First Part of my Autobiography Erotica

[RedButterflySlut]

Hello everyone! This is my first attempt writing erotica, so be kind.
http://www.literotica.com/s/jays-slut-ch-01/

 

[stan_man13]

Hello everyone! This is my first attempt writing erotica, so be kind.
http://www.literotica.com/s/jays-slut-ch-01/

I've read many of erotic story on here but none with the emotional power of yours. I liked how you used texting to help tell it. I was sad for you yet had an erection. There must be some evil in me.



Stan

 

[Whiskey1965]

She has a way of arousing you even when you find the way she's being treated or asking to be used not your flavor.
Being in control is over rated but we all still have moments where its all we want and there is a dark part of the male psychie that wants a sex slave to serve us.
Off to a great start and I'm hooked, now to go lust after you on your pic thread::

 

[RedButterflySlut]

She has a way of arousing you even when you find the way she's being treated or asking to be used not your flavor.
Being in control is over rated but we all still have moments where its all we want and there is a dark part of the male psychie that wants a sex slave to serve us.
Off to a great start and I'm hooked, now to go lust after you on your pic thread::

Hehe. I like that description a lot, thank you. I really "We all still have moments where its all we want and there is a dark part of the male psychie that wants a sex slave to serve us" a lot, it fits this story very well. It would serve as a good tagline.
<3 I'm glad you like my pictures.

I've read many of erotic story on here but none with the emotional power of yours. I liked how you used texting to help tell it. I was sad for you yet had an erection. There must be some evil in me.

Feel free to PM me

Stan

The next part is more extreme with sexuality and emotion, I hope you like it. The texts where taken directly from a conversation, the only thing I changed was text-speak into full words.

 

[stan_man13]

Hehe. I like that description a lot, thank you. I really "We all still have moments where its all we want and there is a dark part of the male psychie that wants a sex slave to serve us" a lot, it fits this story very well. It would serve as a good tagline.
<3 I'm glad you like my pictures.



The next part is more extreme with sexuality and emotion, I hope you like it. The texts where taken directly from a conversation, the only thing I changed was text-speak into full words.

oh my it doesn't sound like bedtime reading or is it? Can't wait. I understand it's about a 3 day wait for approval. What day are we on Red?

 

[RedButterflySlut]

I'm on day three. :-/

 

[stan_man13]

I'm on day three. :-/

Just checked ...still not approved....sigh

 

[Ember_on_ice]

RBS, I think you have a very powerful way of writing. Though I don't personally get off on subjugation and humiliation, I loved the way you expressed your own feelings, and I thought there was a good balance between character development and action/dialogue. It's always hard to find the right mix, and you did well.
In spite of my reservations about the themes, I'll read what comes next, because I'm already invested in what happens to you. Well done!

 

[RedButterflySlut]

RBS, I think you have a very powerful way of writing. Though I don't personally get off on subjugation and humiliation, I loved the way you expressed your own feelings, and I thought there was a good balance between character development and action/dialogue. It's always hard to find the right mix, and you did well.
In spite of my reservations about the themes, I'll read what comes next, because I'm already invested in what happens to you. Well done!

Over all, this is a character development story told through sex and BDSM. It's my own character development, but none the less it explores how Jay and I have changed since we entered each other's lives. Mostly how I've changed.
I'm really glad that you liked it even though the themes aren't your favorite <3

 

[stan_man13]

No part 2 yet!?!? what are they backlogged in the approval dept??...do they need to "hire" more people? may I suggest applicants that read faster....just kidding to the Gods of Lit

 

[thomasinfi]

I just saw that Part 2 is up, it is just as great. Wish I was there to use you.

 

[RedButterflySlut]

Part two is indeed up! Here's the link. Please tell me what you think.

http://www.literotica.com/s/jays-slut-ch-02

 

[seamus221]

I love it,just as hot as the first part and so I commented on it as you requested and will now go back to enjoying you sexy pics!
and please tell the wabbit I'm watching him!

 

[Desmond61]

I've read many of erotic story on here but none with the emotional power of yours.

 

[Whiskey1965]

Very hot!
Raise's my cock and the old question why?
Why are the girls drawn to the bad boys..but claim to want to be with caring loving man?
You know what?
Think I'll enjoy the story and see where it goes!

 

[RedButterflySlut]

Very hot!
Raise's my cock and the old question why?
Why are the girls drawn to the bad boys..but claim to want to be with caring loving man?
You know what?
Think I'll enjoy the story and see where it goes!

I don't know why other girls are drawn to bad boys, but in the beginning Jay put a lot of effort into making me believe he was a caring, loving man. I'm writing about that part of the story now.

I've read many of erotic story on here but none with the emotional power of yours.

Thank you, it's a struggle to put all the emotions I've felt, but I try to do my best.

I love it,just as hot as the first part and so I commented on it as you requested and will now go back to enjoying you sexy pics!
and please tell the wabbit I'm watching him!

Thankyou so much for commenting <3 Hehe, I'll try to keep the pictures coming. My pink rabbit might appear again -lol-

 

[seamus221]

No judgments on my part and as the story developes I start to see more of the picture.
The realtionship's tend to run in a hot cold cycle.
Thanks for sharing,arousing and posting pics of your very real and sexy self!
Das bunny is on my list, just saying

 

[phillyinjun]

Love the way you write, you take your time describing your motivation. Kept me riveted through to the end.

And I love how uninhibited you are.