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i have uploaded 2 books that i have written not very large books but i would appreciate any comments on them as i am new to this after many years of writing i have plucked up the courage to upload 2 for now just to get some feedback i would appreciate any comments, just click on either link below and then click the picture to read online thank you

http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=QFRQ2JLN

http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=UK3932GW

Wow thats awesome I hope they continue with this great writing style of unbelievably long runon sentences because you know every publisher really loves an author who can write something that incredibly long without considering proper sentence structure or punctuation and oh by the way no one does favors for spammers
 
Wow thats awesome I hope they continue with this great writing style of unbelievably long runon sentences because you know every publisher really loves an author who can write something that incredibly long without considering proper sentence structure or punctuation and oh by the way no one does favors for spammers

Like.
 
Wow thats awesome I hope they continue with this great writing style of unbelievably long runon sentences because you know every publisher really loves an author who can write something that incredibly long without considering proper sentence structure or punctuation and oh by the way no one does favors for spammers

I loled.
 
Wow thats awesome I hope they continue with this great writing style of unbelievably long runon sentences because you know every publisher really loves an author who can write something that incredibly long without considering proper sentence structure or punctuation and oh by the way no one does favors for spammers

Look Little Miss just because you can string words together without ever putting in any kind of punctuation or sense of pause or rhythm or anything that might imply subtext beyond the simple definitions of the words and so the entire thing feels flat and virtually meaningless does not mean you can come here and do that sort of thing to the english language because missy I simply will not stand for it and I'll bitch slap you with a damn Oxford Comma but mostly because I like threatening to hit people with controversial punctuation and YES there's controversial punctuation so you shouldn't even mention the norm of double spacing after a period in some circles but of course thats not going to be a problem so long as you keep writing like this now is it
 
Look Little Miss just because you can string words together without ever putting in any kind of punctuation or sense of pause or rhythm or anything that might imply subtext beyond the simple definitions of the words and so the entire thing feels flat and virtually meaningless does not mean you can come here and do that sort of thing to the english language because missy I simply will not stand for it and I'll bitch slap you with a damn Oxford Comma but mostly because I like threatening to hit people with controversial punctuation and YES there's controversial punctuation so you shouldn't even mention the norm of double spacing after a period in some circles but of course thats not going to be a problem so long as you keep writing like this now is it

hehe, period
 
Look Little Miss just because you can string words together without ever putting in any kind of punctuation or sense of pause or rhythm or anything that might imply subtext beyond the simple definitions of the words and so the entire thing feels flat and virtually meaningless does not mean you can come here and do that sort of thing to the english language because missy I simply will not stand for it and I'll bitch slap you with a damn Oxford Comma but mostly because I like threatening to hit people with controversial punctuation and YES there's controversial punctuation so you shouldn't even mention the norm of double spacing after a period in some circles but of course thats not going to be a problem so long as you keep writing like this now is it

From now on; I shall inappropriately use semicolons in everything I write; I'm inventing a new language; publishers await my invention with baited breath;
 
From now on; I shall inappropriately use semicolons in everything I write; I'm inventing a new language; publishers await my invention with baited breath;

This sounds like a great idea! I'm totally on board with it! It gave me a good chuckle to read! I should try to come up with something like this myself! I'm just not sure what I'd do!
 
From now on; I shall inappropriately use semicolons in everything I write; I'm inventing a new language; publishers await my invention with baited breath;

This sounds like a great idea! I'm totally on board with it! It gave me a good chuckle to read! I should try to come up with something like this myself! I'm just not sure what I'd do!

lol, you two are so funny
 
This sounds like a great idea! I'm totally on board with it! It gave me a good chuckle to read! I should try to come up with something like this myself! I'm just not sure what I'd do!

Oh no.

Are you making fun of me?! :mad:

Perhaps I do overuse exclamation points.

Actually I'm not mad since your punctuation is correct. My grammar-policewoman inner child is calm.
 
Oh no.

Are you making fun of me?! :mad:

Perhaps I do overuse exclamation points.

Actually I'm not mad since your punctuation is correct. My grammar-policewoman inner child is calm.

Aww crap. I'm posting with this woman. I'm going to have to be extra careful now with my posts or I'll get PMs full of fix notifications. :)
 
Aww crap. I'm posting with this woman. I'm going to have to be extra careful now with my posts or I'll get PMs full of fix notifications. :)

The inner child looks the other way if you have a few mistakes. Within reason, obviously.

She also takes bribes.
 
This sounds like a great idea! I'm totally on board with it! It gave me a good chuckle to read! I should try to come up with something like this myself! I'm just not sure what I'd do!

I read that and for some reason I'm slightly out of breath.

Damn you exclamation point, damn you.
 
Oh no.

Are you making fun of me?! :mad:

Perhaps I do overuse exclamation points.

Actually I'm not mad since your punctuation is correct. My grammar-policewoman inner child is calm.

Haha.. I'm more making fun of myself, really. I get annoyed for no real reason when I feel like people are using exclamation points where they don't belong.

*gives the grammar-policewoman inner child a cookie, though, just to be safe*
 
I read that and for some reason I'm slightly out of breath.

Damn you exclamation point, damn you.

You can't help it!

IT'S ALMOST LIKE WHEN SOMEONE TYPES LIKE THIS, AND IT JUST SEEMS LIKE THEY'RE YELLING AT YOU, EVEN WHEN THEY WOULD HAVE NO EARTHLY REASON TO BE ACTUALLY DOING SO. KIND OF MAKES YOU FEEL LIKE PAVLOV'S DOG, SHOWING A CONDITIONED RESPONSE EVEN THOUGH YOU KNOW BETTER.

Christ, even typing that out I feel like I'm yelling.
 
You can't help it!

IT'S ALMOST LIKE WHEN SOMEONE TYPES LIKE THIS, AND IT JUST SEEMS LIKE THEY'RE YELLING AT YOU, EVEN WHEN THEY WOULD HAVE NO EARTHLY REASON TO BE ACTUALLY DOING SO. KIND OF MAKES YOU FEEL LIKE PAVLOV'S DOG, SHOWING A CONDITIONED RESPONSE EVEN THOUGH YOU KNOW BETTER.

Christ, even typing that out I feel like I'm yelling.

Um... See. Um. No.

I've never written in all caps and the only time I see it done is by a friend of mine. I don't think she should be on the computer by herself, without a helmet.

So, when I see it I automatically think of the mentally unfortunate. Funny thing though, I think the same thing when people are yelling.
 
Um... See. Um. No.

I've never written in all caps and the only time I see it done is by a friend of mine. I don't think she should be on the computer by herself, without a helmet.

So, when I see it I automatically think of the mentally unfortunate. Funny thing though, I think the same thing when people are yelling.

The only time I really do it is when I'm getting frustrated with people, but then I just start typing words like THIS instead of using ITALICS because it's generally QUICKER and I'm ANNOYED.


But then I get annoyed with myself, and try to go back and change it.
 
The only time I really do it is when I'm getting frustrated with people, but then I just start typing words like THIS instead of using ITALICS because it's generally QUICKER and I'm ANNOYED.


But then I get annoyed with myself, and try to go back and change it.

-GiGgLeS~
 
I know this is totally unrelated, but every time I look at your avatar I think about Titan's hydrocarbon oceans.

...

:/

Hey, whats worse, all caps, or l33t speak, or whatever the fuck the kids call it these days.

Do not send me a text where you replace a whole word with a single letter. Acronyms are fine with me, for some reason. I guess I am inconsistent.
 
Do not send me a text where you replace a whole word with a single letter. Acronyms are fine with me, for some reason. I guess I am inconsistent.

AHH!! I know exactly what you mean!! I see some relatives on Facebook write their status' in that way! It freaks me the fuck out because one is a teacher!!

dies

I told her to un-friend me because her writing made me sick...

:D
 
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