Crap, do I understand that!
After dragging major ass on my last chapter, I let the DH read it. He always says, "That's great!". But I know he's just hoping to get laid, so I have to cross-examine him like fucking McCarthy to get to the truth, and, after I threatened with bamboo shoots, he finally confessed that the last scene was a load of horseshit. Damn. So I threw that out and wrote a new scene, one with sex in it, and he said, "That's great! Can we screw now?"
So I've run it by GQ (Great Quibbler) and now I'm supposed to be submitting it instead of fucking around on the BB.
Typical.
Serenissima Syd, I already gave Ch 11 a plug on my "Embarras de Richesse" thread on SF, so submit the story. The last scene is good; while DH may be after your delectable body (and I wish him the best of luck), the chapter is good stuff. So publish it.
As for me, I have to start Ch 4 of The Story. Perhaps RL will give me an excuse not to write--like our offices are moving day after tomorrow.