Schoolgirl Drama

[vinnyv]

I have an idea for a story that revolves around two slutty high school girls that hate each other that eventually leads to something a bit more sexual and even taboo. I get the feeling that it may be too hardcore for this site so if anyone is interested in something like this please message me or contact me on yahoo. Obviously this is a very basic start but I am open to any ideas.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Don't use messages, just post here. And you have to try pretty hard to get passed the limits here.

 

[JRaven]

Pretty much, there are only three limits on Literotica.
1) All involved must be 18+
2) No beastiality
3) Your own imagination

So please, do tell.

Jenny

 

[Idarrau]

You could make them ex-step sisters whose moms were married briefly. Not quite true incest but a good connection of having to live with each other before.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That's pretty much the epitome of wasted story material IMO. It's not real incest and unless you have more story and less smut it's just wasted words, but if you had a good author it might ad that extra flavor.

Though I think real sisters separated in a divorce is better.

 

[Texguy84]

How about the two girls are longtime rivals, constantly trying to one-up each other. The story could chronicle their various exploits, competing over boys, stealing the boys from each other, etc. One sucks off her teacher to get her a higher grade than the other, and the second girl proceeds to fuck said teacher to get her grade raised in turn. One sleeps with the others' brother, and so the other sleeps with the first girl's dad.

Naturally, this somehow escalates into a lesbian hate fuck of biblical proportions.

 

[jonyoungau]

Have them step sisters, and maybe humiliation with enf themed towards who can expose each other to more people and in the end they can have sex or both be exposed on a football field packed with people and no where to hide.

 

[lovecraft68]

Some kind of bet where the winner fucks the loser with a strap on.

Anyone who watches sites like Whipped Ass or reads a lot of f/f humiliation knows that usually involves the girl sucking on the strap on as well as being fucked with it. I'm sure she would be getting it anally as well.

Some bondage tossed in would be an added bonus.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Can some of the people who are pushing for step sisters explain what the lure is. The only time anybody uses step siblings is on sites that ban incest. We don't have that problem here.

 

[lovecraft68]

Can some of the people who are pushing for step sisters explain what the lure is. The only time anybody uses step siblings is on sites that ban incest. We don't have that problem here.

I agree.

Unless its so the story can go somewhere besides incest.

But honestly Laurel might put it there anyway.

 

[Totzman]

Pretty much, there are only three limits on Literotica.
1) All involved must be 18+
2) No beastiality
3) Your own imagination

So please, do tell.

Jenny

Really? What about snuff? I wrote one snuff story a while back, and one involving genital mutilation. Would those be acceptable on this site?

 

[Texguy84]

I've had a story get shot down for snuff before.

I think with the step siblings you get some of the incest taboo, but with the Cinderella-esque drama where the siblings have no particular reason to share anything like sibling closeness. Just because their parents had such a great time bumping uglies doesn't mean the two see each other as anything but turf rivals.

 

[Juci_Lucy]

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[jackdaw]

I don't think they allow bestiality or snuff, or truly dark taboo fantasty here. There are sites that do. Some of my material uses these to spice up a few story elements.

To be honest most of those sorts of stories may be imaginative, but they're often poorly written and even more poorly plotted.

The secret of story-writing, I tend to think, is to write a good story . . . Even the most mundane stuff makes a good read if it's well written, don't you think?

If writers do want to delve into the much more unusual (and it's permitted on their chosen medium) there is still no substitute for good writing . . . otherwise it's no more than a disappointing flop!

PM me with email address if you'd be interested in discussing further . . . ?

 

[JRaven]

Just my two pence worth...
I think the two girls should be unrelated. One a rich bitch from the north side of the tracks. The other is from the south side of the tracks.

Three outcomes are possible.
The rich bitch wins. (boo!)
The poor girl wins. (Yea!)
They declare a tie when doing 69 with each other, in a bar with 50 people watching. (Woo Hoo!!)

Jenny

 

[i_would]

I don't think they allow bestiality or snuff, or truly dark taboo fantasty here. There are sites that do. Some of my material uses these to spice up a few story elements.

Not allowed are specifically bestiality and under age (as in under-18) sex. Under age characters are allowed in a story - children are, after all, a normal part of life - as long as they don't take part in any sexual activity.

For the more extreme part: Laurel describes it a bit like "if the person on the receiving end of the rape/punishment/violence can get some pleasure out of it, it's OK". Something like that. This is what makes many rape fantasies OK, and in the Horror category death is even possible.

A lot of this however depends on the story itself, which is judged on a case by case basis, and Laurel always has the final word on it.

To be honest most of those sorts of stories may be imaginative, but they're often poorly written and even more poorly plotted.

Agreed. It's really hard to do those well. I'd rather stick to more down-to-earth topics myself.

 

[i_would]

Can some of the people who are pushing for step sisters explain what the lure is. The only time anybody uses step siblings is on sites that ban incest. We don't have that problem here.

I was thinking very much like Texguy84. Step siblings may work exceptionally well for this case, especially if it's a rather recent coupling (their respective parents moved in together maybe a year prior).

By the way, just wondering, is incest legal?

I know many countries have laws banning marriage between too closely related people (at least siblings, maybe cousins too). Other than that, just wondering what the legal status is of consensual sex between family members.

 

[JRaven]

By the way, just wondering, is incest legal?

I know many countries have laws banning marriage between too closely related people (at least siblings, maybe cousins too). Other than that, just wondering what the legal status is of consensual sex between family members.

For a story on Lit, it's very legal. The Incest/Taboo section is probably the largest in terms of story count. For a sampling of some, just click the first link in my signature.

As for the law, it will depend on the state's definition of sodomy. While sodomy tends to be defined as anal sex, the legal definition as defined by the state's law can include anything.

I remember a story many years ago when a woman had admitted publicly that she gave her husband blowjobs. She ended up getting arrested, charged, and sentenced for sodomy. When it made national news, many states corrected their sodomy laws.

Whether or not incest is illegal depends on the state.

Jenny

 

[Totzman]

To be honest most of those sorts of stories may be imaginative, but they're often poorly written and even more poorly plotted.

Then an interested writer should change that. I'm not sure what you're arguing, that snuff and beastiality stories should be discouraged because many in the past haven't been good? If so then someone could write a good one. Unless you're just mentioning that many snuff and beastiality stories haven't been good.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Really? What about snuff? I wrote one snuff story a while back, and one involving genital mutilation. Would those be acceptable on this site?

I think it's a fair assessment.

Regardless snuff isn't allowed here (But Erotic Horror seems to do what it wants and as was noted really it's a matter of did Laurel "like" your story. I suspect that Shakespear could get Romeo and Juliet through complete with them being tweens, a bull mounting Juilet and bth being roasted alive for the finale.) Oh well.

As for beastiality slap a horn or some wings on it and carry on.

 

[Idarrau]

As for the allure of step siblings when it does NOT have to be, well, I believe that it could be a better element of a story.

A combined family is very difficult to pretend is normal. One girl could have many more privledges than the other event thought they live in the same house.

Step-sibs are Forced to be civil to each other even though they would would never associate with each other in normal conditions.

I personally feel there is just more bite to it with a step element.

 

[Juci_Lucy]

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[Sean Renaud]

My last vore story got kicked back here, I've been considering giving that another shot perhaps with a humor kick instead of a horror kick to see if I can slip around the "rules" that way.

 

[Juci_Lucy]

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[Juci_Lucy]

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