QuazarMachismo
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I'm in the midst of posting a multi-part series called "Confessions of a Rust Belt Swinger." Its a humorous look at the world of swinging told through the male half of a couple. I tried to keep it light-hearted and away from of the more intense themes of some of the stories on here. However, a comment that I received for part 6 of the series has me a bit baffled. The commenter wrote:
"It took you this long to let us know they are really pathetic losers after all.
I was enjoying this until now, I really thought you would keep this purely comedy.The wife put the horns on him and he's just another wimpy cuckold. End of story.
Goodbye"
I assume this focuses on one comment that the wife makes to the husband near the very end of the story. However, my intent was not to make it a cuckold story, and I'm not sure how the reader got there. However, I may be too close to the story to honestly analyze it. If anyone has read it, could I ask your opinion? I certainly appreciate the feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-of-a-rust-belt-swinger-06
QM
"It took you this long to let us know they are really pathetic losers after all.
I was enjoying this until now, I really thought you would keep this purely comedy.The wife put the horns on him and he's just another wimpy cuckold. End of story.
Goodbye"
I assume this focuses on one comment that the wife makes to the husband near the very end of the story. However, my intent was not to make it a cuckold story, and I'm not sure how the reader got there. However, I may be too close to the story to honestly analyze it. If anyone has read it, could I ask your opinion? I certainly appreciate the feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-of-a-rust-belt-swinger-06
QM