Writing a new series!

[TheImaginator]

This is my first go-around with erotic fiction. Let me know what you think, gotten some good feedback but don't be afraid to be honest.

http://www.literotica.com/s/lauras-sleepless-night-ch-01

 

[PennLady]

I read this and I'm not quite sure what to make of Cassandra. Is she gay or isn't she? Because it seems like she's just kind of playing at it.

 

[TE999]

This is my first go-around with erotic fiction. Let me know what you think, gotten some good feedback but don't be afraid to be honest.

http://www.literotica.com/s/lauras-sleepless-night-ch-01

This request may be better served in the Story Discussion Circle Forum.

 

[sr71plt]

Or on the Story Feedback board.

 

[TheImaginator]

Cassandra is supposed to be bi-sexual. Character development is something I do need to work on, I think. This is my first go at writing fiction.

I'll move it to the appropriate forum! Thanks.