Looking for input with an erotic political thriller

[blobfish]

I'm thinking about writing an erotic political thriller called "Slow and Furious". It's about a guy named Erotic Holder that sells his guns to some fine chicas, who have their way with him. What do you guys think?

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

I'm thinking about writing an erotic political thriller called "Slow and Furious". It's about a guy named Erotic Holder that sells his guns to some fine chicas, who have their way with him. What do you guys think?

I'm thinking that was on its way to being funny, but got stopped at the border.

See what I did there?

 

[blobfish]

I'm thinking that was on it's way to being funny, but got stopped at the border.

See what I did there?

Unlike the guns!

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Unlike the guns!

Oh yes, oh yes, we both, oh yes we both
Oh yes, we both reached for the gun
The gun, the gun, the gun
Oh yes, we both reached for the gun, for the gun

 

[blobfish]

Oh yes, oh yes, we both, oh yes we both
Oh yes, we both reached for the gun
The gun, the gun, the gun
Oh yes, we both reached for the gun, for the gun

That's hot! I'm going to include that in the story, if you don't mind.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

I mind. Send me $500. Or I'll tell your mother where all her underwear goes.

 

[Recidiva]

Understandable, understandable, yes, it's perfectly understandable.

Comprehensible, comprehensible. Not a bit reprehensible, it's so defensible.

 

[blobfish]

I mind. Send me $500. Or I'll tell your mother where all her underwear goes.

Her underwear is too big for me, cuntmuffin!

 

[blobfish]

Understandable, understandable, yes, it's perfectly understandable.

Comprehensible, comprehensible. Not a bit reprehensible, it's so defensible.

Once you do Holder, you get bolder.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Please don't say "cuntmuffin" when my cock is in your mouth. I feel the teeth.

 

[blobfish]

Please don't say "cuntmuffin" when my cock is in your mouth. I feel the teeth.

I'll wait until you give me your sweet milk of life.

 

[Recidiva]

Once you do Holder, you get bolder.

No, that won't work. It's derivative and not even as good as the original.

So of course, it'll sell like hotcakes with bad grammar.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

I'll wait until you give me your sweet milk of life.

You just made me want to become Catholic again. And in the Inquisition way, not the pedophile priest way.

 

[blobfish]

No, that won't work. It's derivative and not even as good as the original.

So of course, it'll sell like hotcakes with bad grammar.

Barack Obama
Hung like a llama

 

[Recidiva]

Barack Obama
Hung like a llama

Blobfish.
Says it all.

 

[blobfish]

You just made me want to become Catholic again. And in the Inquisition way, not the pedophile priest way.

Slurp slurp slurp. Talk to me in five minutes.

 

[blobfish]

Blobfish.
Says it all.

Is that good?

 

[Recidiva]

Is that good?

Maaaaybe.

 

[blobfish]

Maaaaybe.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Slurp slurp slurp. Talk to me in five minutes.

The power of Christ compels you...

 

[blobfish]

What if Erotic Holder had a summit with Bush and Cliton?