Feedback for my story

[mathuranjali1983]

Hi all,
I've written my first story but have no idea on how to take it forward. Basically, I started with the character of the wife and how she is innocent but very focussed on her career and would do anything to do well at her job. Then I have in my mind the character of a client, who comes and wife has to show him around town and eventually they grow very close and she falls in love. I wanted help writing scenes from the perspective of the husband and how he loves his wife but also wants to imagine her with other men. As she becomes more and more successful, he finds her slipping away but doesn't want to stand in her way either. Here's the link to the start of the story here:

http://www.literotica.com/s/priya-and-raj

 

[bustymature]

Comments of stories

I always comment on the stories I read because I know all the work that goes back into it. I leave my email as well if they want to reply to me. But maybe one out of ten will reply bacSo i guess its a two way street.

 

[BSwett060]

Hi Bustymature

I always comment on the stories I read because I know all the work that goes back into it. I leave my email as well if they want to reply to me. But maybe one out of ten will reply bacSo i guess its a two way street.

I agree with you, I try to comment on the stories that I read as well. The people who have posted stories here made the effort to write a story and submit it for our enjoyment, so I try to let them know that they are appreciated. I have gotten some nice replies over the years, but that happens very irregularly.