RochelBaron
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Hey everybody!! My first story "Stranger in a Boutique" is up!! Would love feedback!
My First story is up!!
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yevkassem72
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The GB is for people who want to pretend that Lit is a regular current events' forum. They like to forget that the main site even exists.
Frizzle_Fry
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A fine representative of the GB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yevkassem72
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JohnnySavage
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Don't let the asswipes get to you.
Piss off; it's not going to e-blow someone with random letters and numbers for a username.
yevkassem72
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Whatever. You're going back on ignore.
You're going back on ignore.
SEVERUSMAX
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Allow me to recommend the Author's Hangout. Much better for writers' stuff. GB is actually troll and alt central. I only visit here for the porn and to occasionally vent my spleen at dumb politicos.
Sean Renaud
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It doesn't matter if your first story is up!
You should take your keyboard, shine it up real nice, turn that son bitch sideways and shove it straight up your roody poo candy ass!
You should take your keyboard, shine it up real nice, turn that son bitch sideways and shove it straight up your roody poo candy ass!
pointless
¿por qué no?
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yes, anywhere but the story feedback board. that is absolutely the last place anyone should go to when looking for feedback on a story. it's just too obvious. it simply has to be a trap.
SEVERUSMAX
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That one goes without saying. Jesus, people. Simply suggesting a supportive location for writers, not just about feedback, but writer support in general.
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JAMESBJOHNSON
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There are 12 million stories here at Naked City, and now there is one more.
KRCummings
Uh...
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That was terrible.
Alexandra1979
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Watch your back here. The knives are always out. The GB isn't for creative people. It's for trolls and prudes.
Sean Renaud
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Are you bloody outside your mind? You have to be very creative to keep from being terminally stabbed to death here. It's like saying prison isn't for creative people. I challenge you to find regular folk who've figured out how to weaponize toliet paper and tooth brushes.
lovetoread
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If you are tuff enuf for the GB, you are tuff enuf for anything in the world.
Sean Renaud
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If you can handle the GB you'd be king of the Thunder Dome, emperor of LA and the devil would respectfully tip his hat when you strolled by.
osprey44
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The story or the feedback?
KRCummings
Uh...
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The feedback seems to be pretty spot on.
osprey44
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Yep, I have to agree... as for the story, I could care less.
KRCummings
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It's one page with one short, lame sex scene and way, way too much bad exposition.
I hope it's a first effort. I can excuse that. That's the excuse I use for all of my own.
lovetoread
hello daddy
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#totallyagreewiththis
