Dad's A Grade Girl

[A4mushroom]

I've begun writing an incest story involving an 18 year old, good girl, collage student and her over protective dad. The story so far is that for most of her life her father has stopped her from having any form of a healthy social life (No boyfriends, sleep overs, parties etc.) and kept her naive to all things sexual but now she has matured into a beautiful young woman he begins to see how he can shape her into a device for his personal pleasure. The dad is in a normal marriage with a good sex life but seeing his sexy daughter looking so ripe and ready and knowing that she is unspoiled is driving him crazy with ideas.

It ends up with him slowly introducing her into sex and moulding her into a perfect lover. I was thinking of having the daughter receive outstanding results in her collage courses (she is very acidemicly smart due to her curfew and strict father) and her father using the idea of university life as an opertunity to introduce her to the seedy world of sex.

Just wondering if anyone had any other ideas to contribute to the storyline to give it a little more depth. All idea will be much appreciated and I will require an editor to give it a quick look over once I'm finished with it.

 

[sirhugs]

when she was in elementary school, he gave her a lollipop if she got straight As. In high school, he started giving her cash. Now she gets straight As in college. She looks at daddy and says " I miss the days when my reward was something that I could suck on all night. I loved having my mouth so full, and the sticky sweetness..."

 

[A4mushroom]

"I miss the days when my reward was something that I could suck on all night. I loved having my mouth so full, and the sticky sweetness..."

Love this line, I'll see if I can fit it into the story at some point. Just because shes naive doesn't mean she cant be suggestive. It just drives the father insane a little more.

 

[sirhugs]

Love this line, I'll see if I can fit it into the story at some point. Just because shes naive doesn't mean she cant be suggestive. It just drives the father insane a little more.

if she's naive, she could say it innocently, but it still drives daddy crazy

 

[A4mushroom]

if she's naive, she could say it innocently, but it still drives daddy crazy

Yeah, he reads her innocents as flirting because he lusts for her so much. Deep down he knows she's naive but he wants to believe that she's a slut just like he sees her in his fantasies.

 

[HeyAll]

This actually does sound like a fucking hot idea. Here are some things I thought of while reading your post:

1. The dad isn't a pervert by any means. He really does want to protect his daughter because maybe his father or mother left when he was young, and he ends up overcompensating for his own family.

But when his daughter grows to become a beautiful young woman and is over-sheltered, he's angry at himself for feeling new new things about her. Especially when she doesn't realize that men get aroused by looking at women, so she does things like leave the door open when she showers, ect... Little things which drive him crazy, he tries to look away but can't.

2. The daughter is 18 or 19 and wants to go to a university to become a biology or some kind of medical major. She reads books and and realizes how far she's behind when it comes to knowing certain things. And she goes to her dad for advice/comfort/curiousity, ect...

OR

3. The daughter is off to college, and the dad wants to make sure that she doesn't get pregnant, because he knows that she'll eventually expirment with sex. So he teachers her things, like how to use a condom, and to use a condom for oral sex. She asks why would a guy want her mouth on his penis, and it gets really awkward for him. But as it goes on, he can't resist his over eager daughter's quest of knowledge.

sirhugs quote is also fantastic. Best of luck of this. I'd really like to read it when it's done.

 

[A4mushroom]

This actually does sound like a fucking hot idea. Here are some things I thought of while reading your post:

1. The dad isn't a pervert by any means. He really does want to protect his daughter because maybe his father or mother left when he was young, and he ends up overcompensating for his own family.

But when his daughter grows to become a beautiful young woman and is over-sheltered, he's angry at himself for feeling new new things about her. Especially when she doesn't realize that men get aroused by looking at women, so she does things like leave the door open when she showers, ect... Little things which drive him crazy, he tries to look away but can't.

2. The daughter is 18 or 19 and wants to go to a university to become a biology or some kind of medical major. She reads books and and realizes how far she's behind when it comes to knowing certain things. And she goes to her dad for advice/comfort/curiousity, ect...

OR

3. The daughter is off to college, and the dad wants to make sure that she doesn't get pregnant, because he knows that she'll eventually expirment with sex. So he teachers her things, like how to use a condom, and to use a condom for oral sex. She asks why would a guy want her mouth on his penis, and it gets really awkward for him. But as it goes on, he can't resist his over eager daughter's quest of knowledge.

sirhugs quote is also fantastic. Best of luck of this. I'd really like to read it when it's done.

Thanks for the support and ideas. I think I will use a number of elements mentioned in all of your scenarios. The daughter is constantly driving her father crazy with leaving doors open and walking around naked because she doesn't know how men react to her. The urges begin to become to much for the father as he becomes increasingly more attracted to his daughter. After she does really well in her exams she announces her plans for university.

The father realizes that she will probably get into many sexual situations at university but he doesn't want her to be taken advantage of so he introduces her to sex but tries to limit her to only having sex with him. This way everybody wins, the daughter has all the care free sex she needs throughout uni whilst the father gets to have sex with his beautiful young daughter and make sure she is treated right.

 

[HeyAll]

I don't know how much has already been written so far, but personally, I'd take out that the father is married and just make him single.

The father being single takes away the fact that he'd be cheating on his wife. Plus he'd be more pent up sexually and it would harder to fight the urges. Perhaps he's a lawyer or something and he's constantly busy, so he doesn't have time to date.

And another thing thing could be that he doesn't want his daughter to get pregnant or get any stds. So after all the stuff about teaching her and she discovers all of that stuff, and so forth and so forth, like you said, perhaps the daughter reveals that she secretly masturbates and has urges of her own...and some time later, she makes her own decision that she wants only her father to please her sexually, because the reasons mentioned (stds and pregnant). Best of luck.

 

[Tmmldr]

I don't know how much has already been written so far, but personally, I'd take out that the father is married and just make him single.

The father being single takes away the fact that he'd be cheating on his wife. Plus he'd be more pent up sexually and it would harder to fight the urges. Perhaps he's a lawyer or something and he's constantly busy, so he doesn't have time to date.

And another thing thing could be that he doesn't want his daughter to get pregnant or get any stds. So after all the stuff about teaching her and she discovers all of that stuff, and so forth and so forth, like you said, perhaps the daughter reveals that she secretly masturbates and has urges of her own...and some time later, she makes her own decision that she wants only her father to please her sexually, because the reasons mentioned (stds and pregnant). Best of luck.

Here's a twist. The dad loved the mom a lot, but he knew she was going out and doing guys a lot. She told him about it before they fucked, and it got him hot. She told him about sucking off and fucking four black studs, and she loved more than one guy. She couldn't get off unless she was in a car.

So he knew what it meant when he received the tragic news that she'd been riding in a car with three college students when they'd been hit by a drunk driving a semi. It'd taken him years to get over it, and his only solace was talking to his beautiful daughter, who at the time, was eight.

By the time she was eighteen, they were intimate. And he was worried, would she develop the same desires and act them out like his wife had? So much better to keep her safe with him...

 

[A4mushroom]

I don't know how much has already been written so far, but personally, I'd take out that the father is married and just make him single.

The father being single takes away the fact that he'd be cheating on his wife. Plus he'd be more pent up sexually and it would harder to fight the urges. Perhaps he's a lawyer or something and he's constantly busy, so he doesn't have time to date.

And another thing thing could be that he doesn't want his daughter to get pregnant or get any stds. So after all the stuff about teaching her and she discovers all of that stuff, and so forth and so forth, like you said, perhaps the daughter reveals that she secretly masturbates and has urges of her own...and some time later, she makes her own decision that she wants only her father to please her sexually, because the reasons mentioned (stds and pregnant). Best of luck.

Love this idea and it's not to late to change the father from married to single. I'm going to shift the story so that the daughter is going away to university and cannot afford to live in the student halls but instead is living with her father who lives close to the uni. She had a very strict mother who didn't allow anything to do with boys and relationships but because she was in a single sex household the daughter is used to walking around the house with no clothes on and showering with the door open.

She hasn't seen her father since he broke up with her mother years ago but he hasn't had any other women since her mother and has been living alone since. After noticing that his daughter soesnt mind him seeing her naked lying around the house the father thinks she is being flirty and suggestive, meanwhile the daughter, due to the abcents of her mothers strict ways, beings to learn about sexual activities from her new friends in uni. When the father finally snaps and trys it on with her she is too curious about sex and lets him teach her.

After she has learnt the basics she becomes a slut around campus and in her own household.

It may spill over into 2 chapters if necessary.

 

[Englandboy2]

Sounds good to me. I'd definitely read it.