My first story!

[Ember_on_ice]

Here's my very first attempt at writing down some of the fantasies that have haunted me for years. Any constructive feedback would be appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/s/faire-play-1

 

[talldad1]

Here's my very first attempt at writing down some of the fantasies that have haunted me for years. Any constructive feedback would be appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/s/faire-play-1

I am just starting to read it and am getting an erection just after the first two paragraphs. I have been to these faires before. I can't wait to see how this will go.

 

[imready2]

Here's my very first attempt at writing down some of the fantasies that have haunted me for years. Any constructive feedback would be appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/s/faire-play-1

Very hot! Thank you for sharing