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Hi Red...meant to tell you last week I read Portraits for Her Husband and liked it and the unexpected turn it took...xx...and here I was rooting for them to make that video...lol
 
PanamaJaxxx said:
Hi Red...meant to tell you last week I read Portraits for Her Husband and liked it and the unexpected turn it took...xx...and here I was rooting for them to make that video...lol
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I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoyed it as well. I never saw them staying together as the idea came about. I just wasn't sure if I was going to write the "video" angle, or if I was going to write it as him being "royally pissed and over-reacting" angle. I think the video one was the right way to go. Definitely more shock value.

I really struggled with where to place that story. I knew by placing it in Loving Wives I was condemning it to low scores, and so far I've been right. lol I also toyed with making it a chapter series, but opted instead to do one whole submission.
 
I liked it because it wasn't the perfect scenario...it showed more real life train wreck type of story that can come of outside situations....and the owners..well they have a story and a half of their experiences as well...lol
 
PanamaJaxxx said:
I liked it because it wasn't the perfect scenario...it showed more real life train wreck type of story that can come of outside situations....and the owners..well they have a story and a half of their experiences as well...lol
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Thanks, my LW stories usually make people scratch their heads and go "hmmm" - I know with "Fucked Up Circumstances" I had people really back and forth on the content of the story. Saying it shouldn't be where I placed it, saying it should have been in Non-Erotic, but the sex was there, and for me Non-erotic means - no sex, but that's just my take on it.
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Thanks, my LW stories usually make people scratch their heads and go "hmmm" - I know with "Fucked Up Circumstances" I had people really back and forth on the content of the story. Saying it shouldn't be where I placed it, saying it should have been in Non-Erotic, but the sex was there, and for me Non-erotic means - no sex, but that's just my take on it.
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Well I will continue reading....liking it or not is one thing but second guessing others works just isn't my thing
 
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PanamaJaxxx said:
Well I will continue reading....liking it or not is one thing but second guessing others works just isn't my thing
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I'm the same way.

In regards to my stuff, I have never looked back and thought maybe I shouldn't have written that - that way. I've been happy with every story I've put up, minus grammar issues. :D
 
I can be a terrible self editor when it comes to grammar and always hate to go back and read something I missed
 
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