Is this the right place?

[emanuellevinas]

I'm looking for help with my first writing that I hope to submit to literotica. It is a story based on the crusades. But I'm having difficulty on how to wrap up the story, so I am a little stuck. It is, I think, 85 percent done. The premise I think is solid. I just need to bring it home.

Can anyone offer advice on where I should turn?

All the best,
Roger

 

[El Folo]

Well...what's happening in it?

 

[Handley_Page]

Home to where?
and is it to have a fairly accurate historical background ?

 

[Boxlicker101]

I'm looking for help with my first writing that I hope to submit to literotica. It is a story based on the crusades. But I'm having difficulty on how to wrap up the story, so I am a little stuck. It is, I think, 85 percent done. The premise I think is solid. I just need to bring it home.

Can anyone offer advice on where I should turn?

All the best,
Roger

There is no other place so like this place, so this must be the place.

There is no way to make a suggestion with so little info. I f the protag is a warrior, he mught get killed or return home or turn traitor or almost anything. If it is his lady back home, she might be unfaithful or welcome him back. If this is a woman he has met, he might leave her or marry her and forsake his lady or ladies back home.

These possibilities would apply whether you are writing about Christians or Muslims.

 

[PennLady]

I'm looking for help with my first writing that I hope to submit to literotica. It is a story based on the crusades. But I'm having difficulty on how to wrap up the story, so I am a little stuck. It is, I think, 85 percent done. The premise I think is solid. I just need to bring it home.

Can anyone offer advice on where I should turn?

All the best,
Roger

I believe you also posted this on the Editor's Forum, which was probably a good idea, because it sounds like what you need is an editor or beta reader. As others have said, with so little information on the story, we can't help you here. Good luck, though.

Also, do you have a way you'd like to end it? If so, is it consistent with what you've done, and historically accurate, or at least plausible?