twelveoone
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This is the voice of someone discovering the why, the experience of looking from the inside
Originally Posted by todski28
it's like you are reliving the same day, over and over again in this piece. so many questions left unanswered, it really is interesting.
this is text, if seen previous tells you what to expect, if seen after, confirms what you discovered for yourself
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5786
as in from regarding form
An incantation is created by a pantoum's interlocking pattern of rhyme and repetition; as lines reverberate between stanzas, they fill the poem with echoes. This intense repetition also slows the poem down, halting its advancement. As Mark Strand and Eavan Boland explained in The Making of a Poem, "the reader takes four steps forward, then two back," making the pantoum a "perfect form for the evocation of a past time. - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/p....p2TaMPCJ.dpuf
this is the voice of someone not going back to just being a reader of poetry but actively engaging poetry
Originally Posted by todski28
it's like ... it really is interesting.
there is that jump, about 8 years ago I discovered the why of the pantoum here
my comment
there is that line, tod, from reading to understanding what works in writing, and that line is always approached alone, and that voice is always sounds the same
"it really is interesting."
and you will say it 10,000 times
all else is bullshit
that said here's a fun one
Originally Posted by todski28
it's like you are reliving the same day, over and over again in this piece. so many questions left unanswered, it really is interesting.
this is text, if seen previous tells you what to expect, if seen after, confirms what you discovered for yourself
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5786
as in from regarding form
An incantation is created by a pantoum's interlocking pattern of rhyme and repetition; as lines reverberate between stanzas, they fill the poem with echoes. This intense repetition also slows the poem down, halting its advancement. As Mark Strand and Eavan Boland explained in The Making of a Poem, "the reader takes four steps forward, then two back," making the pantoum a "perfect form for the evocation of a past time. - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/p....p2TaMPCJ.dpuf
this is the voice of someone not going back to just being a reader of poetry but actively engaging poetry
Originally Posted by todski28
it's like ... it really is interesting.
there is that jump, about 8 years ago I discovered the why of the pantoum here
my comment
there is that line, tod, from reading to understanding what works in writing, and that line is always approached alone, and that voice is always sounds the same
"it really is interesting."
and you will say it 10,000 times
all else is bullshit
that said here's a fun one
