first story need editor

[chrys]

Hi I've written my first story that I would like to post but I know it's a little rough. The general idea of the story is a husbands surprises his wife with a night of being tied up and blindfolded while she is pleased by multiple people. I know it's a little cliched but it's a personal fantasy.

Thanks

 

[sr71plt]

Knowing how many words it is might help an editor to decide to offer to take it.

 

[chrys]

Knowing how many words it is might help an editor to decide to offer to take it.

Thanks for the suggestion. It's just over 1000 words.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Hi I've written my first story that I would like to post but I know it's a little rough. The general idea of the story is a husbands surprises his wife with a night of being tied up and blindfolded while she is pleased by multiple people. I know it's a little cliched but it's a personal fantasy.

Thanks

is it going to go in loving wives?

 

[chrys]

is it going to go in loving wives?

Wasn't sure it's a little tame for BDSM so loving wives may be a better fit

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

One of my few stories has very mild BDSM, more words than any physical activities such as whips, chains, or bondage. I wanted in in EC and Laurel put it in BDSM.

My point is the story does not have to be extreme to fit into BDSM. From your brief description I would say you will get beaten up in LW.

Here is a link to my story, if you are interested.

http://www.literotica.com/s/ginny-s-black-satin-panties

Mike

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Wasn't sure it's a little tame for BDSM so loving wives may be a better fit

are you familiar with the foibles of loving wives readers?

 

[chrys]

One of my few stories has very mild BDSM, more words than any physical activities such as whips, chains, or bondage. I wanted in in EC and Laurel put it in BDSM.

My point is the story does not have to be extreme to fit into BDSM. From your brief description I would say you will get beaten up in LW.

Here is a link to my story, if you are interested.

http://www.literotica.com/s/ginny-s-black-satin-panties

Mike

I enjoyed the story immensely...I spend most of my time in the BDSM or non consent section...so can't say that I have spent any time in LW...will have to explore tonight

 

[chrys]

are you familiar with the foibles of loving wives readers?

No will have to explore tonight...spend my time mostly in BDSM or non consent

 

[sr71plt]

The issue with Loving Wives is that there are strongly competing vocal factions on what a loving wife story should be, and the author is put in the center of that--usually a no win situation for the story.

 

[chrys]

The issue with Loving Wives is that there are strongly competing vocal factions on what a loving wife story should be, and the author is put in the center of that--usually a no win situation for the story.

Yeah perhaps I'll just avoid that whole situation....thanks for the heads up