Rookie Mistake

evilbill

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*first person*
interior. modern home.
So I'm an electrician been doing some work in this well to do home. The husband is away. The lady of the house is a sort of strict, fifty plus matriarch wearing glasses and done up in a blouse and tight but formal skirt. I'm 35 and been about a bit, about 7 inch cock and I like to keep the hair neat.....

I'm doing some odds and sods about the house and while doing some work in the master bedroom (which has mirrored wardrobes on two sides) I get a nasty burn across the thigh. "shit" I yell, then think I've been a fool so keep my mouth shut. The lady of the house, let's call her Sindy comes in and asks what's wrong. I say nothing, just a minor burn and point to the bit of my trouser that is burned. "let's have a look" she says. i show her and she say "look, I'm trained in first aid, I need to have a proper look". So she gets to her knees and removes my jeans. It should be said at this point that I was out on a job and was only wearing pretty skimpy briefs today. She pulled down my trousers and examined the minor burn on my upper thigh. "hmm, looks nasty but probably nothing" she said. I looked down at her, tight hair in a bun, big eyes under large glasses and best of all, big tits under a demure blouse and was that a tight backside I saw in the mirror behind us?

"look, hold on a sec let me apply the ointment she said to me as she caressed my inner thigh, seemingly oblivious to the effect she was having on me. I realised that I could see down her top while she caressed oh so near my balls that I must have lost tack of where I was and she said "oh" as my manhood started to fill my briefs a bit too much. "sorry" I said, "the view must have gotten the better of me". "that's okay!" she replied, I don't mind. She continued to stroke my thigh but I noticed she wasn't applying ointment any more, just stroking. I looked away, trying not to think of what was happening and then she yelped and giggled...... I looked down and realised my cock was now rising above the waistband of my briefs and in clear view. "I'm really really sorry" I apologised, thinking to explain myself I said "looking down at a woman like you in a position like that is a bit of a thing for me". "really" she replied. "I'm very flattered to see a young cock act like that toward me". She leaned back for a second and then said "maybe if I...." and as she said it she slid my briefs down.......

Now I was just a naked man, standing with an erect cock in front of a middle aged woman on her knees. We stood like that for a few moments. Then slowly, oh so slowly she leaned forward and kissed the tip of my penis. Just a little peck. It drove me wild.

Then she pulled back, looked up at me and said...."go and sit on the edge of my bed"

I did as I was told. Whilst I did so she pulled off her boring clothes to reveal beautifully curved hips, a gorgeous big bum and tits that would make a man drool. I drooled.

I sat on the edge of the bed, cock pointing skyward while she positioned herself between my legs and gently lowered her mouth onto my shaft. Id never felt anything like it in my life. I wanted to come into her right then but after a few strokes she motioned me to lay back upon the bed.

Once there she manoeuvred herself above me and lowered herself onto my shaft. She leaned forward so that her lovely big tits were right in my face. I kissed each of her gorgeous boobs in turn as she started slowly rocking herself on my shaft.

Dear Gods, it was perfect and as she rocked and thrust her tits into my face I realised she was still wearing her glasses and heels. I could've burst right then! But just as I felt I would, she stopped. Pulled herself off and alongside me, breathed into my ear that she was tired of being boring then climbed back on top in the reverse position.

She ground and ground into me for what seemed like eternity until she started yelling "I'm coming! I'm coming! SLAP MY ARSE!" This was new to me but I did as I was told and planted my hand as hard as I could onto her right buttock "again you bastard!" she screamed and again I did as I was bid. This woman was in orbit!

I decided to take control and flipped her over, my cock still in her. It was ugly and uncomfortable but we landed in a good position: her face down in the pillows with me riding high behind her. I started the rhythm again, slow and steady and she squealed with delight. By this point she'd lost her glasses and I'd lost all inhibitions. I edged her body lower to the bed until she was fully laying down. I stroked her back as I pumped her again and again, eventually pulling out and coming all over her back.

As we lay beside each other, coming down she turned to me and said "that was so sweet, my husband will be home soon so get out". I quickly dressed and made my escape. I hope again someday to be called back for some minor job....
 
Sorry admins... that was meant to be an outline and quickly turned into a full story!
 
The site admins don't care (there's little evidence they even read this forum)--and most of the rest of us don't at this point either. This forum is for feedback on stories already posted to the Literotica story file. (It says so on the forum slug.) If you submit your stories the normal way--to the story file--and come here and request feedback on a posted story, you very likely will get helpful response. Looking forward to seeing you come back here after you've gone through the customary hoops.
 
An outline is a somewhat fleshed-out idea. I'm no admin, but I think your outlines might be appropriate for the STORY IDEAS forum.
 
I stopped reading at teh 7" cock. Did he carry a ruler around all day? It would be pretty astonishing if his cock were alwys the same length. Most of us quit measuring injunior high.
 
This is fiction. Some writers and readers get extra arousal at the concept of measurement. I suggest they be left to have what arouses them and just going on to something we like better without belittling them for the elements that add to their enjoyment of a story--either writing it or reading it. When I'm targeting this audience, I'll employ measurements too. But then I employ a lot of techniques I don't personally get turned on by if I know the audience I'm targeting does. And I try not to belittle them in comment for their sexual preferences and turn-ons.
 
saying seven inches turns some people on? Excuse me I am so sorry.. i sincerely had no idea that saying inches was a fetish. I apologize inches inches inshes inches inches inches AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
 
saying seven inches turns some people on? Excuse me I am so sorry.. i sincerely had no idea that saying inches was a fetish. I apologize inches inches inshes inches inches inches AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Yes, it is a fetish for some. It's fine if it's not a fetish for you. But it's the context in which some others find arousal--especially in the GM community. It would be nice if people let other people have their fetishes and contexts in peace without criticism or denigration.
 
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