Story Feedback

[WillSeeking]

Hellos LITsters. I have been on the site for a few years now and found forumns about a year ago.

I have listed stories I have submitted on my profile and would like some feedback.

I do know my point of view is not always the favorite but I have found an audience out there that does like the style.

Also when I submitted Slumber I submitted the version that was not corrected. a lot of u instead of you. Is there a way to go back and edit your story.

Thanks in advance.

 

[WillSeeking]

tough crowd

 

[jake34]

tough crowd

First of all, you should consider to write for your own self above all else.

Second, you have to realize that some people read and will not choose to comment.

That does not mean they do not like your stuff.

There are many reasons why a woman may not comment.

But it seems as if there are some who have already left replies to your stories on the Lit site.

So some must be enjoying them.

I know of one specific woman who probably is.

Just try to relax, dude.

A watched pot never boils so to speak.

 

[WillSeeking]

First of all, you should consider to write for your own self above all else.

Second, you have to realize that some people read and will not choose to comment.

That does not mean they do not like your stuff.

There are many reasons why a woman may not comment.

But it seems as if there are some who have already left replies to your stories on the Lit site.

So some must be enjoying them.

I know of one specific woman who probably is.

Just try to relax, dude.

A watched pot never boils so to speak.

No worries Jake. Just didn't know how well feedback is given here.

You do have me wondering of who the one specific woman woudl be. LOL

Thanks for leaving a comment.

 

[sr71plt]

Also when I submitted Slumber I submitted the version that was not corrected. a lot of u instead of you. Is there a way to go back and edit your story.

Yes, track down the submissions FAQs (they are indexed to the submissions page you used to submit the story in the first place) and follow the directions on editing your story.

 

[WillSeeking]

Yes, track down the submissions FAQs (they are indexed to the submissions page you used to submit the story in the first place) and follow the directions on editing your story.

SR71 TY. Have been regretting doing that. Good to know I can edit.