Seeking Ed. for ongoing chapters

[BogartsBoss]

Every now and then the old guy gets smacked by technology. Having finally found Spell Check (It was under the box, right where MS hid it), it's now time for another set of eyes. Looking for story and character development help in Down by the Lake.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you specify the genre of your story (eg romance, non-consent, incest, gay male, lesbian, etc) and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

 

[BogartsBoss]

You might get a better response if you specify the genre of your story (eg romance, non-consent, incest, gay male, lesbian, etc) and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

My bad. This story line is in Mature.
Chapt. 1 is 4400 wds
Chapt. 2 came in at 6600
Chapt. 3 @3700 is in submission
Chapt. 4 is 4100
Chapt. 5 is 8500
Chapt. 6 is 5700
Chapt. 7 is 4200
Chapt. 8 Currently 1200 and counting
An eye ball on 4 and 5 would be appreciated

 

[Elijames21]

I'd love to edit one of your stories. Not that i'm the smartest person but i'm willing to try it. Send me a chapter if your interested. I'll give you some suggestions and i'll go through your grammer.