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I'm in the midst of posting a multi-part series called "Confessions of a Rust Belt Swinger." Its a humorous look at the world of swinging told through the male half of a couple. I tried to keep it light-hearted and away from of the more intense themes of some of the stories on here. However, a comment that I received for part 6 of the series has me a bit baffled. The commenter wrote:

"It took you this long to let us know they are really pathetic losers after all.

I was enjoying this until now, I really thought you would keep this purely comedy.The wife put the horns on him and he's just another wimpy cuckold. End of story.

Goodbye"

I assume this focuses on one comment that the wife makes to the husband near the very end of the story. However, my intent was not to make it a cuckold story, and I'm not sure how the reader got there. However, I may be too close to the story to honestly analyze it. If anyone has read it, could I ask your opinion? I certainly appreciate the feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-of-a-rust-belt-swinger-06

QM
 
I'm in the midst of posting a multi-part series called "Confessions of a Rust Belt Swinger." Its a humorous look at the world of swinging told through the male half of a couple. I tried to keep it light-hearted and away from of the more intense themes of some of the stories on here. However, a comment that I received for part 6 of the series has me a bit baffled. The commenter wrote:

"It took you this long to let us know they are really pathetic losers after all.

I was enjoying this until now, I really thought you would keep this purely comedy.The wife put the horns on him and he's just another wimpy cuckold. End of story.

Goodbye"

I assume this focuses on one comment that the wife makes to the husband near the very end of the story. However, my intent was not to make it a cuckold story, and I'm not sure how the reader got there. However, I may be too close to the story to honestly analyze it. If anyone has read it, could I ask your opinion? I certainly appreciate the feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-of-a-rust-belt-swinger-06

QM

I would pay it no mind. Your story although meant to be lighthearted caught the attention of a wandering Loving wives Troll that somehow caught the title, and read what he wanted to into it.

I wouldn't worry about it.
 
I thought the story was great! Very enjoyable, and real. Some people have no sense of adventure whatsoever, and that comment had nothing to do with cuckolding and all about how much fun someone can have while swinging. Just ignore the lousy commentary.

When I have time, I'll go back and read from the first story. Good job, and keep writing!

Goodie
 
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