story is when looks in the mirror and removes her glasses. She puts her hair down, and wears make up. She bought a new outfit, and tries it on. She's always been pretty, but she tries to make herself look sexy, and succeeds.

What happens next?

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?

I would have her go out, find a nice guy, and get laid. It's OK, but doesn't really send her to the moon. She thinks about it some more, goes out a week later and finds another guy. It's a little better this time. She's starting to see what all the fuss is about. She's also getting more confident in her ability to meet men. She does it again the following weekend with the second guy, but he's not as attentive the second time. He thinks she's into him, so he takes shortcuts and it isn't as good for her. She cums, but she leaves very unsatisfied.

She goes out a few weeks later and decides to try another stranger. It's the best sex yet. The guy pushes all her buttons and rockets go off for her. She comes to the conclusion that guys try harder the first time, so she only goes out with them one time.

She thinks its time to push the envelope a little, and hooks up with a woman. It doesn't do anything for her.

So the next time she drinks too much and finds herself in a threesome with two guys. Unfortunately, these guys aren't like the nice guys she was hooking up with previously. Her impaired condition attracted a couple of predators, and her impaired judgment prevented her from realizing that she was in trouble. In minutes she finds out that she's in way over her head. She tries to call it off, but they aren't having any of it. They take turns with her over and over. Part of her enjoys it, but part of her is scared to death.

She wakes up the next morning in a cheap motel room. Her clothes are gone, along with her purse.

That's where I would go with it, but that's just me.
 
Basically this is a transformation story. That you say she takes off her glasses and lets down her hair, assuming that wasn't a metaphor, describes the "ugly duckling" scenario. As such, it seems a little milquetoast to me.

Don't get me wrong, some folks like those sorts of stories. In that respect, the story comes across as plausible real life.

Trying to put an interesting twist, to make it more catchy, unfortunately makes it cliche: e.g. she becomes a prostitute to find out as much about sex as she can.

As such, I think your story concept is fine, as is, but I wouldn't have an interest in it.

This was actually a subtext story line in the movie "Mall Rats" where one 16 year old college student was sleeping with guys to develop a thesis on human sexuality and had secured movie rights along with a book deal from a big publisher to document her life story.
 
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