cloudschaser
Virgin
- Joined
- Nov 14, 2011
- Posts
- 8
Hi there,
I posted my first story, with a second in for submission; and before I write a next instalment of this, I was wondering if someone could take a look at the first, and offer tips on how i can character develop without being blatantly obvious. I like to create a space for imagination without filling in ALL the blanks...
I don't really write smut, nor do I like writing graphically, BUT i worry that not giving enough information about what is going on, is in fact bad to others? So, I am looking for advice on how I can strengthen my characters, learn how to write graphically better while still maintaining a flowing story/plot line?
http://www.literotica.com/s/stop-thinking
Many thanks
cloudschaser
I posted my first story, with a second in for submission; and before I write a next instalment of this, I was wondering if someone could take a look at the first, and offer tips on how i can character develop without being blatantly obvious. I like to create a space for imagination without filling in ALL the blanks...
I don't really write smut, nor do I like writing graphically, BUT i worry that not giving enough information about what is going on, is in fact bad to others? So, I am looking for advice on how I can strengthen my characters, learn how to write graphically better while still maintaining a flowing story/plot line?
http://www.literotica.com/s/stop-thinking
Many thanks
cloudschaser